[Respect the plot] [Single female protagonist + multiple female characters] [Goldfinger is weak]
Lin Youde, the runner-up in the National Martial Arts Competition, accidentally traveled to the world of "Attack on Titan" and became Lind Leon, the son of a retired Royal Capital noble councilor. Knowing the plot, he decided to join the 104th Southern Training Corps in order to avoid Zachary's toy chair.
"What's your name?"
"Lind Lyon!"
"Why are you here?"
"In order to restore the glory of my father's generation, I will once again become the hand of the king!"
Reiner looked at Linde running on the field and said to Arnie beside him: "Try to make contact. Even if he doesn't know anything, it may be useful in the future."
Reader comments
The writing is okay, but the steps are too big. You can feel that the author wants to write a three-dimensional person, but the ability is not enough, resulting in this nondescript. You can try to reduce some unnecessary descriptions of the protagonist. I feel it can be better.
After reading the comment section, I found that many people hated the male protagonist for eating Arnie, but in my opinion, Arnie's devilish behavior in the original novel is normal. Don't forget about Levi. Anyway, I felt that it was quite enjoyable to watch. Some people in the comment section are either small heads controlling big heads, or they haven't watched the whole giant. It's just a cloud.
To be honest, I only know a little about this anime and have watched clips. However, the author's previous writing is also very good. Some of the detailed descriptions and plot advancement are remarkable. The problem is that I am a bit confused when watching this system. Although the following I seem to understand that it was my future self who helped me. This is probably the case for my current self. The only regrettable thing is that after seeing the male protagonist eating the heroine, to be honest, I couldn't stand it anymore, so I just slowly kept reading the book, and I will read it again when the heroine is resurrected.
As long as you can get through the first 130 chapters, the author will be as if he has super evolved. His writing power will explode, and the following will be enough to rank among the top three giant novels on Tomato. It will not be boring, and there will not be a plot where a giant will not die for several chapters. The premise is that you have to get through the poison of the first 130 chapters [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]
Five star reasons
Advantages: The subject matter is novel, the story is continuous, there is a single female protagonist (new authors should still be supported), and it is full of suspense.
Weaknesses: Good ideas, lack of experience, unable to write what I want to express, emotional changes and the logic of the story need to be improved
After reading so many giant fanfics, this work is refreshing both in terms of character setting and plot direction. It can be said that it has escaped the ending of most works that makes people feel boring after reading dozens of chapters in a row and abandon the book. From the beginning, I felt that it was a repeat of the previous "I found a movie with a good setting on a whim" to "It's interesting and the plot is good", and then to "It can still be like this", which made me feel very rare. In particular, the plot setting in which the protagonist overthrows the royal government and then the military government is definitely a bold and key point that makes this work reborn. The emotional line between the protagonist and Arnie is the highlight of the entire novel. Watching this work makes me feel like I have returned to the indescribable mood I felt when I first saw the original comic of Giant when I was in junior high school.
I hope the author will update more and don't let the work end unfinished. The quality of the work is what motivates me to reward.
Chapter 32 is really good about Ani's hesitation at the entrance to the dungeon. This description is really good and Ani trusts the protagonist.
A rare Titan fic, well written.
It's pretty good. It's very well written in the giant fanfic.
Want to know if Ani is really dead [Shocked]
Well, I am very old and middle-aged, and I have an emotional view from the Department of Ancient Philosophy.
At this progress, it's not like Ani will return until he activates the Earth Ming. It's so slow😭😭😭
Writing about the heroine Ani, if you don't change the battle in the giant tree forest, you are still very courageous, and I wouldn't dare [facepalm]
Although the main plot is a bit confusing, the relationship between the protagonist and Ani is beautifully written.
In fact, I really want to read a book with a love story, such as the book "Ming Ju". From reading the review, it seems that the return will be delayed until later, which is a bit too long, but the writing is okay.
It's a very good giant fic, but you'd better fill in Arnie's role [smile]
Very good. It feels like a giant. The thinking is clear. The plot has ups and downs. Perfect.
There may be some small problems ahead.
The back is really good. Very attractive.
Beautiful, detailed text
I quite like the setting of the protagonist
You have worked very hard. I know that you are determined and never afraid of any difficulties and obstacles. Therefore, no matter what kind of dream you have, I believe you can achieve it.
The emotional line is really inexplicable, but the emotional drama is still there.
To be fair, the beginning was pretty good.
The first small incident proves that the protagonist has a brain and can think.
It's very interesting. It's very interesting in the new Giant book.
Good looking, more meows
I rather like this plot.
This book is very nice
Seeing that the author said that the heroine is not dead yet and can be resurrected, I reluctantly give the author some face and see what the author writes next.
There are very few interesting giant articles. Please give me a five-star support.
The plot is okay, although it looks a bit confusing but it is innovative.
The writing is okay, but the steps are too big. You can feel that the author wants to write a three-dimensional person, but the ability is not enough, resulting in this nondescript. You can try to reduce some unnecessary descriptions of the protagonist. I feel it can be better.
After reading the comment section, I found that many people hated the male protagonist for eating Arnie, but in my opinion, Arnie's devilish behavior in the original novel is normal. Don't forget about Levi. Anyway, I felt that it was quite enjoyable to watch. Some people in the comment section are either small heads controlling big heads, or they haven't watched the whole giant. It's just a cloud.
To be honest, I only know a little about this anime and have watched clips. However, the author's previous writing is also very good. Some of the detailed descriptions and plot advancement are remarkable. The problem is that I am a bit confused when watching this system. Although the following I seem to understand that it was my future self who helped me. This is probably the case for my current self. The only regrettable thing is that after seeing the male protagonist eating the heroine, to be honest, I couldn't stand it anymore, so I just slowly kept reading the book, and I will read it again when the heroine is resurrected.
As long as you can get through the first 130 chapters, the author will be as if he has super evolved. His writing power will explode, and the following will be enough to rank among the top three giant novels on Tomato. It will not be boring, and there will not be a plot where a giant will not die for several chapters. The premise is that you have to get through the poison of the first 130 chapters [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]
Five star reasons Advantages: The subject matter is novel, the story is continuous, there is a single female protagonist (new authors should still be supported), and it is full of suspense. Weaknesses: Good ideas, lack of experience, unable to write what I want to express, emotional changes and the logic of the story need to be improved
After reading so many giant fanfics, this work is refreshing both in terms of character setting and plot direction. It can be said that it has escaped the ending of most works that makes people feel boring after reading dozens of chapters in a row and abandon the book. From the beginning, I felt that it was a repeat of the previous "I found a movie with a good setting on a whim" to "It's interesting and the plot is good", and then to "It can still be like this", which made me feel very rare. In particular, the plot setting in which the protagonist overthrows the royal government and then the military government is definitely a bold and key point that makes this work reborn. The emotional line between the protagonist and Arnie is the highlight of the entire novel. Watching this work makes me feel like I have returned to the indescribable mood I felt when I first saw the original comic of Giant when I was in junior high school. I hope the author will update more and don't let the work end unfinished. The quality of the work is what motivates me to reward.
Chapter 32 is really good about Ani's hesitation at the entrance to the dungeon. This description is really good and Ani trusts the protagonist.
A rare Titan fic, well written.
It's pretty good. It's very well written in the giant fanfic. Want to know if Ani is really dead [Shocked]
Well, I am very old and middle-aged, and I have an emotional view from the Department of Ancient Philosophy.
At this progress, it's not like Ani will return until he activates the Earth Ming. It's so slow😭😭😭
Writing about the heroine Ani, if you don't change the battle in the giant tree forest, you are still very courageous, and I wouldn't dare [facepalm]
Although the main plot is a bit confusing, the relationship between the protagonist and Ani is beautifully written.
In fact, I really want to read a book with a love story, such as the book "Ming Ju". From reading the review, it seems that the return will be delayed until later, which is a bit too long, but the writing is okay.
It's a very good giant fic, but you'd better fill in Arnie's role [smile]
Very good. It feels like a giant. The thinking is clear. The plot has ups and downs. Perfect.
There may be some small problems ahead. The back is really good. Very attractive.
Beautiful, detailed text
I quite like the setting of the protagonist
You have worked very hard. I know that you are determined and never afraid of any difficulties and obstacles. Therefore, no matter what kind of dream you have, I believe you can achieve it.
The emotional line is really inexplicable, but the emotional drama is still there.
To be fair, the beginning was pretty good. The first small incident proves that the protagonist has a brain and can think.
It's very interesting. It's very interesting in the new Giant book.
Good looking, more meows
I rather like this plot.
This book is very nice
Seeing that the author said that the heroine is not dead yet and can be resurrected, I reluctantly give the author some face and see what the author writes next.
There are very few interesting giant articles. Please give me a five-star support.
The plot is okay, although it looks a bit confusing but it is innovative.
I feel like it was well written [shy]