I Pretended to Be the Young Master's Lover, and We Built a Business Empire?

I give the early plot 10 points, it's awesome, it has a strong ability to mobilize emotions, and the plot advancement is very natural, and the author is obviously experienced. If you keep writing at this quality, it will definitely get a score of 9 or above, and the supporting characters are also very good. Author brother, are you serious? You write about a girlfriend, confess her love and reject her, and then she gets into a car accident immediately after she rejects her love. She is still in a vegetative state and still needs company. Why don't you put this aside and make a Korean drama? In the next episode, is it time to have amnesia and cancer? Pei Fanfan's childhood sweetheart suddenly appears and competes with you [smile]

It's super good-looking. The growth of the rich second generation and the growth of the protagonist are very interesting. I hope that the male protagonist's role as CEO, choices and responsibilities can be highlighted. These pictures seem to want to start the emotional line. Is it too fast to start writing the emotional line after just experiencing an event? I hope to write about the events, difficulties, their solutions, and how the rich second generation's family gives them advantages, or whether they can learn anything from their family members to grow. I feel that by introducing the project to other rich second generations, the rich first generation opened up the follow-up pattern of the entire book, and it will not open up too much. Looking forward to the subsequent development of the business empire, the departments and brands founded by the second generation of the rich, and the role of the male protagonist as CEO [Like] [Like]

There is a feeling like watching Mr. Pei before. It is very novel and very good. Although the pace is a bit fast, the refreshing points are well grasped and there will be no dull experience. As a refreshing novel, this book can be said to be excellent so far. Keep updating well, keep up the good work.

After reading a few chapters, I found it suitable to be made into a short play [Like][Like][Like][Like]

Indeed, some readers who watch may feel the enthusiasm of working together and the manifestation of dreams in their hearts. As the novel says, you don't have dreams, you just lack a platform to realize your dreams. For example, some work ideas and strong creativity, how many days and nights are needed to complete one thing? How many people's efforts are needed? Although ideas, dreams and work cannot be combined, life cannot be interfered with by restrictions. Although the reality is somewhat inaccessible, it does not mean that there are no things in the plot. It is just a small number of people. The author's imagination including practical ability should be quite high. Come on, it is very interesting [Like][Like][Like]

The purpose of business is to make money, and it is right for businessmen to pursue maximizing profits, but we are human beings first! Why are laws and regulations issued to restrict businessmen? It's because businessmen have sharp blades in their hands. When they are human beings, the sharp blades in their hands are used to cut mountains and stones for them to move forward, and also so that those who come after them don't have to work so hard and can continue to get help from those who come after them and never stop walking! If they are demons, then they will stop on the road and constantly attack the newcomers. The result is that when the newcomers are all gone, they will also die on the road! Because the sharp blade in their hands is broken, they have no source of sharp blades!

8 Points, the early plot is great, interesting, touching, and passionate! Let the "first generation" rich second generation struggle out of the quagmire, the process is detailed and the emotions are delicate. However, after the middle and late group of veterans began to expand their territories around the world, they can clearly feel that the author's writing power is insufficient, the description is too scattered, and cannot mobilize the readers' emotions. The description of future technology lacks a sense of shock, and it seems too thin to solve problems only with business thinking. The growth of the characters themselves and the transformation of their thoughts are not smooth enough. Although it still adheres to the positive direction of universal values, some plots still seem "overbearing" and make people worry that the brave dragon slayer will eventually become an evil dragon. However, overall it is a relatively good book, and it can be regarded as a bright work among anti-capital novels; recommended during the book shortage period.

Three and a half stars, I'll see if I can get extra points later. How should I put it, the poisonous point is that the heroine is the first pot of gold at the beginning. I think the shortcoming is that there is not much writing in the process. For example, during the first e-sports cultural festival, the middle process was summarized in one paragraph. I thought it was the climax and the end of the matter? It's still a bit cool, everything happens so fast 🤔, I immediately counterattack when I'm frustrated, it's quite cool, it's quite exciting to watch, I watched the update in one go. That's it, the author says this is the first book, go for it!

There are a few points in this book that may seem a bit ridiculous to an unprofessional person like me, but I admire the author very much. He can write so many aspects of things so that I can understand them clearly. When writing about this field, he will write relevant materials and professional terms. This is what I admire. Furthermore, this book, from an absurd beginning to the present, is really good, so I give him five stars. This is one of the few books I have reviewed. I hope the author can continue writing, come on.

After reading dozens of chapters today, an idea suddenly popped into my head (ㆆᴗㆆ)💡 The CEOs of each company jointly set up training courses for successors. The successors were too playful and did not like learning. The bosses found a person who would study with the prince, who became both a teacher and a friend to each successor. The bosses then invited professors in various fields to teach them.