I'm Making a Pokémon Game in Bengtie

There is no CP for the time being + the plot design is good = super good-looking~ However, some comments seem to hope that there will be a female protagonist. I personally hope that all members will be friendly and have no CP~ It depends on what the author writes in the future, but for now it is still a good-looking Pokémon~(¯▽¯~) The cutest one How should I put it, the protagonist used his ability to materialize Pokémon costume 13 and asked Ruan Mei to make the Pokémon, which was a bit shocking to me. It's okay to write about making games (the part about Gui Naifen that made people complain before has been changed) For me, this novel can only be read in a skip, but it's not worth following.

It's pretty good to keep this pace, come on. As for the heroine mentioned in the comment section, I don't really want to watch it. I came here to watch the introduction to see elves and bonds and communicate with friends, not to watch love. If I want to watch love, I should click in to watch elves. I can go directly to the heartthrob next door. I am looking forward to the plot of Yishou Xinghejing, which is abstract + funny + bonding + CD pair. I can't imagine how delicious the rice will be. Support the new book with five stars

Apart from anything else, it is brave to dare to combine these two IPs, and I will give it 5 stars directly. Moreover, so far, the characters appearing are not OOC as expected, and the descriptions of the battles between elves are pretty good. Except that the number of people is a bit small, the universe does not have such a small population, and it needs to be updated quickly. The author is locked in a small dark room, 10 chapters a day, and if he does not finish it, he will be whipped with a small whip [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh]

The joy of the protagonist is really right. It creates a Pokémon game world, guides real fighting emotions, and creates a passionate fighting atmosphere. It is so joyful! ! [Laughing][laughing][laughing]

The best Pokémon story among Star Iron fans, the best Star Iron story among Pokémon fans [Learned], because it is a self-created plot rather than an adaptation of the original plot, so it will not be boring. At the same time, the design of the battle is also very good, which is better than many articles that specialize in writing about Pokémon, and it does not limit the word count of combat, so the details are appropriate. The Star Iron characters aren't overtly OOC either. I just hope it doesn't get cut in half. It's a pity that the League Battle and Gorgeous Contest chapters are a bit too long. Especially the Gorgeous Contest, which has been covered for dozens of chapters. There is no plot, just describing the performance scene.

The plot design is really good, the combination of Bentie and Pokémon is also a bold innovation, the Pokémon battle game is also well done, and the protagonist's ability projection has more operations. In the happy life, the protagonist should be from the Candy Knight faction [eat melon]

It looks good. Come on, author. Can you change the lightning rod of the Super Lizard King? [Smile]

666 Start making the game "Honkai. The Spirit of Karma"

It's great. I heard that the protagonist of the previous offline Masters was cheating. This was really a bad batch. But luckily it had been changed when I saw it. It will continue to be absolutely awesome in the future. I'm still waiting for the wisdom to be realized. I feel like a new race of Pokémon can be created in the future? It depends on how the author spreads his thinking. After all, virtual intelligence has not yet been realized, let alone an independent individual such as an omnic. It can be said that I am looking forward to the follow-up development. Come on, author.

In general, the subject matter is novel, the imagination is wide-open, the writing is fluent, and the pace in the front is too fast, but it does not affect the development of the story. The main plot of Bengtie is dragging, but I feel that the author will not focus on the main plot at all, and the main body of this novel is the selling point, which is the Pokémon battle in another world that is also the world view of Bentie. Therefore, readers who like Pokémon should like to read it more. It will be more comfortable to read if both Pokémon and Iron Breaker are involved. Because this work shows Pokémon battles in a game rather than a popular science or advent article, it is not the point at all whether you are a beast master or a Pokémon trainer, or whether Pokémon battles are good or not, because this is a game. For the time being, the game has not yet reached the required level of intelligent technology in the story, so the character and emotions of Pokémon have not been specifically expressed so far. We look forward to the follow-up development and hope that this will not collapse. I don't know why the rating is low, maybe! The reason is that some readers did not see what they wanted to see about Pokémon written in the Bentie worldview. Another problem is that the author is too slow to update. I am afraid that I will abandon the book that day. I usually send more than 1,000 reminders for updates. I hope to update a few more chapters. [Send heart][Send heart]

Very good innovation! I really like the fact that the main character always wanted to bring real Pokémon to the Star Railroad! The improvement of the AI ​​algorithm is mentioned at the back of the book. In fact, you can also ask Ruan Mei to create a creature or something! Buy a planet and transform it into a real Pokémon world! ! ! Combining technology and biology, the main character needs to be powerful and not too supermodel, otherwise there will be no sense of excitement about rising from the bottom! Relationships can be great but don't want a harem! If you keep it up, it will definitely be another 9.0 Rated work! We can also develop more big IPs for other games such as Black Monkey and BT. What can I say? There is a lot to write about, as long as the combat power does not collapse! This book can go on forever

This book is also ranked at the upper level among many new Bentie fan books. The theme of Pokémon is very good. This book is currently a pure daily novel. I think as long as it fits the character design, this book can be added to the bookshelf and read. You can try to read it. If you can finish the first few chapters, you can read it. The plot is also relatively reasonable. At least the author will correct it if he makes a mistake. I think this is okay.

It's very interesting, and the main character only wants to do Pokémon. But he also cares about his companions. The only drawback is that it only takes three days to update a chapter. Although there are more than 300 chapters, I have finished reading it, and it is not enough.

It's a great Pokémon fan novel, even though the title is a Pokémon game, but this novel satisfies my childhood fantasy of Pokémon appearing in reality, and there's nothing wrong with the character creation in the game. It vividly describes the changes in the original world brought about by the combination of Pokémon and Pokémon. Generally speaking, it satisfies my changes in the integration of Pokémon with other worlds. The description of Bengtie's character is also in line with Mijia's official style. I like it very much.

It's a very good book. I can picture the scene of the elf battle, but it's a pity that it's too short.

Looks good, come on, we can have a female protagonist, and we can write about the bond with Pokémon later. I hope Silver Wolf can be the heroine😍

It's great. Even if I don't like Pokémon, I can still read it. The character descriptions are very good. There should be less than 200,000 words left before finishing Pokémon. I don't know what type of game the author plans to write next.

The author writes very well. I think you are writing about Pokémon. It is not the world of other main universes of China Railway. You don't need to think about it. All you need to consider is Pokémon. So I will give you a number, 5 chapters a day. After all, you are writing Pokémon battles. You don't need to consider other butterfly effects, the birth of the protagonist. You don't need to consider anything. You only need to consider Pokémon battles, so I beg you, 5 chapters a day.

It's well written, but some skill names don't seem to be quite right, and I can't see the use of those tactics and weather at the moment. I hope they can be added later. The last one is too little, not enough to watch.

If you love watching Pokémon, you can watch Super. The battle friendship and bond in it are very strong. It started slowly in the early stage, but after the competition, it was very good. My cultural level is relatively poor, and I can't describe it in my language. If you only read the first ten chapters, you will be easily persuaded to quit, but after you get to the end, there will be no problem. The first ten chapters are basically used to prepare for the competition, and then the theme begins, and it is not a tool man protagonist.

Your original return to Rayquaza shocked me! Just say that your original return to Rayquaza is different from the super-evolved one. What the hell is it the same as Super Rayquaza? If you bring Z Pure Crystal Energy and super evolve it together and stack it together, I will give it a boost. After all, the game is originally designed to limit the strength of Super Rayquaza, but that's not the reason why I'm here.

The author who had some bad points also listened to the advice and really changed it, unlike some authors who most people said were poisonous but thought they were not poisonous. It looks even better after the author revised it

I finally found this book again. I finished reading it during the previous update but forgot to put it on the bookshelf. [Almost crying] Now that I suddenly came back, I thought of a point. There is such a thing as the transformation of virtual characters in the Second Phase Paradise [laughing] As long as you can get Arceus, then you will definitely be noticed [laughing]. Of course, it is actually possible that the protagonist will be detected when he first starts to get Pokémon.

This can be said to be the best Pokémon novel I have ever read. I hope the author will continue to maintain this quality and create more novels.

The writing is not bad, but the game plot content needs to be written quickly and not procrastinated, otherwise it will be annoying and boring. It's okay at first, but becomes more and more dull and boring later on.

What a good book, yes, it's not as interesting as the ones about "Beng Tie" in "Beng Tie". Unfortunately, I came late and didn't catch up with the author before he revised the book. I hate that I missed an opportunity to score. After all, this book's score is a bit high. Anyway, I also want to score.

It's very beautiful, but the rating is a bit low, so I almost missed it. This book combines Pokémon with the Iron Breaking World. There is no sense of inconsistency at all so far. Various mythical beasts can be divided into various Star Gods to serve under their orders, and there is even the possibility of being upgraded to a Star God themselves. The planning of the game is completely the ideal state for Pokémon game fans. The reality of resting on one's laurels and failing to operate well is simply incomparable. Looking forward to the follow-up plot of Pokémon integrating into the reality of the iron-collapse world, the author please work harder.

Very good, better than many elf fans You can only use 4 skills in battle and the restriction of super evolution is really poisonous. Writing real elf battles while writing handheld game values is really poisonous.

I'll give it 5 stars because this is the first book I've seen that features Iron Break and Pokémon. It's very creative. I hope the author can continue to update it. Even if one day I can't stop updating it, I have to follow xy&z [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

It's so good to watch, Kougua, I want to watch the power of the bond between me and Pokémon Kouga Pokémon Power 500,000 rotations! ! ! !