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Give it a good review so more people can see it. You are a mortal who kills people on the second and third levels of qi training. If they are not prepared, I will treat you as reasonable. But why don't you put a storage bag on your body when practicing the exercises? Also, there is a top-quality magic weapon on the second floor of Qi training? And the Foundation Establishment Pill? Is it open?

The character fights are very vividly written, keep up the good work The protagonist Qian Ye first experienced the ecstasy of "discovering a treasure" - a large amount of fire evil energy was enough to make his skills breakthrough. But with a change of pen, the author immediately put the danger before his eyes, and the joy was instantly replaced by vigilance. This emotional transition is very natural and immediately lifts the reader's heart. The description of the monster "Red Hookworm" is particularly outstanding. From the sound of it crawling quickly in the dark, to its ferocious appearance, poisonous hook tail, to the details of the venom corroding the rocks, it is full of visuals and oppression. What's even better is that the book mentions that this kind of creature "lives in groups", but there is only one in front of you. This setting instantly creates a huge sense of suspense and crisis, making readers and the protagonist doubtful and full of tension. The battle scenes are crisp and clean. Qian Ye decisively chose "quick victory" and the transition between offense and defense was very layered: first he used the light splitting sword to test and contain, then he used the light shield of the Jade Fire Bell to resist the poisonous hook, and finally he used the magic weapon "Adamantium Sand" to launch a fierce attack like a storm. A series of action descriptions combined with the sound effects of "chichi" and "dangdang" make people feel like they can hear the sound of battle and see the flying sparks, giving them a strong sense of presence. Overall, this chapter is remarkable in terms of atmosphere creation, suspense setting and action description. From the anticipation of treasure hunting to the intensity of the encounter, the rhythm is well controlled and it is very enjoyable to watch.

Beautiful, but too little

I'll see if there's any progress later.