Cool********

It looks good, the writing is very good, please come more, come more, be sure not to stop updating it [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love]

It's quite interesting. The modern Xu Qinghan traveled to the world of immortal cultivation and was picked up by the Piaomiao Sect. She became the younger brother of Gu Ciyuan, the senior brother who had been in seclusion for many years. Gu Ciyuan was supposed to devote himself to cultivation and not worry about trivial matters, but was disrupted by Xu Qinghan, who was soft and ignorant. Therefore, he started the daily life of raising a child, taking care of food, clothing, daily life, and practicing exercises with him. It turned out to be the soft-hearted indulgence of the elders towards the cubs. However, they have been together for a long time, and the two have feelings for each other. The relationship between the two is a bit late. The plot line is okay, but the ending is not Be but better than Be. The author's writing style is still very good, but the ending is unacceptable. The characters of the supporting characters are very three-dimensional, and the villain is released quite late. Personal opinion, please don't criticize.

Nice! The form of this chapter title is inexplicably familiar, a sense of déjà vu from Dream of Red Mansions [Thinking]

This book is super beautiful, and the characters are very clear and lifelike.

It's okay, but it's hard to rate this ending (┳◇┳)

It's very interesting, but is this a book with two male protagonists?

The writing style of this book is very good, very, very, very good, but I personally don't accept the ending. Why? If you can't see your lover again, what's the difference between him and BE? He might as well be, you know? I hate this ending, but the author's writing is really good, I want to cry😭

I really like this book

Damn, my writing is so good that I'm going to die? I can't keep it on the bookshelf anymore

Why do so many places feel like the previous stories are missing?

I wrote the extra, but I can't post it😭😭😭

Good-looking, love watching, not enough

It's beautiful (♥∀♥), go check it out

It's very beautiful, but it's a bit sparse. I hope the author will update it more [shy][shy]

To be honest, the final ending really touched me. I really wanted to cry. ꒰(⌯˃̶̥̆д˂̶̥̥̥̆ ू)꒱But it's really beautiful.

It's so beautiful, I actually watched it from beginning to end

It's beautiful ~ not sloppy at all ~ I hope there will be more updates ~

It looks good, but the ending is another he꒦ິ꒦ິ^꒦ິ

The writing is very good, I like it very much, I hope it will be faster [Adoration]