Divine Condor*****

The writing is very good. The emotional descriptions of the two Yang and Long are delicate and nuanced. It can be seen that the author has put his heart into it. However, the overall plot setting has been changed a lot in the early stage, such as the Dragon Girl's oath in the ancient tomb and her image of being ignorant and ignorant about things under the mountain. This version of the Dragon Girl has weakened the character of being cold on the outside and hot on the inside. Instead, she is like the sister next door. You can just read it as a fan. I hope the author will work hard. This book deserves better results [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart]