Naruto: The Konoha Orphan with Two Kekkei Genkai

The author is the hardest working person I have ever seen when it comes to coming up with a title. The plot is OK, but although there are a lot of emotional lines, the expression is a bit slow. But actually if you can calm down and read it, you can still see that it is written with more emotion.

The plot and writing are very good, and the emotional descriptions of the characters are very good, but there are big problems with the ages of the characters and the timeline in the anime. For example, Uzumaki Mito died before Kakashi's generation was born, and Nezuki died earlier than Uzumaki Mito. Both of them were dead before the White Fang incident.

It is considered to be very good among Naruto fanfics. The plot is very reasonable, there are no poisonous points, it is not a cool novel, and the writing is not bad. The identity of the protagonist is also very suitable for my taste. However, up to now, it is still about the process of the protagonist becoming stronger, which is a bit boring for me (although the author said that this is a foreshadowing for the subsequent battle). In addition, it is too slow, with an average of two or three days per chapter (each chapter has a lot of words). Anyway, it is not enough to read, but the author Seeing now, I'm wondering how you will handle the relationship between the two heroines. Hikari's possessiveness is too strong, and Terumi Mei's possessiveness is not weak. If the relationship between the two heroines is not handled well, or the way of handling it is a bit bloody, it will greatly affect the article.

It's a very good Naruto fanfic. Although some of the characters have been greatly changed, the author's description of the characters is really detailed. It is different from ordinary cool novels. I have read a lot of systematic novels and it feels really good to see a book like this.

Not bad, I quite like it. It's good to have no system and no cheats.

The writing is very detailed and beautiful. It wrote a completely different Danzo, but it really made me laugh when Danzo toasted three glasses of wine.

Beautiful and well written. It feels very good if you read it slowly. Although there are not many chapters, it is very engaging.

Well written, good luck to the author😳

The writing is really good. It doesn't have the usual trappings of most fan fiction, and it also describes the protagonist's growth process. Like a true protagonist of the story rather than a passerby who is pretending to be cool.

The Naruto fanfic with the most detailed character descriptions I have ever seen