The Way Big Sister Pretends to Be Good Makes Me Want to Ruin Her

The writing is very good, and it was outstanding until Chapter 83. The characters are very three-dimensional, and the protagonist is very charming. I especially like the mentality of the player. When I saw the candidate for parliament mentioned that illegitimate children should be given inheritance rights, I was traumatized. Maybe the author wanted to write about the situation of children born out of wedlock, and did not mention mistresses and illegitimate children. But when I read it, I suddenly thought of reality, and it was very uncomfortable. And from the player's style, I actually prefer girls, but sometimes they are very cute. The introduction can actually be patched. I hope I can see later that this law has restrictions, otherwise it would be really uncomfortable to distinguish between mistresses and children born out of wedlock without a certificate. However, the protagonist has always been a player with a really good mentality. It's very enjoyable to watch. I don't want to watch the kind of immersive or even sacrificial strategy. It still feels like this little emperor.

This book is really super, super, super good to read... The author said it is difficult to write, but the more difficult it is to write, the more beautiful it is!! The timeline and character lines are complicated but they are all very well written!!! The emotions of each character are well developed. The heroine herself is also well portrayed, and you can feel it when reading the book. Her insignificant family background and experience have made her grow into a person who keeps to herself and lives alone, but with time and accumulation, she is also growing. You can really feel that Miaomiao is getting better and better from the game to real life. And we, Miaomiao, are originally a treasure!! Maybe it's just that it's so good to see the end and I'm still thinking about it deeply...😢😢

I originally thought it was just a simple article about a heartthrob hero, just to kill some time. The result is not only a captivating writing, but also a group portrait and the self-growth of the heroine. The heroine has a very strong self-awareness. When the comment section begins to feel sorry for the "good" man created by the author (actually shaped by the author's soul charm), the heroine will break through this scene of kidnapping and psychological oppression and regain her autonomy. And it got really confusing later on, and he didn't say that he was a very good man, which meant that the heroine would definitely accept him. Moreover, the author likes to use foreshadowing, and the paragraph commentary will make you excited and want to scold a certain character, but then it will come back to you in a clever way, from an angle you never thought of. There are also 🈶🈶🈶 relatively exciting plots in it. It also intersperses the personal growth of the heroine. The author must be a very warm person. She also writes about her native family, exclusion and injustice, but she can always detect the other side of human nature and how to reconcile with her own shortcomings and face the choices and opportunities in life and work. The author has a pair of eyes that are good at detecting, a soft heart that is good at empathy, and a clear and independent compassion. The most important thing is that her pen is like the magic pen of Ma Liang to build a magnificent and wonderful world that can immerse you in it. The thinking is clear and logical, the writing is moving, and it is absolutely exquisite.

It's still very good-looking. I like the younger brother's line the most. Each of the male protagonists has been quite successful. In comparison, the heroine's character is average It feels a bit unfinished. The ending is that the consciousness in the game is brought into reality. It would be better for the game to directly invade reality or integrate the game with reality. The last few male protagonists androids are looking for jobs in real life [what][what][what]

The first half of this article had a relaxed and joyful atmosphere, but when I read the second half, I burst into tears. I originally just wanted to find a cool article about NP heroes competing in the Shura field, but this coincided with the author's original intention. At first, because the subject matter was relatively unfamiliar, I was a little bit into it. As I continued reading, I found that its setting was particularly gripping, and the plot logic and foreshadowing were all self-consistent. Its charm lies not only in the brilliant character settings, but also in the strong sense of reality of the characters. Almost every male protagonist's confession scene made me cry, and I could truly feel their delicate and deep love. After reading the ending, I even had the illusion that these male protagonists seemed to be the lives created by Z in the game. They were not just fictional characters on paper, but living people who came to reality with the female protagonist. The values ​​conveyed in the book are also particularly touching: as long as the emotions we perceive are real, then we are real, and the world we live in is real to us. Finally, I would like to write to the author: At the end of the article, you said that you once wanted to give up this work. I am very fortunate to have the company of readers to support you to finish writing. Although time and space have separated me, I have not been able to be the force that encouraged you in the first place, but I am extremely grateful to be able to read this story, and I am honored to be your reader. I hope you don't have to be bothered by criticism from the outside world. Just like the heroine in your novel, you are dazzling enough and can just be yourself.

The writing, emotional drama, and character creation are really good. When I saw Chapter 93, only five of the eight male guests appeared. Huo had a lot of plots, followed by Lao Duan and Xiao Duan, and the other two had almost no scenes. I like my uncle and nephew very much, but I really annoy him. As for why I bother Huo? Because he had a good impression on her when they first met, and he was the son of his father who loved his wife and didn't want her to suffer the pain of pregnancy. Moreover, he is very possessive and not sweet-mouthed. He will only do crazy things with a sullen face to hinder the heroine, causing others to isolate the heroine, causing the heroine to fail to dance the dance she prepared so carefully, ruining the heroine's wedding, and shooting the heroine's man and then the heroine. There is simply no end to his annoying behavior. . But I don't know why he is so popular. I often see many people feeling sorry for him in the comment area. .

1. It's hard to believe that a fast-traveling online novel can give me some inspiration for my outlook on life (maybe the heroine's personality and living conditions are similar to mine, so I feel more connected). Plq said that the three views are not correct. How can everyone have the same views? ; 2. Each of the ten men can be written so fully, including the whitewashing of the characters, which is very natural (dbq is a bit of a spoiler); 3. At first, I was worried that there were too many people and it would be confusing, but it is really very clear; 4. There are every kind of paro, which is very suitable for my xp; 5. Teacher nb!

[Contains spoilers! Don't click if you mind] It's pretty good. It's the first time I've read an article with this setting. There are two lines of reality and games intertwined with each other. The heroine learns and grows in both lines, gradually becomes independent and unties her knot, and eventually becomes a better herself. In reality, the heroine was stabbed in the back first, but then she met very good people, became cheerful, and her life got better and better. It was quite touching, because I am not a very expressive person, and I also hope to meet such a group of friends. In the game world, because the heroine really just treats them as a game, she will coax you when she is happy, but she is too lazy to pretend when she is unhappy. The heroine also had a great time. She reported any grudges on the spot. At worst, she would load the game and restart the game. She would never wrong herself. And finally hehe with the male protagonist of the game! Very good, very good. In fact, I originally thought that the two people in the real world would also accept it🤭 Record the male protagonists: Huo Xizhou, Duan Jinxing, Duan Rongyu, Feng Yi, Shen Yu, Si Ke, K. I don't have much feelings for Shen Yu, there aren't many scenes, and the emotional line is quite abrupt. The same goes for Feng Yi, because I don't understand Stockholm Syndrome very well, but the setting is quite touching, and the runes all over the body~Black-skinned Da Nais Hasha~ My favorites are Duan Rongyu and K. I can't help but like this young daddy. His ability to deal with problems is very reassuring😳 Then there is Duan Jinxing, his story line is very complete, and he has a little bit of a Möbius strip feeling with the heroine. A crazy brother like Huo Xizhou is not very good at it, but he loves the heroine deeply.

It's a good book. At first, people kept trying to persuade me to leave this book because of the name on the cover. I thought it was a dog-blooded boss, but I didn't expect the content to be completely different. It can be archived, similar to a simulator. The cover and name are very misleading, but the content is really good. I think this type of book will also be liked by people next door, but I hate my brother very much. I really hate it, even if I have my own reasons, I hate it. Overall, I recommend it ~ [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

The teacher's writing style and writing skills are really good, the characters are really three-dimensional, and the omnivores are fearless (a little gb). I personally feel that there are a few small flaws: Z's emotional change in Meow Meow is a little hasty, but it does not affect my perception. I really like the rhythm of the teacher's writing. Every time I see the callback, I feel super happy. The story line of the full text is also very smooth. There are six weeks of game lines interspersed with reality lines. The teacher's ideas are really clear. I will always follow the teacher!!! No one dislikes Lian Xingmiao! No one can refuse Lian Xingmiao!