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This book is quite good [Thinking] Then I read the author's words. This book will either have a single female protagonist or at most two female protagonists. There is nothing to say. Definitely Zero and Hui are the most suitable ones. Jiangnan has clearly said that he likes Lu Mingfei. Of course, if we go by experience and thoughts, Hui is definitely more suitable to be his sister.

It can be said to be a great article, with unique character creation. In this way, it doesn't actually matter who the heroine is. It looks very comfortable (really, I wrote it in my imagination). Although there is no rating now, it will definitely be seen by more people in the future. I am really surprised to see such a dragon family in 25 years. Come on, teacher, and look forward to the day of completion [Salute]

It's pretty good, well written, with a Jiangnan flavor, I hope it's not a harem story. . .

The writing is quite good, I found the seedlings (?) Since the book reviews are all discussing the heroine, I will also express some of my own opinions. If it is based on the author's idea, that is, it is centered on Zero and E, I think if we follow the plot, Zero will be more suitable as the heroine (?) Because Ming Fei in this book is not that bad, and the senior sister does not rescue Ming Fei like a ray of light. It is not obvious that Ming Fei will like the senior sister. In that case, the first emotional foundation of Ming Fei and Eri is actually not there (the part about floating from the sea). In other words, if there was no deliberate act like the Little Devil's Tokyo Love Story, and Eri didn't die in Benijing (the author probably wouldn't have written it this way), then it would be difficult for the two to really reach the stage of being a couple () It is more likely that, as book friends said, Eri would be a sister and a good friend, so that the plot would be more natural. As for Ling, Jiang Nan said before that Ling likes Lu Mingfei, so I was thinking, in this book, Mingfei did not fall in love with his senior sister, and learned to observe, understand and consider people from his mother. Could Mingfei, who is loved by his mother and not so bad, really not be able to see Ling's feelings for him? It's not like in the original work, where everyone thinks he's not good enough for everyone. Although it is estimated that it will only be one year from the beginning of school to the third line of the dragon in this book, it is enough to change a lot of things. I can only say that the plot designed by the author is very good, and he also laid a lot of foreshadowings. Mingfei has many good friends and a mother who truly loves him and accompanies him. It would not be good if it were like the original work () I hope the author can continue writing [Adoration] btw it doesn't seem to be AI at the moment, it's so rare () and will the author change it to other official configurations (?) Personally, I hope not to change it, but it still depends on what the author likes.

It has a hint of Jiangnan flavor and also has its own unique writing style. It is not as mindless and cool as ordinary Longzu essays, but has a kind of delicacy and comfort that belongs to the author alone. Overall, the writing is very good and I feel comfortable reading it [laughing][laughing][laughing]

I like it so much! But if it's CP, I hope it's not Hui. What she likes is Sakura, not Lu Mingfei. It's best not to have CP. I really can't accept Xiaofei being with someone she doesn't love in the original T^T

The writing is really good. I hope the little monster is also a female protagonist. It has two female protagonists. The little monster and Zero will be great.

It looks good, come on author(ง •̀_•́)ง

Now that I see it, I really feel that it is better to let Zero be the single heroine and Huibao be the younger sister. There is no need to chase her and Mingfei together.

The content is very good, I love watching it, I love it, I love it, I love it, I love it!

It's a very interesting fanfic, and I have the desire to read it again.

The logic is clear and the main line can be seen

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Very beautiful, very beautiful

Very good, very exciting!

It's pretty good, why is it rated so low?

Nice looking, but why is the rating so low?

The text is quite delicate, the stream of consciousness is well written, the atmosphere is on point, the plot is also very thoughtful, the logic is smooth, and I will give it a five-star rating.

The writing is good, the ideas are novel, and the plot is slow. If you prefer a quick read, I suggest you jump ahead and read it.

The logic is very clear and nice to look at.

Nice! I feel like the plot is exciting and the writing is also very good.

It looks good. At present, the cp should be Lu Ling, right? Looking forward to the follow-up [please update]