How to Save Yourself After Time Traveling to Jingfeng

The content is a bit sloppy, but the overall pacing is quite good, and the story is told clearly. This is the third fan novel that I can happily read. There are several that I can read, but it is not very enjoyable to read, or it is a genre that I don't like, or there are some unacceptable points. Although the author obviously lacks experience in writing novels and has some shortcomings, there are no inexplicable flaws that I can't accept. It's pretty good. I feel that the author should have read a lot of novels, so that when he writes the novel, he has a certain rhythm and does not miss a sentence here and there. Also, I personally prefer novels that are well-invested with emotions, but are just right and do not deviate from the novel itself. They are not simply the product of emotional vomiting, nor are they weird, unorganized and illogical writing. The author has great potential!

It's sad, but it's fun to watch; Bai Liu is good and bad, but it's fun to watch; I feel a little powerless watching the heroine's experiences, but it's fun to watch; the heroine's growth line is also very interesting, and it's fun to watch; I also feel so happy to get along with Bai Liu

It's very nice, but it makes me see another person who is suffering. The last one was Lu Ma [cover face] [cover face] [cover face]

Love to watch! ! ! The human nature is vividly depicted, and the difference in style between Bai Liu and Bai Liu is perfectly captured. It is really not easy for our little Mo to escape from the hands of the godfather alive... By the way, I feel like the author is not very good at writing copy? At least the first single-player book made me dizzy. It always felt inexplicable and the pace was very fast. It is said that Xiao Mo was touched in this book, but I don't quite understand what point can easily touch such a refined self-interested person... Later, I simply weakened the content of the copy and turned to Xiao Mo's personal transformation and "growth", but this rhythm seemed much more comfortable. I'm really looking forward to the scene where Xiao Mo meets his teacher again in the fifth building dungeon! ! ! Author update soon! PS: If you have any ideas about the dungeon, you can come to me and I can help you write the dungeon and compete! Fear nothing for love! This kind of fan fiction is too rare. It is everyone's responsibility to protect fan fiction! PS. PS: Please don't stop updating. You still have manuscripts saved, right? I haven't seen enough yet…

It's pretty good. It's a rare non-OOC fanfic on Yangshizi. The development of the plot is quite exciting, but I have a question for the author. Why is Zifeng, a 17-year-old high school student, so calm in the copy or in reality? She feels very mature and mature. However, the inner description does add some thoughts that she should have at that age. I am just a little curious about why Zifeng's character is so... I can't think of adjectives. I am short of words. Just asking [crazy]

It's good to read. I don't know when I updated it until now. I'm picky about Jing Feng's fanfics. Except for the beginning, which I can't understand (maybe I didn't read it very seriously), the rest of it is very good to read. There are no OOC characters and no over-the-top combat power (although I can understand the idea of ​​setting the OC to be invincible). I hope to continue working hard. The heroine's intelligence is online and the writing is very good. It is one of the few fanfics that I like and have finished reading. In the end, the author continues to work hard and the writing is very good.

Very, very good to watch [Blowing Kiss] Although the first copy at the beginning is a bit slow, the rest is really, really interesting. Mo Zifeng was obviously Bai Liu's loyal student and deceived everyone, but only Bai Liu knew about her performance. He did not criticize but watched with interest Mo Zifeng's logical efforts to survive, causing little trouble from time to time, and occasionally using psychological tactics to penetrate her little by little, as if (crossed out) was a god watching the interesting struggle of a toy, which was completely in line with the character. Although Mo Zifeng kept giving hints to himself, he still got involved from time to time. This kind of high-intelligence pull that only your opponent understands is really, really cool. [Admiration] Bai Liu, written by the teacher, really fits the character design, regardless of IQ or desire. The writing style is also very good, as well as the logic. I was stunned for a while, and I almost got caught in it by Bai Liu. The plot is also very tight and connected, one link after another, one foreshadowing one after another, making people feel unexpected but also reasonable, and consistent with everyone's character and core goals. No cp but still eye-catching [laughing] Bai Liu is really too disdainful, but I really love him [shy] Finally, I wish the teacher success in his work, success in his studies, and all his wishes come true. This book is a hit [Adoration] (Please concentrate on being busy with the three dimensions, but at the same time, don't forget that there are a group of children waiting for food [Sending Hearts])

It's so cool. The setting of Bai Liu is so cool. I like you, the author\(//∇//)\

I think it's super good-looking. [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] Teacher, except that the updates are a bit slow and not enough, the rest is still very good! I really, really, really like this kind of fanfiction! Unlike other fans who have been banned, this one is really worth reading, and the teacher is also very nice~ He will reply to every comment he sees~ All of you, please read it quickly! [Almost crying] [Almost crying]

I haven't written a book review for a long time. Because I read it offline, the reading time was not up to standard, but it was basically equal and there was no skipping chapters. It's really good-looking, my favorite genre, and the character of the protagonist is also very good. There is no force to open a particularly large hook. What I like most is this character design, it feels really restored. It's been a long time since I've seen a Jingfeng fan who restored the character in such a way. The character was not forced to follow the stereotypes. It perfectly captured the image Bai Liu should have in my mind. No woman suddenly appeared. You attracted my attention. This kind of thunder plot has a very coherent plot. The protagonist has a golden finger, but he has been cheated by Liu Liu in the early stage. It's miserable and very reassuring. Use some anchor points to stick to your heart and succeed (seemingly) I don't want to complain too much about the update speed. There are still a lot of hell jokes. There is a very relaxed and faint feeling of death. In the later stage, I felt that the protagonist's self-destruction was extremely serious. It's like I'm completing some plan I don't know about...

A super nice book, the best surprise fanfic I have ever read. The characters are not OOC at all, Bai Liu's writing is really special, and it turned me into Liu Chu. The animal sculptures I have seen before were all made of hamsters or cats. And our heroine was transformed into a humanoid by Bai Liu, which was miserable. This book feels quite similar to the original, both calm and a bit sadistic. Of course, these CS things can only be done by Liu Neng. If you like the narrative feel of the original work, I highly recommend reading it.

The plot is quite interesting. The protagonist is a very smart and cute child. His wife grasps the character of King and President Bai Liu very well. The overall plot is novel and interesting. The current tie-up is to solve the foreshadowing buried in the previous article and click on what a certain evil god said before: "Time advances in a linear direction." Strictly speaking, it seems that Captain Tang personally pushed the child to Bai Liu [Eating Melon] [Adoration]

Well worth seeing! ! Delicious beyond words! ! ! It feels like the sixth-line characters in the original text have come alive! ! ! It is the most consistent novel setting that I have seen in Tomato so far. It made me recommend (Bai Liu) to be a non-human being and write it deeply into my heart! ! Finally, big! ! Love you (ꈍᴗꈍ)ε｀*)[Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

This book is really well written, and the author is very good. Except for the fact that he may not be good at writing copy, overall the writing style is very good and the plot is very smooth. The godfather Bai Liu and the PUA of the protagonist written by the author are really exciting and a bit suffocating to watch [Sparrow Food Masterpiece], and they are not OOC at all. The characters of Bai Liu and Bai Liu are quite distinct and easy to distinguish. The protagonist grows up very quickly. After all, Bai Liu will kill him if he doesn't do it quickly [laughing], and the author doesn't give the protagonist too much gold, which is really impressive. This is the second amazing fanfic that I have read. Please give me a lot of encouragement from the author. Please don't stop updating. I must finish this novel [crazy]

It's so enjoyable to write. What Chuliu writes is also very vivid and not OOC. Even with a high-speed brain, you can barely get it. The author is also very good, very active, awesome ˵>ㅿ<˵

It's beautiful. The author is simply a god. Next, I will use the most direct, truthful, least roundabout, most heart-breaking, most hard-core, most straightforward, least ink-intensive, most poignant, most unsparing, most to the point, most straight to the point, most straight to the point, The least foreshadowing, the least polite, the least sensational, the least nonsense, the least roundabout, the least pretentious, the least pretentious, the least pretentious, the least verbose, the least procrastinating, the least tactful, the least disguised, the least hidden, the most straightforward, the most explicit, and the most real , the most transparent, the most vicious, the most refreshing, the most relieving, the most superior, the most powerful, the most enjoyable, the most brutal, the most effective, the most ruthless, the most accurate, the most stable, the most absolute, the most explosive, the strongest, the fiercest, the sassiest, the most reckless, the most aggressive, the fiercest, the most fragile, The brightest, most transparent, dryest, cleanest, neatest, most domineering, most hard-core, most vigorous, wildest, most straightforward, roughest, least pretentious, least pretentious, least formal, least pretentious way to tell you: good-looking(๑> <๑)

This book is quite nice, and the author's writing is very good, but the updates are too slow. I hope the author will update it once a day. 😄😄😄

Immortal product I felt so happy watching it. The battle of wits is really beautiful Now, everyone shows me this book. Padrino! ! Everyone, please read the "Six Classics of Bai" 1. Godfather is God 2. Do not insult the godfather 3. You must like every post of Godfather in your circle of friends 4. You must take the initiative to chat with your godfather frequently 5. The godfather's emotions must be carefully taken care of 6. Don't ignore the godfather when talking to others 7. Don't yell at your godfather 8. Always remember that the Godfather is the most authoritative 9. No one is allowed to slander the Godfather 10. No one is allowed to oppose the Godfather 11. No one is allowed to disobey the godfather. Putting aside the fact that Bai Liu destroyed 657 world lines, he saved Lu Station and Fang Dian. As a villain, he left everyone room to save the world. He supervised the growth of the protagonist group. He followed the routine and did not kill the protagonist. Instead, he regarded the protagonist as his heir. Judging from these things, why is Liu not a good person? Liu is just an evil god who wants to find himself an heir. What bad intentions can he have?

Looks good! ! ! Oh my god, you are so beautiful. Bailiu makes me feel so good when I see her! ! ! There is no OOC part! Not recommended. Not recommended. Highly recommended.

One of the few fanfics that have been sealed with six lines and six lines. The author's writing style was immature in the early stage and the writing was a bit messy. However, it got better in the later stage and he should have found the rhythm. This Bai Liu makes me love, hate and feel happy at the same time (.'▽'.) ♡ Xiao Mo is also cute, but he is a bit too stressed out by Bai Liu's torment.

Looks good! Go read it now. This article is already one of the top ones in my heart. I love Liu Xian the most. I love the heroine's imitation of Bai Liu. It's so fun to read! Congratulations to the author, everyone, go see it, go see it, go see it, go see it!

For the sake of Miss Zifeng being so miserable [Thinking]

It's so good-looking, and the characters are restored to a high degree, but Momo's participation in Liuxian is not high. I'm really looking forward to the Death Shura Field in Five Buildings.

It's super good-looking, the logic is rigorous, and the narration is also very good. The protagonist's personality just happens to match my XP. Generally speaking, everyone in it is very good. Bai Liu is actually very handsome, but he, well, I won't talk about it anymore.

Mo Zifeng squeezed me so hard, it made me depressed to death. I want to find someone to beat me up and vent my anger on. [Smile]

So good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good, so good! Godfather! Godfather! Godfather! ! ! Daniel, you are always gone!

The logic is clear and very beautiful! ! ! (≧∇≦)/This Bai Liu late stage is really good (✪▽✪) The author is also very cute! ! !

It's so well written\^O^/I've never discovered this book before. It's very good-looking and the characters are not OOC. I have a deep experience of Bailiu PUA's methods (this person is so terrifying). Great support for the author. I love you [love]

I have to give it a good review, but the protagonist of this article should be on the side of the godfather. The godfather is written very well. The daily pua is always interesting. When I put my pua in, it doesn't feel OOC at all.

One of the few amazing fanfics that don't know the character's OOC