Don't You Want Her to Pay for It with Her Life? Why Does My Heart Hurt First?

I gave five stars because this book is both sweet and sad, which suits my taste. However, the shortcomings of this book are also very obvious. I would like to make a few superficial comments and hope that the author can give it some consideration: 1. Use less words like "a twinkle in the eye," "a hint in the voice," and "arouse a smile." It's not that it can't be used, but the frequency of it is too high and affects the senses. You can directly use adjectives to modify it. 2. This book gave me a feeling of being knife-less, as if the whole book was written around knives, always making fun of the heroine's heart without any substantial loss. My suggestion is to use many small knives in the early stage to pave the way for a big knife at the end (but I still hope the ending is he). The story line can be more diverse. For example, in the early stage, when the two people are in conflict and fall in love, you can write a few more things, slow down the pace a little, and then select a few to cut a knife, and then write a sweet one after the knife. I hope the author can take a good look at it. These are my sincere suggestions.

The protagonist is the legendary King of Endurance. He is seriously ill and has to be hospitalized every few chapters. He just can't die. If he wasn't sick, he would probably be the pinnacle of humanity, an ordinary humanoid Astartes.

Ouch, not bad. The author's daily update of the w word is quite scary. The main plot is relatively old-fashioned, but overall it's actually pretty good, except that sometimes the way it advances the plot is weird. Come on, author [laughs]

The heroine and the second heroine are enemies disguised as lovers. Even if they have a daughter, even if they go through many setbacks, and even if they are almost separated by life and death several times, they still cannot change the fact that they are enemies. If it is normal, they can still maintain the harmony on the surface. Once interests are involved, the second heroine (omitting 100 words here) will strike hard at our heroine who is worse than a silk flower.

The biggest difference between this book and other books is that the characters are three-dimensional and vivid. The people inside are intertwined with various contradictions, and they are all three-dimensional and living people, not good guys and bad guys like facial makeup. Even Jiang Wanqing will choose to try to save her daughter at the last moment. The reading experience is satisfying and worth reading several times. What is this if it's not fine grain - ̗̀(๑ᵔ⌔ᵔ๑)εïз

I feel like Jiang really loves Gu. Even though Gu keeps pushing her away and irritating her every time, Jiang still chooses to be tolerant and forgive her. I hope Gu will treat Jiang better [laughs]

When will I write a separate story about Gu Nianzhou and Mu Zhaoning? I'm looking forward to it [laughing evilly]

When can I watch the author speak in person?

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It's really beautiful, thank you to the author [Shy]

Super beautiful, highly recommended~(¯▽¯~) This is great! Very diligent! Support

It's beautiful and deeply rooted in people's hearts. Why do you feel that Gu Hanzhou is portrayed as a boy?

Probably v. He is asking for food like a ghost TF. He has a Toyota (><) to prevent hair loss and a push-up (*^ω^*) to eat for the working class. The nature is different. Fang Fangtu v. Gungun to Big Brother. Let Big Brother not be enough. RT-Mart makes the other party listen better. Morality kidnaps wealth and guarantees the situation, just like before.

It looks great, thank you to the author.

The writing is very beautiful. Although it is a bit sad in the middle, the ending is really good. And it has a lot of words, so it should be enough to read.

Looks good but a bit regretful

The book written is very good, and the author will continue to write in the future! ! ! I've read two of your books

Very beautiful, I have watched it several times

It's pretty good to watch, and the plot is pretty good, not that sloppy.