Science and Technology***********

It's not bad, but in this system, tasks are mandatory, and failure is punished. This is not good, because the heroine is a technical talent. If she needs to participate in any long-term work tasks, the system will issue tasks that need to be completed as soon as possible. Is the national task more important or the system task more important? In addition, the original characters on the protagonist's side do not need to be whitewashed and weakened too much. For example, Yi Zhonghai becomes the long-lost uncle of the protagonist in it, and then he immediately starts to be scolded and bullied by the Jia family and just hides without fighting back. His own scheming methods seem to evaporate overnight.

From a very novel perspective, Yi Zhonghai is mostly a villain in fan fiction. Looking at it from another angle, he should be a person who feels inferior to his lack of offspring. Jia Zhang's son is obviously an apprentice, but because he has no offspring, such a person who is protected by him dares to scold him in front of him. Such an insincere apprentice, no one will sincerely teach him.

I'm here to rate myself, hahahaha. Actually, it shouldn't be that good. After all, it's the first book, but the momentum cannot be lost [laughing]

Excessive description of expressions and inner activities is counterproductive. Moisturizing without sound is the way to go. Excessive exaggeration makes it appear that there is no priority. Click until you reach it, and leaving it appropriately blank is more powerful.

I'm used to good reviews, and those who have listened to the book said they don't like too wordy descriptions, but of course the writing style is very good.

I like this genre very much. I was a little uncomfortable at first. There were too many adjectives and it felt like AI. It was a bit awkward especially when listening to the novel. It will get better later. Keep up the good work.

The beginning is very interesting. I like the type of technological powerhouse. I hope it doesn't collapse later. I can't wait for the follow-up. Getting better!

I like this kind of subject matter very much. I hope the author will continue to update and support you!