Mushoku Tensei: My Magical Life in Another World

The core plot has not yet been reached, so I don't know how it will unfold. The daily life in the early stage is very comfortable, with many small ideas and small plot reconstructions. It can be seen that it will not be a hard plot. The writing style is a bit immature, but I have certain requirements for the quality of my output. I did a lot of deductions and wrote my own story. I don't know how long the author can persist. If he persists in writing, he will become a top-notch fan. It's understandable if he can't persist. The further you go, the harder it will be and the easier it will be to go off track. Look at the frequency of updates. The author is more interested in fulfilling his dream than making money. The golden finger is very restrained and rare. Come on. By the way, how do you arrange Ai Xia? [Laughs evilly]

There are plot developments based on a set character's personality and experiences. But some parts are still not good enough, such as refusing to use the advantage of a child to get closer to Roxy. You must know that a real man in his twenties and thirties still cannot refuse a girl with multiple buffs like a gentle exotic beauty teacher. The narrative style is closer to the original work, but also has its own characteristics, making it more lively and cute. There are writing techniques that are worthy of recognition. The change of narrative perspective shows the psychological activities of the characters very well and reasonably. The supporting characters are not Muggles. At the same time, it does not change just for the sake of changing the perspective. It is actually promoted by participating in the plot. It smells like a sword. It is a masterpiece among the no-job reincarnation fanfics. Hope it doesn't collapse later.

Luo Qixi's early inflated mentality is well described, and the bond between the two is well portrayed, which is refreshing among many fans. Also, seeing 3 raised to the power of 0, I hope it's the type of single heroine Luo Qixi that I like 😄

In my opinion, the first volume of this novel is close to the top among Mujo Reincarnation fan fiction. Very delicate daily life plot. The protagonist's feelings for Luo Qixi are more likely to be attracted by appearance first and then gradually deepen in daily life. Just like the Lilia incident, the intersection and conflict of emotions are blurred by time. Compared with other works, it lacks a clear sense that the story point is here. But this can be regarded as the characteristic of this work. The author did not say in the introduction whether it will be a single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists. The first volume has an intersection with the three primary colors, and the first half of the second volume should also be dominated by Alice. But when Sylphy asked the protagonist, she expressed that she was thinking. Reading the comments, it was said that there was something about Qixing. Personally, I most hope that Luo Qixi will have a single heroine. If there are multiple female protagonists, I hope the author can write a good emotional line.

Give me some personal advice The title is not attractive. Although some titles are vulgar, they are indeed attractive. What does it mean to have a male protagonist on the cover? Is the heroine unattractive? The number of words is too small. When I click on the cover and see that the number of words is small, I lose the desire to read further. Good books have to wait, bad books waste time. When you can't tell whether it's good or bad with hundreds of thousands of words, you'll be in a cycle of waiting and wasting time. Finally, the author will update quickly, don't be ignorant 😏😏😏

It has a very original feel, and you can get a good taste of it here.

Luo Qixi's tutor chapter is very well written. It can be seen that the author has his own ideas and uses many extended small details to increase the vividness of the story and characters. I like the Luo Qixi created by the author. In the official comics, she describes herself as "humble, arrogant and presumptuous". After actually reading the side story, I found that this assessment is just right. However, the portrayal of Luo Qixi in Wuji's novels is generally more intelligent and reliable, which is a pity. The author not only makes up for this through extensive shaping in the book, but also allows the protagonist to see these sides of Luo Qixi. Whether you have a childish mentality, you like sweets, you are hard-working, you are good at research, you are conceited, you have low self-esteem, you are being discriminated against and you are still dealing with it calmly, you will feel like you are bragging about Luo Qixi with the author. That's right, that's how it should be written! In short, in terms of character creation, I think this book is completely fine. It depends on how the plot unfolds.

It's very well written. The protagonist's character is very likable and fits what little boys often fantasize about. The plot is very stable. It has not been updated to the main storyline so far, so there is nothing to comment on here. I am looking forward to the follow-up plot.

The writing is really good. I feel that the author has added a lot of ideas and added a lot of little details. It's very enjoyable to read. I must continue to read more [Blow kiss]

I watched the latest one in one go. The writing is very good, but not enough to watch. I really want the main character to be a young man.