A Mortal's Story of Immortality: Bringing the Flying Old Demon

This book is cool The protagonist has a high level of understanding, and his personality is also lively and steady. The plot hasn't changed much, but it's really fun to watch. I have been reading novels for ten years, and this novel is to my liking. This is a very good fan novel, and the main character alone is enough to praise.

There are very few mortals who share the same story, and I am very happy to have someone write about it. But in Chapter 25 [awkward laugh] I really don't know what else can express my emotions besides this grimace of teeth and sweat [awkward laugh] From the time I entered the Qixuan Sect, all kinds of spoilers about Han Li were revealed, and by the time I reached chapter 25 I had endured enough, but I still couldn't hold back. Your words in chapter 25 not only silenced me, but also broke my gas mask.

You can read it. There is no girl or ambiguity in the latest chapter. I think even a normal person can't bear the spoilers. The protagonist is not a big shot in his previous life and has an ordinary mentality. Goldfinger is powerful. As for the nanny who doesn't like Han Li and doesn't want to be his brother, just watch the fic and just watch the parallel world without Han Li.

This set of seamless transitions directly from mortals to cultivators will be dominated by martial arts and supplemented by immortality in the later stage. This is called martial arts cultivation. Then the so-called uprooting does not need to exist. So the core is based on the five elements. The unity of the five elements during the practice period is also easy to break through. Then it will be easier to break through the spirit transformation.

Very good-looking and didn't steal women

Good, good, good, good, good I have to accept Song Yu at all. Just accept Song Yu. [Laughs] The writing is good, but there is too little emotion, so the rating cannot be improved.

Personally, I think it's pretty good in mortal fan fiction.

It's very beautiful. I like it very much. Where is my cute gold-eating bug?

The writing is good, the ideas are novel and not too abrupt, the plot is not particularly detailed, but better, and not superficial. I look forward to the follow-up. So far, the chapters have been well received! Come on!

Tomato is a rare best fan, it must be full of stars. Although it has flaws, it is free. This is the best.

It's okay in the early stage, but the combat power is a bit faster later on. Overall it's worth watching, but the chase is a bit slow and I'm afraid I'll be killed [laughs]

The protagonist's fighting skills and magical weapons are quite ancient, and it's so cool.

It looks okay, I hope the author won't let Han Li practice immortality alone,

It feels okay. If the realm is not so heaven-defying, it will be more clear. The foundation building period is the foundation building period. The foundation building period cannot compete with the core formation. This is the point of mortals. It cannot be too heaven-defying.

Nice and good fanfic

Very beautiful, very refreshing and relaxing

Very very good! Highly recommended~

Fine! Why is the score not high?

Well written, keep it up

The author has put real effort into this book

A good book, something of its own.

The score is low, but it's okay. The protagonist's cultivation does not follow the mortal system.

Come on, come on, come on, you can do it,

This rating is a bit low, maybe 8.5 Or more.

It's okay. If you have the Five Spiritual Roots, you can cultivate the Magnetic Divine Light in the future.

Okay, who said the Five Spiritual Roots are useless. The rebellion starts from now on.

Han Li and his senior brothers embarked on the road of cultivating immortality.

Not bad, not bad. At least this technique is so powerful that it can kill people by leapfrogging.

So far, it looks pretty good. I hope the combat power will continue to be better in the future. By the way, when will the two Yuan Yao sisters appear?

I've finished reading. The writing is pretty good on Tomato.