Starting from the Immortality of the Soul, Plundering the Heavens

Not bad, I read it in one night. The author didn't even give the protagonist any time to rest. After finishing one game, he came back one after another. It's like playing a game to complete levels. One star will be deducted.

The writing is okay, and the author will reply to the comments very well. The biggest drawback is that basically all the official staff are evil people. They don't cultivate their minds and just start tit-for-tat with the protagonist. The advantage is that there are not so many people and worldly twists and turns. The disadvantage is that the other people in the whole book are very emotional (very extreme and emotional). The protagonist is constantly upgrading and upgrading due to the constant stream of people looking for trouble, which is a bit urgent. (Of course, I think it's a bit tight in my own opinion. I don't know what others think. It's purely a personal opinion. And there are some places where I jumped a bit. If the things I picked happen to conflict with what I said above, then I'd like to apologize to the author in advance.)

Everything else is fine, but there are too many poison points, which overwhelms the combat power.

It's a good book. Good luck to the author. It's normal that there are few people nowadays.

It's okay, keep up the good work I take back what I said before

It's been fun so far,

The plot is very well written and the writing is also very good. I love reading it.

Good-looking and good-looking. Recommended

I think the writing is quite exciting. Why is the score so low? It's a bit too low.

I suggest that you go to The Incredibles in the next world. Superman's son, Jacky, has many special abilities. He can become invisible and become a fireman.

Not bad, logical and consistent

Personally, I think it's good. But when you kill someone, since you've already pinched your neck, why should you let go? Just crush it.

It's my type. I would like it better if it didn't add some old clichés.

On the platform of Yangshizi, the writing is already pretty good. Come on, do more.