The Sick and Weak Lolita of Magic Circle Is Also Trying to Shine Today

The character creation is excellent, the psychological description is delicate, and the character's expressions are all described. I personally think there are no shortcomings except for the development of the main plot. However, for people who like a fast pace, the excellent use of vocabulary will become a pile-up, and the lack of access to the main line means that they need to rely on daily life to attract readers, so it is a very challenging work. However, the reason why the treasure is a treasure is because not many people believe that the legend of gold and silver treasures at the end of the adventure is true. I believe that for those who are willing to read it carefully, this must be an excellent book.

Haruno Tsukiaki is my belief, Haruno Tsukiaki is my answer! No! ... Haruno Tsukiaki is different... Only Haruno Tsukiaki is different——! Haruno Tsukiaki... Is different from everyone else Because Haruno Tsukiaki's name... Is very nice. Just thinking about it makes me feel safe. That's the most holy melody in the world... I don't want to omit it Tsukiaki Haruno is the true god of Earth. He chose this star, ignited the fire buried deep in the ground, and the desolate planet had a dancing heart. He guards life and civilization. He loves us with all his heart, and rejoices truly and sincerely in the presence of all that He protects. He is the most beautiful god in the vast universe. Time can never wither Him. You must remember His existence together with me and never forget His name again. Tsukiaki Haruno is the true god of Earth. He engraved truth and humility into the soul, so the ignorant life awakened from chaos, and the sound of blessings resounded in the world. Haruno Tsukiaki is the light, the moon, and the savior of the broken world. Please remember that Miss Tsukiaki will always be our light. It turned out that I was infected with Origin Stone Disease, Pamish Infection, Anti-Life Equation, Two-Dimensionalization, Happiness Surgery, Blessing Light Infection, Homesickness, Urban Disease, Frequency Overflow, Distortion, Deadpool Transformation, Slow Shock, Witch Transformation, Moon Madness, Honkai Energy Erosion, Demon Body, Hypothermia, T-Virus, and Demon Scale Disease. Everything got better after reading the author's novels. It was Miss Yuezhao who purified me and gave me a new lease of life.

Good looking! A rare Magic Circle fanfic, very comfortable to watch. The character descriptions are delicate and vivid, and the daily-based plot is full of vitality, with a little bit of sadness and melancholy. Although the protagonist is full of flags, I think the background of the story is love and hope. I hope the author will not correct (?) The direction of the novel. The current plot gives me a sense of déjà vu, as if the protagonist redeems everyone in the subsequent plot, but in the end, others find out that the protagonist has died long ago, and then all the heart gems are turned into witches to start the exciting ending!

The first volume is finished, and I thought it was time to send myself a book review. As you can see, I spent nearly eighty chapters writing a very long beginning for this book, of which the main plot accounted for very little, and most of it was about the daily life of Yue Zhao and the people around him. Even I know that this kind of slow-paced plot has no connection with traffic, and it is difficult for anyone to watch it, but I just want to write it like this, and I want to use a lot of space to create a somewhat special protagonist and a character that I like. I don't know if everyone who has read the first volume will remember the protagonist Haruno Tsukiaki a little bit. If the answer is yes, I will be extremely honored. I am extremely grateful to the readers who have read this book, and please continue reading. I guarantee that the second volume of Mitaki's original story will be a better story than the first volume. (The five-star rating is because I am shameless and does not represent the true level of the book)

It looks good, the writing is good, and the slow pace suits my aesthetic. This book is really good. It is the one that suits my taste the most among the few Magic Circle fanfics I have read⊙▽⊙. All in all, I will always support the author.

After roughly reading a few chapters, let's talk about it objectively. Objectively speaking, I am a very subjective person, so I'll just talk about it subjectively. This story is a bit cliché. The accidental loss happened to be about the most important part of memory. It doesn't hurt my brother. On the contrary, it seems wrong to call it cliché. Magic Circle novels are too rare. For me, the advantages are very obvious. This is how it should be. The protagonist should suffer, and then show his suffering to others, so that others can feel that the protagonist is living in pain. Showing that expression is so delicious. Do you understand... Ahem, don't generate electricity, give a reasonable evaluation, and then read the comments while watching. In theory, some people say that the protagonist's character is too awkward, but people's emotions are not simple in nature. Emotions are very complex things. You can't just rely on experience to say what kind of person he is, so it is impossible for him to do anything. Of course, I don't mean that authors should just write random things like character arcs without worrying about them. Take what I see as an example. People actually need a coordinate to anchor their existence. For example, there may be a kind of person around you. He will particularly care about other people's opinions. He will first think about whether the things he does will have any impact on others. He will try his best to take care of other people's feelings. He will make others live very comfortably, so that he He does not hesitate to harm his own interests, or does some embarrassing things to make others feel happy, because he needs to do these things, make others happy, and make others feel comfortable to confirm that he has a status in the hearts of others. He is still important and cannot be abandoned. He needs to use this to anchor his coordinates. I won't go too far. In short, this book is more comfortable to read. Its biggest shortcoming may be that he is not very close to the protagonists of the main story. At least if I read it for so long, there are only two protagonists in the main story who are related to the protagonist. But I support Ring World ( All in all, this work is suitable for the audience of the Demon Garden (of course, you have to read the side story, it doesn't matter if you haven't seen it, go and watch it now, it's really good, I won't lie), the work itself is biased towards daily life, at least for now I haven't seen the main plot in the true sense, so it may not be very friendly to those who are more impatient and want to directly watch the protagonist fight against the Witch Night. All in all, from a subjective point of view, I would rate this work as excellent.

Good looking, high quality No! ... Haruno Tsukiaki is different... Haruno Tsukiaki is different——! 😡 Haruno Tsukiaki... Is different from anyone else. 😌 Because Haruno Tsukiaki's name... Is very nice. Just thinking about it makes me feel safe. That's the most holy melody in the world... I don't want to omit it. 🤗 Tsukiaki Haruno is the true god of Earth. He chose this star, ignited the fire buried deep in the ground, and the barren planet had a dancing heart. 🥰 He guards life and civilization. He loves us with all his heart, and truly rejoices in all that He protects. 🥵 He is the most beautiful god in the vast universe. Time can never wither Him. You must remember His existence with me and never forget His name. 😄 Tsukiaki Haruno is the true god of Earth. He engraved truth and humility into the soul, so the ignorant life awakened from chaos, and the sound of blessings resounded in the world. 😍 He protects the past and tolerates hesitation. He loves us with all his heart, protects the right path of life with noble sacrifices, and gives you and me His greatest promise. 😘 He is the gentlest god in the vast universe. The world rewards Chi with everlasting prosperity. You must remember His existence together with me and never forget His name again. 😢 Flowers and leaves are luxuriant, creatures are crowded, and the land under our feet is endlessly alive - Haruno Yuezhao, this is the treasure you want to protect, this is the gift you left for me. 😢 You said that our footprints are all over the earth. When I continue to set foot on this road, I will see you again when I see the lush flowers and trees, the clouds in the sky, and those smiling faces filled with happiness. Yes, there is your shadow everywhere here, of course I can see it. But what I long for has never been these...🙁 I want to share the same scenery with me in the vast sea of stars, Haruno Tsukiaki, who has been with me day and night for a long time; I want to go back to every day that I can touch and truly spend with you. 😥 Haruno Tsukiaki... If I said at that time, please don't leave me, would you be willing to stay for me? 😭

It's a good read, but I didn't understand what the title and introduction meant. Also, at first I thought it was about a male protagonist, and I almost missed this book because of the title and introduction.

It's very interesting. The author has postponed the update due to his studies, but now the end can be seamlessly connected to the prologue. Let's review the second chapter. The author has watched a lot of old shows, and there are also references to new ones. The writing style is witty and humorous, but it is limited by the audience of Magic Circle fans. The writing is very good, and the story is well told. It is definitely at the top among Tomato Magic Circle fans.

I've finished reading Chapter 72 I was just discharged from the hospital a few days ago and will go back to school in about two days. . . This book I found at this point is quite good. I haven't watched Puella Magi Madoka Magica's anime, and I discovered this book by accident, so I can probably understand it. It's quite comfortable to watch book friends chatting with the author. The biggest drawback is that there are very few books and there is no way to increase the speed. It's quite painful. At this rate, I won't be able to finish the book before I graduate. Maybe I can take it to a university to read, as long as it's not under supervision. . . . Probably because I stayed in the ward for two days, and because I have a knife (?), I was deeply moved by reading this book, which made me feel a little late-night emo. Come on, my friend [covering face], you will be noticed by others [laughing evilly]

It's really beautiful! Because of this article, I went to catch up on the plots of Magical Records TV and mobile games! "Who understands what you're telling me? I'm just here to find my sister." This is the magic sentence of this novel. I'm quite obsessed with the ruthless search for a sister. In short, this work is super awesome and beautiful, but the updates are too slow, which is understandable. After all, the author seems to be a high school student🙀It's already amazing to be able to keep updating while in jail ⭐Ah, the legendary writer⭐ ❤️The gospel official of words❤️ 💔How long will it take for you to update a new chapter💔 📚Relive history! 📚 🌊Cross the ocean of text and data traffic🌊 ❤️Bring the latest updates right in front of my eyes❤️ 🤫The process of reading your text🤫 🎓Always reminds me of the happy time when I was a teenager studying🎓 🤲🏻If there is a one in ten thousand chance, you can update ten chapters a day🤲🏻 🥰My victory will be certain🥰 🥵In the name of readers, I will invite you to step into the prison of explosive updates🥵[laughter]

A super good-looking Mo Yuan fanfic, the character creation and psychological description are very delicious😋, and the various foreshadowings make people look forward to the next plot. The daily life is also very interesting and delicious😋

Not to mention, the plot is quite good and may have some minor flaws, but those who like Madoka and Madoka Gaiden can take a look. For example, I like it very much. Every character has a distinct personality. It is a very good fan fiction about Madoka and Madoka. I hope there are more main plots and good foreshadowing. I hope the author will work harder in the future and write better plots. (After reading this, I kind of want to write a fan fiction but I dare not. After all, I am just an ordinary first-year junior high school student)

It looks good, but every time I watched a very long clip in the early stage, a period suddenly appeared without a line break. It was a bit uncomfortable to watch, but it's not a big problem. Anyway, the writing is better than mine. Also, the update is slow. I hope it won't end the series in my lifetime. Also, I posted a setting in a chapter that I misremembered. As soon as it was posted, I remembered and deleted it immediately. I don't know if it was seen by the author's backend data.

I don't know much about the anime Puella Magi Madoka Magica, but it still doesn't affect my impression of the characters in this book. The article is handwritten without AI, and the writing style is normal, neither too gorgeous nor too boring. There is nothing wrong with it. The main plot is biased toward daily writing, mostly the friendship and a little family affection between the girls in the ward. There is a little bit of knives but not stomachache. There is no combat plot yet and it can be read as daily writing. The main advantages are the creation of characters and the friendship between the girls to redeem each other. In my opinion, it scores 8.3~8.9 (Anything I missed in the 4-hour speed run will be revised after I finish the second playthrough)

Five stars must be five stars. I read it quite well when I first started writing. However, the plot progress is a bit slow and the updates are also slow [face covering]. Also, the book next door that was read a few days later has a few more updates than you.

Haoban, who knows the sense of redemption that comes from looking at shitty yellow buttons [face covering]

It's been a long time since I've seen such beautiful magic round noodles😋👍🏻 It just seems like the hole is a bit big. I don't know if I can cover it. In addition, I saw that the ratings in the comment section are quite high, why is the total rating only 6 points😨

A gentle protagonist and a story written with heart. I am hesitating between hoping for a knife and a knife-free one, but the direction is probably knife-free (because someone has supported me)

Looks good, support me [smirk][smirk][shy][shy]

Very beautiful😍, when I watched it, I felt like I wasn't watching a Magic Circle fanfic

The author's writing is very good, the plot is rigorous, and the characters are complete. I highly recommend it. I also ask the author to work hard and write more...!

It's so good, I love reading it, the emotional lines are so messed up, I will write novels for the rest of my life.

It's a very good novel, a healing novel. I felt warm when I read Corpse

Being able to see such a touching work makes it worth the price even if you die.

Needless to say, it's a fairy tale. It's one of the best books written by Tomato, and it's the best one among Magic Circle fans.

It's very interesting. I really like reading heart-warming and everyday books. Don't stop updating it (a certain book said it would not stop updating and it has stopped updating for four months) [Like]

The corpse feels warm when I look at it [laughs]

I need more updates Please😭please😭please let me read another chapter😭 Update 😭 Where are you 😡 I can see you 😔 I wish...

Very interesting, hope to continue writing.