The Hero of the Storm Dominates the World

It's okay, it's quite to my liking. I've already become the king in more than 60 chapters. The progress is quite fast. I've improved my combat power a little. I won't be beaten when I face Emperor Shitian later. The plot of Fengyun is a little bit. Basically, I innovate by myself. In the future, I can collect the blood of the four great beasts, and the system will give me some boundary-breaking talismans, and I will directly embark on the path of the eternal god emperor.

A very interesting book. I hope the author insists

The poison test is completed, except that the martial arts realm is a bit uncomfortable, everything else is fine! ! ! Can watch

A rare book, Fengyun Wen.

Write faster and sit down first

Watched it for a while, not bad

Well written, keep it up

Good, good, good, good

It's okay, it's pretty

There are only some minor issues, but overall it's quite satisfactory. It would be better if you could add some content on how to govern the world.

Give some encouragement Writing is okay But the rhythm could be tighter Fast pace ahead Then gradually add content such as political struggle strategies After Long Yuan, Emperor Shitian took away his body and was reborn physically. The storyline of Duan Lang was strengthened, and he fought against the three pillars of the hegemony. It's just that the content framework is relatively large, but the supporting characters who appeared earlier are getting less and less present. It all depends on how the author fills in the gaps with his writing skills.

This style is indeed okay, but it's a pity that the description of martial arts is a little lacking.