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Regarding the argument that this book is a nanny novel, I can only say that it is true that the protagonist will interact closely with the protagonist group. After all, this is a fan novel. A large part of the purpose of writing this book is also out of the feelings for the protagonist group of the original work and the regrets about the various endings in the book. If you don't write about interactions with the original characters, then you might as well write something original. But I will continue to reduce the importance of the three protagonists later on. As for how to reduce it, I just have an idea now and will talk about it after writing it.

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I stayed up late and read it in one sitting. It was really well written for me. Then I wrote this comment to express my opinion. 1: I personally prefer to follow the original plot, and I can add some original plots. I feel that the fairy plot this time is not very outstanding, and the description of the villain is a little over the top. I don't like it personally, so I think I can reduce the length of some original plots. 2: I am more concerned about the issue of female protagonists. I personally prefer multiple female protagonists, like Hermione and Fleur, but after all, it is difficult to write and it tests the writing skills, so I would like to ask the author what his thoughts are [eating melon] PS: personal opinion

I like Hermione, at least you described Hermione as not being so stupid

I didn't see much, but the front attracted me. After making a wish, what I saw was that there was no female protagonist, or there was only one female protagonist, or there were multiple female protagonists, so I was really going to die.

Yes, it's quite attractive, the logic is clear and coherent, and I can read it. I just need to read more, it's a bit short, so come on, author!

Not bad, very creative [smile] Is there a female protagonist?

Smooth and comfortable writing

Haokan Haokan or Haokan

Very good looking

It's good to watch, the plot is good

Strengthen the protagonist to look better. Avada is not even proficient in Kedavra.

It's very beautiful. I'm really looking forward to the time when the protagonist fakes his death later.

I'm very curious about whether the protagonist has cp, and I hope it doesn't have cp. So, the author, does the protagonist have cp?

It feels pretty good 😄

It looks really good.

It's the best among the fans, not bad.

Come on, it's really beautiful

Okay, I just watched it all night

The writing is a bit lacking, but the content is okay. The pace is still a bit fast.

I finally look like a normal person [laughing][laughing][laughing]

I like this setting very much. The protagonist is super strong.

The style is special, relatively novel, and the look and feel is good. Five stars encourage it.

Super pretty ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh

I particularly like the author's rhythm, especially the entry point of the plot. I have read so many HP fanfics since I was in first grade. This one is very novel.

The protagonist is very strong, but still silent

Come on author, it looks good, coherent, lacks some sunny details, and feels like the theme is dark.