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The plot and competition system are quite thoughtful. Although most of the words in the first part are based on netizens' reactions, the proportion in the second part is much lower, which can be regarded as a great improvement in the reading experience. The writing is average, and some situations or moods or team members' dependence are repeated too many times, but you can feel that the author is trying to improve. Overall, it is readable.

Well written, keep up the good work [Like]

Beautiful, interesting, and interesting.

Come on come on come on come on

I think it's okay. Isn't this the case with all cool articles? The system gave him all his skills at once. That's good too. You don't have to wait until later to become an immortal.

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