Comprehensive Comic: Starting a Business from a Pirate

I see kindness and justice in the protagonist. He is obviously a person from the Gu world. In order to save slaves, he gives up his own goals and gives up a lot of devil fruits that may become immortal cups. Looking at the Gu world from ancient times to the present, no one can do it. He is a saint and the sun!

The author adds a setting: The world of Piotian Yuan belongs to Warhammer, which is not only conscious but also very reasonable.

I can recite poems and write ancestral biographies. The setting is novel. Each world has its own destiny. Even if the devil from outside the world comes, it will be affected. The Gu world is also well written. I interacted with Genzi. This clip is average, but I wrote the characteristics of Genzi's running, and then I wrote around myself. Generally speaking, it is okay. The writing is not the best, but it is equivalent to a high-level one.

Well, the author defaults to the fact that the world he writes about needs no introduction, and readers have already seen it.

It's too early to come into contact with an advanced world like Warhammer

Brothers who see the soul passing through don't need to run, they will return to their original bodies later (Chapter 47) Except for the plot development, which is a bit made in heaven, there are no other big problems. Of course, what I am talking about is that there are no big problems in the chapters I have seen so far.

Suddenly I thought that if I obtained the Soul Soul Fruit and then integrated the soul fragments into the refined Gu worm, could the Gu worm regain the ability to absorb the vitality of the world? This way, those Gu insect skills can be used by others without the need for real energy, so Yamato and the others can use them.

Each copy was a bit too short, and the highlights were not fully written out. Fortunately, the copy finally grew in length, with 12,000 words updated six times a day. This amount of updates can definitely take a week or two for each copy.

At first I was fooled by the name, but upon closer inspection it looks pretty good. Immortal Lord

It looks good. It would be better if the protagonist could use more killer moves regarding the Gu world.

The content is okay, I think it's quite interesting, and the author updates it quickly. The rest of it was too bland, nothing exciting, in short it just felt boring.

This book is quite good. There are only some parts that I can only skip because I haven't read it. There are no other problems. And there are not many people giving low marks in the ratings. Why is there no rating?

End Warhammer quickly

The pirate dungeon is a bit long. When will a new dungeon be opened?

The writing is very good, keep up the good work

Has the author been screwed by the platform? The rating is so low, and the comment was deleted [what]

Six chapters a day, you are my god

Beautiful, very beautiful.

It's okay. I'd like to support it with 5 stars. I hope the author can stop being a eunuch and it would be better if it doesn't end badly.

At least it's pretty good among most Gu fanfics.

Let me see what the hell it is? Really good.

Although the writing is good, the books are good, and the people are good,

It looks pretty good so far

See it's not bad now

The most comfortable episode in Warhammer

Hee hee, [smile] you have to live.

It can be written, well, in my opinion

Can the author add some tokusatsu dramas and Chinese comic worlds?

Let's write some source material. I don't know what the timeline is now.

Looks good🤩, why do you need to enter at least 5 characters (๑•̌.•̑๑)ˀ̣ˀ̣,