**

The changes to Lonely Rock are acceptable. The good parts are: ① Retaining some relaxed daily life ② Adding some gravity to interpersonal relationships, adding some new elements to the original animation, increasing readability ③ Adding comments similar to those of observers, which is also very good. This is an irreplaceable complaint for many funny animations. Possible shortcomings: ① There are still too few descriptions that reflect the personality of each character. Although there is an animation background, it seems a bit thin. It is not necessary to describe his psychological activities. Some behavioral examples can be used to describe it from the side. ② The novel has a protagonist Yes, the protagonist must have a character arc. If there is no character arc, it will be no different from other Tomato novels where I travel to a world and play a person to conquer a person. Of course, this requires a certain amount of writing. If you are not sure, you can just not write it. I remembered that the most important point is that no matter it is Lonely Rock, Mygo or Hen Card, it must be classified into Qingbai. Even if you really want to become Bai, I think hinting is enough. If there is a plot like confession, it is very important. . . I think it's best not to have it

It is very comfortable to listen to the book. There is neither an irritating plot nor serious OOC. The text is also very emotional. From now on, it is a book worth adding to the bookshelf. The plot behind was thought up by people

So beautiful! I like this kind of book with twists and turns but a happy ending [like] (I almost started to curse at chapter 20, but luckily the author didn't do it)

Warning before reading: This book contains such a thing as "rejection of the world's will", and it may seem tedious in the early stages (that is, going around in circles) In addition, I personally think the writing style of this book is very good, and there are not many problems with the emotional description. But because of the "rejection of world will" mentioned above, the pace will appear to be too slow. To sum up, if you like or don't hate slow pace, this book is still worth reading. After all, the writing and description are very good. As for why I gave it one less star. It's simple, because as of the time I published this book review, the "rejection of the world's will" has not passed, so when this thing passes, I will make up for the missing star. Well, since Chapter 29, this so-called "rejection of the world's will" has basically passed, so this star can be made up. Of course, there are no shortcomings in this book at this point, it depends on what the next part says. I should continue to write down my feelings about chasing here in the form of reviews.

Don't imitate Xiangzi's way of quitting the team, author, isn't it better to focus on being relaxed and happy? There are no pros or cons, it's just classic, a classic anime stomachache plot, not sure, I'll give it another look [face covering]

The writing is very good and makes people want to read it. I hope it can be updated soon.

It's okay, but why do you need a clone?

I don't think it's a good choice to imitate Xiangzi and quit the team. Let's see what happens later. I hope it's semi-imitation.

I read the books on my bookshelf one by one. I hope your book can last 😡 When did gbc come out? Did I miss it?

The author, you have gone from reading tens of thousands or even hundreds of thousands to now purely by yourself, and you are more pure from time to time, just to drive away readers. Even if you update later, you won't be able to get back to the peak, and the continuity of reading is the most important, so I can only say, keep going. Still pretty

The content is good, but it has not been updated for a long time. Just confess when you confess, don't overdo it. Even if it is clear that Hongxia likes the protagonist, but I don't want to write about her confession so early, I hope to find a better storyline to interrupt, and then occasionally write some scenes of Hongxia's heartbeat. And based on the plot direction, in the end, the waist must be exposed in Shura Field. So, when will the author come back to update? Is it true? [What] Since I don't know how to master multiple character vests, I'll shift the focus to Lonely Rock. Hong Xia's head start is too high at the beginning, so that other vests don't feel very good when facing other band characters, so I suggest that the focus be shifted to the Lonely Rock plot line, and the branch lines are other In the world line, you can even be the main line Lonely Rock, and write other extra chapters, with Hong Xia as the female protagonist, but it feels impossible, so Hong Xia is the main palace, and the others are the harem. It is recommended not to have too many female protagonists. The female protagonist and the plot line are too long, and it feels like the author will melt like Porchi as she writes. [Laughing and crying]

It is not allowed that no one has read this book yet. I feel that the low rating is purely due to frequent delays in updating. The writing is good, the plot is reasonable, and the character creation is generally consistent with the original work. The plots of each band do not conflict. The heroine Wanfewang is super cute. I have to say that the break really affects the perception. But true fans will persist.

The protagonist is very humane. There is no mention of those characters being abandoned hastily because of any tasks. I think this is what makes the protagonist beautiful. The protagonist comes to life. She has her own emotions and is not a machine to complete the task. Like it.

The band is so proud of themselves

Give four stars to prevent pride [eat melon] It feels like there is a big hole in the setting. It's not as good as having a single identity or a band and a world.

It's very interesting and addictive. Let's put it this way. I was hit by a car today and the car pressed my foot repeatedly. No one told me, and I didn't ask the driver to take me to the hospital. I just wanted to read this novel [shy]. The author please update me regularly! This book totally hit me in the face, I dreamed of updates from the author [making faces]

The book is generally very good to read. Although the setting of the vest and the world's will to reject it makes the plot feel stomachache, it does help to add a lot of original plots. However, the vests seem to exist in the same world. It seems that the timeline is just different. I don't know how the author will write it after the protagonist has more vests. It is currently a book worth reading.

Shennong has tasted it and it is not poisonous. It is fine food. Say thank you to Shennong [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

What a gravity. It would be great if I could keep this style from now on [laughs][laughs][laughs]

It's super nice, but I don't really like that there are two worlds in the same environment.

This book may have been too delayed in the first two issues, and the updates were too slow, resulting in a poor impression, but the author's writing style is rare in Tomato. It would be much better if there were more chapters every day

Nice! There is no problem with the logic of the author's book, and the characters are not OOC. It reads smoothly, and I am already looking forward to the plot behind it.

Very nice, I like it

Will the protagonist be overturned in the future and be betrayed by friends from other worlds? Who will the protagonist marry?

It's so good, so good, so good. It's just a little bit poisonous and a little disgusting in the early stage, but later on it's like God's help, so good, so good, so good.

Shennong is here. The stomachache plot in the early stage is indeed a bit poisonous, but why do people say that the doppelgänger is a poisonous point? This is the first time I saw this setting, and it really poked me😋😋

Resurrection, resurrection, resurrection! Resurrect me quickly

All I can say about this novel is that I finally got through the first 20 pictures, oh my god The further you look at it, the more mediocre it becomes. The poison resistance is still too weak.

It's good-looking, and it's considered to be of very good quality in lonely rock music [laughs]

The plot is well handled and relaxed, and it's worth watching.