Collapse of Iron**********

It's very interesting. The important thing is that the protagonist has strong offensive power and can quickly acquire girls. Also, the author didn't have Lily in the harem. This is very important. The author likes to write some marginal lilies. The previous ones written by Kerudra and Haiseyin were a bit like lilies, but later I found out that they were not. However, the newly updated star here is a bit like lilies. I can still accept it for now. I feel that this is a common problem among Mi family fan authors. I will post the original text for you to avoid lightning for those who can't accept it. "Don't be like this, stay away from me, Mr. Fang Rui, I'm afraid Miss Liuying will misunderstand." Xing quickly distanced himself and took advantage of the situation to hold Liu Ying's little hand. "Miss Liuying, in fact, the story of this baseball hero fighting against the Doomsday Beast less than 12 hours after he was born..." Liu Ying's face turned red and she leaned close to Xing. "Xing... Mr. Fang Rui is a good person. Mr. Elio said that we should try our best to help him..."

The protagonist has the kindness that most protagonists have, and the weird personality that most fan fiction characters have, not treating ordinary people as human beings and working hard in a different dimension in reality. After all, this book is in Tomato. It doesn't feel very good, but I can still read it. Don't read this book with your head in mind. The rest is pretty good compared to other Bengtie novels. If you want to kill time, this book is fine, but if you want to read high-quality products, this book won't [Chigua]

It's so good, but the author is easy to bully and can tease

All I can say is that it's great, I love reading it [laughing], it's so awesome, I recommend reading it early. I feel that there is an 80% chance that this book will be blocked. There are so many books. Although there are some flaws, it's still very readable overall. I rarely give five stars. Most of the book reviews on my homepage are negative reviews. I gave this book a five-star rating today [laughing]

Although the characters may be partially OOC, overall the plot is compact, the climax connects naturally to daily life, and it is relaxed and joyful enough. The only shortcoming may be that the emotional line is a bit abrupt. All in all, the five stars are well deserved.

Not bad, at least the character design is not too badly broken, and the design is quite reasonable, but the number of words is a bit short. I hope the author can continue to maintain this quality.

The details are well and delicately drawn, the author's writing style is also great, the plot is not procrastinating, and there are no knives (I'm sure, highly recommended)

It's Lord Jianqi. He's wrong from beginning to end. It makes me suffer from obsessive-compulsive disorder. The author has changed it, five-star praise [like]

It's still pretty good-looking, personally. Stop asking for praise for your work! If you update more, you will naturally get some good reviews, so don't pretend to work hard. Hurry up and give me all your inventory (drain the work ing)

It's okay. I'll see if Lao Mi gets stabbed in the back later. But the current plot is still okay.

Good looking. Love to see more.

Start the fermented bean curd and blueberry cake, I am the succubus of Onfalos [cool]

Although there are some problems with the writing, it is normal, but the writing is good. Good luck to the author.

It looks good, I love watching it, and I want to watch it again

Nice! Five stars for you [Thinking]

The book is very good, but the quantity is a bit small Apart from the few words, there are basically no shortcomings (so sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!)

It's very interesting, good luck to the author!

What else is there to say, brother?

First give a five-star praise [send heartfelt]

Come on, big brother who writes code

It's so pretty, let me grab it

Good looking, good luck to the author I just discovered that there is a follow-up review, although I don't know what it's for…

Feeling pretty good

Broken Halberd and Wine Poem.

It looks good, I love watching it, and I still want to watch it [laughs evilly]

Average, pretty cool

Very very beautiful!

Broken Halberd Bar Ninety Emperor Chapter

Great, it's the Queen, we are saved

Come on, big brother who likes to smelt metals