Azure Files Opening Inventory of Holy Trinity

It's not bad. It's the first celestial story in Weiwei Files. It also has shortcomings. 1: There is no punctuation in the first 20 chapters, which makes it uncomfortable to read, and there is little dialogue between the characters. 2: The teacher character change (the author said it himself) personally feels that it is not as good as the original one. After the author changed it, it feels like the difference between 2nd grade Hoshino and 3rd grade Hoshino. 3: I don't know if it's because the author is Weihuachu, but I always feel like I caught Saori Huohuo in the missile, and I feel that the character design of Saori is not well written, so I'll be careful with Saorichu. In short, the overall performance is good and there is good room for improvement. Come on (﹡ˆoˆ﹡)

Author, Author update soon The author's soul returns... 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul returns... Driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles... 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul is back... Crossing the mountain and singing... The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul returns... Sings high and triumphant... We share the same robe and enjoy the glory... 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 Hun Xi Returns... Hun Xi When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is more focused. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are in the tenth watch, the great Confucian scholars' debates on scriptures are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally.

I changed the character of the teacher to be more like a saint, and the extra timeline is not the original one, but it is to increase his goodwill. The character dialogue should follow the character's design as much as possible, as well as the original personality. Some of the character's character is not superficial (the character shown on the surface is different from the inner character, which can be seen in the plot shaping.) No one reads about 300,000 words, so I'm going to finish it. How can I write other books if I don't finish it?

I think it's well written

A road I have never imagined, I look forward to the follow-up development Sent from the author's group account 😋

You are finally back,

It's so good. I love reading it. Good luck to the author.

So far it looks good

It's okay, you can watch it

BA's first canopy novel is good but the updates are too slow.