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The writing was okay. I was attracted by the name and the two heroines. It turned out that the protagonist's ability has nothing to do with painting. It's just that the protagonist likes to draw. Then a poisonous point for me was that the memory of the protagonist was erased, which made me lose most of my interest in an instant. Of course, this may be a plus point for others. Everyone has their own hobbies and opinions, so in general you can check it out.

Three Golden Chapters. Very clever idea, straight to the point design. First of all, the nature of time travel and the price paid by the author are explained. The protagonist exchanges the memory of knowing the plot for the monster physique and devil fruit in the One Piece world. This point is well designed, not hidden, so that readers can know the essence of the protagonist as soon as they get started. The second is the plot design of the opening. There is no cliched way of forming four brothers with Luffy, or meeting Luffy by chance with ulterior motives, but through the guidance of fate, this way of writing allows the two to meet. This makes it more acceptable to readers in terms of perception, and the image of the protagonist has not turned into a wretched villain, which is very similar to the original One Piece. Then there are some clever little designs. Including the protagonist's painter killer character and the succubus argali friend, it will make people feel bright and smile at the same time. It's no longer about pirates massacring villages and blood feuds. It's no longer about forcing oneself to rely on the main plot and arguing that one can't change it. This book is very candid and candid. It explains everything at the beginning and then begins to tell its own story. Clean, refreshing, and principled, people have established it. Later, it depends on whether it is written according to the original work and how good the author's writing style is. A large part of the reason for the low score is lack of innovation. But as far as the beginning is concerned, it's full marks. More comments will be given after reading. Around chapter 65, it seems that some chapters have been swallowed. There is no explanation of Franky's plot, and Bailey's box suddenly appears and disappears inexplicably. I hope the author will check it carefully.

Overall review: It's pretty good, I personally think it's good. 1. What the protagonist loses is the plot memory of One Piece, not all the memories of his previous life. The progress of the two female protagonists is very slow 3. Along with the boat, the description of the group portraits is pretty good, and there are self-created characters (together with the boat)

Personally speaking, because I basically code after get off work at night, sometimes I am not clear-headed and will make some mistakes. I hope everyone can point them out. There are also some so-called poisonous points. I can only say that everyone has their own love for radish and cabbage. I hope everyone can read the book they like. [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

I particularly like the protagonist, he makes me feel very cool and the character is very vivid.

Not bad, as long as you accept these two poisonous points, you can continue reading. 1. Deletion of memory at the beginning 2. In the early stage of the journal, the author must have found the rhythm by the time he writes in the Capital of Seven Waters, and the more he writes, the better.

Very good article, it would be nice if there was more love

The writing is very good. I thought the protagonist's ability was related to painting. I guessed wrong. I would like to give the author an opinion. A partner is a partner. CP feels that it is better not to write about the people on the ship.

Is it completely broken now?

Come on, author, you must persevere

Okay, I see it's okay now, the flaws don't cover up the flaws The author writes very well, especially the original daily life of the Straw Hat Boat. Don't stop updating. The relationship between Nami and Robin is also gradual and not abrupt at all. I am very happy to read it. I rewarded it and I am happy to read it. I will give you a big ദ്ദി˶ｰ̀֊ｰ́ )✧

Very pretty, not bad

Very good, the daily interactions between everyone are very interesting and warm

It's passable in terms of following the boat flow. I hope there will be a copy of the plot designed by the author himself.

@ Keppi and Momonosuke will die, and the lamb at the beginning will not be harvested. If Momonosuke does not die, Keppi will have to die [Thinking]

Okay, very beautiful

Not bad, not obtrusive

Very good and highly recommended.

Worth a look, recommended, recommended

Why hasn't it been updated for so long?

Well, overall the writing is pretty good.

It's very good-looking. The only thing that's interesting is the boat flow. The characters haven't been magically changed. It's good.

The setting is very novel, the descriptions of battles and daily life are very vivid, and overall it suits my taste.

It looks good so far. The plot of adding partners has also been simplified. I think it is good. Otherwise, the progress of the original work would seem too tiring. Although the plot has been slightly modified, I think it is acceptable.

It can be regarded as a diary. In this article, I haven't seen any female protagonists for the time being. There is basically no emotional line. There are only friendships between partners. It can be read as a diary of the Straw Hats.

Floss's can't be Franky, right?

It's pretty good to watch, but the main character has to decide whether to accept the lamb or not. The emotional line has been written and it feels inappropriate to not accept it [face-covering] [face-covering]

Although the writing is very nice, you all know it's holiday, why don't you write more [smile][smile]

It's pretty good, I have the desire to read it [Like][Like][Like][Please update]

It's okay, but it's a pity that it's with the boat.