Jobless Reincarnation: My Magical Life in Another World

The core plot has not yet been reached, so I don't know how it will unfold. The daily life in the early stage is very comfortable, with many small ideas and small plot reconstructions. It can be seen that it will not be a hard plot. The writing style is a bit immature, but I have certain requirements for the quality of my output. I did a lot of deductions and wrote my own story. I don't know how long the author can persist. If he persists in writing, he will become a top-notch fan. It's understandable if he can't persist. The further you go, the harder it will be and the easier it will be to go off track. Look at the frequency of updates. The author is more interested in fulfilling his dream than making money. The golden finger is very restrained and rare. Come on. By the way, how do you arrange Ai Xia? [Laughs evilly]

There are plot developments based on a set character's personality and experiences. But some parts are still not good enough, such as refusing to use the advantage of a child to get closer to Roxy. You must know that a real man in his twenties and thirties still cannot refuse a girl with multiple buffs like a gentle exotic beauty teacher. The narrative style is closer to the original work, but also has its own characteristics, making it more lively and cute. There are writing techniques that are worthy of recognition. The change of narrative perspective shows the psychological activities of the characters very well and reasonably. The supporting characters are not Muggles. At the same time, it does not change just for the sake of changing the perspective. It is actually promoted by participating in the plot. It smells like a sword. It is a masterpiece among the no-job reincarnation fanfics. Hope it doesn't collapse later.

Give me some personal advice The title is not attractive. Although some titles are vulgar, they are indeed attractive. What does it mean to have a male protagonist on the cover? Is the heroine unattractive? The number of words is too small. When I click on the cover and see that the number of words is small, I lose the desire to read further. Good books have to wait, bad books waste time. When you can't tell whether it's good or bad with hundreds of thousands of words, you'll be in a cycle of waiting and wasting time. Finally, the author will update quickly, don't be ignorant [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

In my opinion, the first volume of this novel is close to the top among Mujo Reincarnation fan fiction. Very delicate daily life plot. The protagonist's feelings for Luo Qixi are more likely to be attracted by appearance first and then gradually deepen in daily life. Just like the Lilia incident, the intersection and conflict of emotions are blurred by time. Compared with other works, it lacks a clear sense that the story point is here. But this can be regarded as the characteristic of this work. The author did not say in the introduction whether it will be a single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists. The first volume has an intersection with the three primary colors, and the first half of the second volume should also be dominated by Alice. But when Sylphy asked the protagonist, she expressed that she was thinking. Reading the comments, it was said that there was something about Qixing. Personally, I most hope that Luo Qixi will have a single heroine. If there are multiple female protagonists, I hope the author can write a good emotional line.

Luo Qixi's early inflated mentality is well described, and the bond between the two is well portrayed, which is refreshing among many fans. Also, seeing 3 raised to the power of 0, I hope it's the type of single heroine Luo Qixi that I like [laughs]

Luo Qixi's tutor chapter is very well written. It can be seen that the author has his own ideas and uses many extended small details to increase the vividness of the story and characters. I like the Luo Qixi created by the author. In the official comics, she describes herself as "humble, arrogant and presumptuous". After actually reading the side story, I found that this assessment is just right. However, the portrayal of Luo Qixi in Wuji's novels is generally more intelligent and reliable, which is a pity. The author not only makes up for this through extensive shaping in the book, but also allows the protagonist to see these sides of Luo Qixi. Whether you have a childish mentality, you like sweets, you are hard-working, you are good at research, you are conceited, you have low self-esteem, you are being discriminated against and you are still dealing with it calmly, you will feel like you are bragging about Luo Qixi with the author. That's right, that's how it should be written! In short, in terms of character creation, I think this book is completely fine. It depends on how the plot unfolds.

It's very well written. The protagonist's character is very likable and fits what little boys often fantasize about. The plot is very stable. It has not been updated to the main storyline so far, so there is nothing to comment on here. I am looking forward to the follow-up plot.

It has a very original feel, and you can get a good taste of it here.

The writing is really good. I feel that the author has added a lot of ideas and added a lot of little details. It's very enjoyable to read. I must continue to read more [Blow kiss]

I watched the latest one in one go. The writing is very good, but not enough to watch. I really want the main character to be a young man.

Very beautiful, with distinctive characters, a new masterpiece

Very good. I hope the author can keep writing.

Of course the magic is "Flower Field Magic" which is the best [laughs]! What really interests me about Jobless Reincarnation, in my opinion, is not participating in the war between dragon gods and human gods, or the strange adventures in other worlds, etc., But the paragraph at the end "I am satisfied" and "Then just go for it". After reading it, I felt that the author had done something amazing at the end. It turns out that this is a person's life. He has a life he likes, friends worth having, family members who love each other, etc., He satisfies the regrets that he never took seriously in his previous life, and he also has selfish rights that everyone actually has. Is this how he looks like a person living in a different world? Another thing is: "The magic of the flower field" is the most romantic magic, thank you [smile]

I like this feeling that there is no system, no knowledge of the original work, and you can do whatever you want. It feels like watching the original work.

Damn it, author, please update it faster. Other than this, it's really beautiful.

Work slowly and carefully. It's a very good novel. The writing is good and the emotional scenes are good. It doesn't have the procrastinating feeling of traditional female videos, nor the deliberate feeling of male videos.

Five stars is support, right? In the whole text, I didn't find any thread that could connect the development of the plot. Whether it's the strengthening of strength, the relationship between characters, or the development of events, I didn't find a thread that really attracted me. At least the process of reading was actually very painful for me. As I got to the end, I lost the desire to continue reading. I even feel that this protagonist is more fw than the original Rudy who just traveled through time. Later, I also saw some growth in the protagonist.

So cool and good-looking

Some may find this a bit too bland, but I think it's pretty good.

Come on author, you have potential, hold on.

It's beautiful, I love reading it, I hope the author will stick to it [crying]

Come on, the writing is very detailed. It feels like the author took on the role of writing.

I feel a little bit, it's okay so far If I were to raise a book, would this book be similar? The author is great

"If it's a perfect score of ten, how many points can it be given?" "Eight points.", "Two points deducted... Because the author- the update was too slow and not enough to read.

Too few. The author is going to use his ghost brain. Are there going to be seven stars in the future?

Looks good, looks good, likes it, looks good, likes it

What is this style called? I really like this kind of "reasonable" article with my own settings and research.

It's a good book. The writing is very good and the taste is quite good. However, I didn't understand the description of the cat in the past life. Watching it again, it feels like Luo Qixi is playing a game [laughing evilly]

I saw the latest chapter. It's a very interesting fanfic. This Rudy feels more likeable. I look forward to a different development in the next plot.

It's better than what the original author wrote. It's a pity that you wrote it a few years later. Otherwise, you would have become famous and rich.