The Demon King Asked Me to Call Him Holy Knight Outside.

Okay, okay, I personally think it's 8-9.5 Points. I feel like this book is normal and outrageous except for the main character [face covering]. Take a look for yourself, it's a really good magic text with a Chinese background. The only thing that confuses me is how Tiezhu changes his name back and forth (Boiling Sheep Sheep)

Please, this setting is very good, but can you not have a female protagonist? If there is a female protagonist, I will not be able to fight happily. I think the setting is very good, because I am afraid that the emotional drama will collapse. It's okay to have a single female protagonist, just one. Please don't write too vulgar female characters, focus on upgrading, and don't describe too much love. Please

I think the good points are the characterization and humor. On the one hand, the protagonist is a paladin who progresses slowly because he is not honest and kind. He has a deep mind and is good at making bad moves. On the other hand, he does not directly go to the dark and cruel template. In terms of career, he is very decent, so it is lively and easy to read. It is suitable for listening to books while playing games. There are many other supporting characters who also have their own personalities, such as Irene who is unexpectedly green tea and pure love, and the strong man named Lilith. Although these talents that complement the protagonist's genius are not much in the role, they make the plot come alive. Finally, there is humor in it. Many baggage shakes are very accurate.

It's a pure and refreshing article, with some comedy. The characters other than the protagonist are quite normal and quite interesting [laughs]. The world view so far seems to be a Japanese/Chinese Western fantasy with a nonsensical and funny atmosphere, and a cultural atmosphere of a mix of Chinese and English (Douluo Douluo and the like). It's just a system text. Everyone knows that the system is the main line of tasks. The story and character relationships are promoted according to the tasks of the system, otherwise it will not be successful. It's a very relaxing article, just read it [laughing evilly]

The characters have normal personalities + their fighting power is intact + the plot has some ups and downs If it can be maintained, the probability of reaching 9.5 Points is very high. If the character and combat power do not collapse, it should be a semi-pensionary story, and it should be easy to reach 9 points. Keep up the author brother😁👍

I have read Chapter 40, and I love it when I can face the airwaves. If the rhythm is controlled and the content can be maintained, it can be awarded 9 points. The slow upgrade speed is not a problem, as long as the content is not empty, 3 chapters of small activities and 5 chapters of large activities are good. After all, many frames are upgraded just to cover up the empty content. It doesn't matter whether there is a female protagonist or not. As for the emotional aspect, just say goodbye to Brother Pig step by step. It's good so far. If I really have to ask, I personally prefer a single female protagonist.

Both the plot development and characterization are far superior to most Tomato novels, but there is too little content right now and I don't know what will happen next. Writing at this level, the score shouldn't be too low, but it would be difficult to get a high score. After all, the tastes of some Tomato users are sometimes really hard to describe.

It's quite good. The rhythm and writing are well grasped. He has the qualifications of an emperor.

The novel is very well written, but I think the author should enjoy the following preferential treatment: 1Mandatory living on campus 2 Forced to get up at 6:15 to clean up housework and gather at the playground at 6:25 to recite materials loudly for intensive morning jogging 3Stand-back materials in the classroom 4Breakfast time is set to 20 minutes. The first, second and third graders take turns eating, and they are required to memorize materials during the meal queue. 5. 20-Minute lunch. Years 1, 2, and 3 take turns eating, waiting time for review. 6 Noon self-study assignments 7pm Sing the class song and take the oath 820 minutes for dinner, as usual 9 nights of self-study 10. Do not go to the toilet within 1 hour after going to bed. 11 Housekeeping Sheets Wrinkle-Free Quilt Tofu Blocks 12Require students to conduct weekly tests, monthly tests, mid-term and final tests The 13th week test results will be read out by the class teacher and posted on the class display 14 Countdown students were in the classroom during meal time, asking them to master the wrong questions in the exam The 15-day break is set to three days a week, leaving school on Saturday afternoon and returning to school on Sunday morning.

Already following the author, it looks good, I hope to update quickly, give it some time first, I am not the person who catches up with two updates a day, I hope the author writes 30,000 words a day, life only lasts 30,000 days, one more day of writing is a day I am convinced by the author and update it every day. How high can the rating be? It will take a few years.

At present, it seems to be a normal rhythm of Western fantasy novels. The poisonous points in some comments are considered normal in my opinion. The increase in level combat power is considered a normal range. The rhythm is not bad. The main reason is that the strength of the cheats in the later stages increases and the protagonist's combat power increases faster. In my opinion, the slow progression in the early stage is also a strong indicator of cheats. It is a foreshadowing for the speed. After the Breathing Technique reaches the level, it basically enters the normal rhythm of writing. In short, some readers may think that the upgrade is slow, but I feel that it is not stressful. Plug-ins are enabled normally, and there are also daily activities outside of combat. Other characters look normal and lively. In addition, regarding the protagonist's soul-transportation, messy thoughts and slow cultivation, the original awakened paladin genius boy, who was "seized" by the protagonist, in my opinion, there is no big problem, mainly because it is the opening setting in itself, and it has been put on the surface. The reason for commenting is that I saw that many people were really persuaded to quit because of these two points. It felt that it was unnecessary and not disgusting at all. It was just a setting, so I wanted to "quibble" (mainly because I enjoyed watching it and decided to justify my taste [laughter])

If it's well written, I feel like it could become a work like Dali's. I hope the author will continue to work hard and control this combat power. In the later stage, try to be like Dali and give a reward that can improve the protagonist's personal talent, so that you won't rely too much on the system.

The article is very good, but maybe I have read too many indifferent characters. I feel that the protagonist of this book is a bit too kind. The social outlook of this book is definitely suitable for most book lovers. The author deliberately added a lot of his own criticism of war and destruction of order in the process of describing the plot. And in pursuit of innovation, he brought "Involution" to another world. The Demon King system in this article is all small tasks in the early stage, and it lacks a sense of satisfaction after reading too much. It is only later that the Demon King seeds are finally related to the Demon King. It should be that the settings are perfect. There are many innovations in the article. The protagonist is kind, but you don't think of the Virgin, and the protagonist is cunning, but you don't think of him as evil. The protagonist is not a growth personality, so you can eat it with confidence.

The protagonist has qualities that are opposite to his professional characteristics: flexible bottom line, thick-skinned, rather sinister, and a magic pill. Will follow the system tasks. There is a "cute pet" (Xiao Hei). In the basic background completion, the situation of different forces is gradually revealed. The protagonist is currently planning to eat both sides of the two forces. Tied to the latest chapter, it is suspected that there is a heroine (maybe Anya, the reason for suspicion is that there are a lot of descriptions in comparison, and there is a high probability that the blushing one is basically the heroine. It's just lz's guess. You can judge by yourself from other opinions, and I mean it is possible, possible, possible), but whether there is a heroine is still open to discussion. I will wait until it is confirmed before commenting. The protagonist is considered a middle schooler, focusing on improving his strength, and currently has an unknown threat. Then the protagonist's combat power gradually improved, the fighting scenes were okay, and the plot arrangement was relatively enjoyable. That's about it. Finally, give the author a five-star support.

It's okay, but I feel that the protagonist could be more awesome. With this golden finger, the protagonist can work in all professions. Hexagons have no shortcomings. He can make his own weapons and potions. He can treat injuries by himself. He can carry, fight, assist, and attack alone or in groups. The protagonist is short of time now. Otherwise, if the protagonist develops as he does now, he will not be able to accumulate skills in a few years, and they are all at full level. Many plot protagonists are passive. Taking the initiative and becoming a full profession is not a dream.

I'll give it five stars first. I've been able to read the latest books recently. I was brought in by the villain system, and the author's setting is also very good. Although the protagonist can transcend levels, it is not out of the ordinary. After all, he is also a scroll king. I think the Western fantasy novels I've read recently are very good in setting the plot, rhythm, and writing. There are a few things I want to complain about at the moment: 1. No wonder Laojiang can't awaken the heart of the paladin. He is indeed not the Holy Mother. But it was too cold. Following the caravan, I thought it would be a good idea to take the initiative to help. I had to take action again and again every time. Well, it is indeed no problem to learn from Han Tianzun. 2. The villain system will only have the function of adding points to upgrade and cheat later on. What about the mission? What I want to see is how the Flash Blood Demon Secret Pope, who appears to be a paladin but has a dark heart, can achieve the villain's reputation through various strange methods without being exposed or killed! Now all that's left is the daily routine of persecuting ants. 3. I've been tired of reading the Snowfield chapter recently. He's really a fighting maniac and an ascetic monk. I'm afraid he'll become a cold-faced, mouthless fighter with yellow hair and blue hair in the future [Petrochemical]

It's so cute but not brainy, even the kids said it was great after watching it.

The writing is good and the plot doesn't drag out and doesn't put too much pressure on the protagonist's fighting ability. The plot behind it is a bit boring and boring.

After reading Chapter 37, I don't think it's poisonous. It's quite good in Tomato. It's a world of swords and magic, with a humorous style. It feels a little bit like you never expected to spare your life with the king. The descriptions of the characters are very natural and real. There is nothing special or deliberate. Please give it five stars to increase the score. If you have any questions later, please lower it. It's really an eye-opener. If you want to read the book, first see if you can stand the mental pollution of Chapter 98 [face covering] (6 hours) After reading Chapter 158, there are no major problems. The pace is well controlled. I just want to see if I can accept mental pollution in Chapter 98 (not considered poisonous, just a bit of a reflection). After the second level mission (around 110), it has become more serious and there are fewer jokes. I feel that the pig's feet have matured a lot and the system accounts for less. The author updates 4,000 words a day, and keeps it on the bookshelf [shy]

The writing is quite good, the plot is clean and neat, not procrastinating, and does not suppress the growth of the protagonist. It is very good. There are not many books that I can give 5 stars to.

It's pretty good to watch, and it's more realistic and has a strong sense of immersion. The protagonist is neither the kind of sad virgin who takes responsibility for everything, nor the devil who kills innocent people (still Chinese) for his own advancement. He is the kind of smart character who is good at taking advantage of loopholes. He is not a virgin but has a good outlook on life. I like this better.

I have seen 150 chapters so far, each chapter has 4,000+ words. Overall, it is very good. I will give you a 5⭐️ praise and hope the author will update it more. (Ps: I'm not a robot. You can tell whether you want to read 80% of novels just by looking at their names and introductions. Whether you can stay and read them all depends mainly on the strength of the author)

Overall, it's pretty good. This kind of subject matter is rare, so I give it one more star. The plot is also very interesting, but the name of the church is a bit funny.

There is nothing sinister about the plot, and the pace is pretty good, but as a cool novel, one chapter a day is still difficult to survive in an environment like Tomato. I hope the author can work hard to update more. One chapter a day is still too short.

Personally, I quite like it. It is in line with the author's happy and relaxed style, and the plot is quite compact. Although the early stage is not short, it seems to be overwhelming, but from the perspective of daily transition, the upgrade speed is not slow, but the world view is quite grand. I have just arrived at the new map and it feels like it will take a long time to fully unfold.

Very pretty I originally thought that this kind of system would rely on other people's imagination to do things. It seems that there is no result The one star less than the four stars is because of his first update [laughter] (bingbushi)

Yes, it's a bit interesting, but I finished it in one go. [Laughing evilly] Ga Ga update, hurry, hurry, hurry!

So far, seeing Baizhang in his early years, there isn't much of a problem. Although the plot is not up to the best in my opinion, there is no problem in giving it a 9.0 Rating on Tomato. It's just that the author wrote too little and it's not enough to read [laughs]

The pace and content of the main character are both suitable. The world view may not be that broad, and the perspective is a little worse, but the pace seems to be irresistible. I hope the author will write it soon [rolls eyes]

After reading it, there are no bad points in the 130 pictures so far, but I feel that the pace is too slow at the end. There is no need to write the Apostle of God assessment for so long. I don't see any need. It's enough to complete the assessment in about ten chapters. The same goes for the apprenticeship. It's been five chapters since the apprenticeship and I haven't started yet, but overall it's a book worth reading. Don't ask why it took so long to read Chapter 130, because I need to carefully taste it myself a few times [thinking] and then add a sentence here, the premise is that you like Western Fantasy, it's pretty good on Tomato