#NotInvincible, #NotBrainless, #system, # routine, #Darkness, when a heavy rain comes, what pours down is no longer the rain that nourishes all things, but the torrent that declares the end of the old era. This never-ending doomsday rain sweeping across the world is not a simple natural disaster. It is the catalyst and the key, starting a grand and cruel craze of life evolution, which is also the starting point of a new world.
Reader comments
The protagonist is a pure Japanese devil who kills everyone on sight. Very good👌🏻, if you encounter passers-by, you will kill them because they are hindering their survival [face covering].
I suggest the author use less detailed descriptions and more broad strokes. Otherwise, it will be tiring and a bit embarrassing to read. Too many words like indifference, fanaticism, etc. Are used. Try to be more detailed and appropriate. The writing is quite good. Come on, author.
It's too embarrassing, I'm still in the second grade, and I'm a little sluggish in the later stage. Come on
I think it's good, although there are some minor flaws
Advantages
1. The protagonist group kills decisively, which is very good. There is no Virgin, the IQ is online, and there is no vase.
2. Not linked to the country, very good, not licking the official
3. Combat description and pretty good, for novices
4 The setting is very good. It rains in the city, not the whole world.
5. The superpowers are also developed by oneself. They are not some kind of crystal core. The writing is interesting.
Disadvantages
1. The first killing was a bit abrupt. I understand it was for food or something, but it is okay to practice killing, but it was too fast. They should have killed them directly with insults, so it would not be so abrupt.
2. Exercise your own abilities. The core ideas are also written down, but some abilities are not exercised. It may be because they are omitted or because I read them too quickly.
3. The fight with that woman is too long. This is not a mini-boss. I encountered such a powerful one in the novice village just after it was released. It exploded in a radius of hundreds of miles. It is a bit exaggerated. Will the combat power become more and more exaggerated in the future, resulting in a faster pace, less words, and a quick ending?
It's very good, like the transition from the end of the world to the world of superpowers. There is no such stupid justice. One force rises up one by one, everyone has a common enemy, and the protagonist group has its own positioning and the characters are very vivid.
It's a good apocalyptic novel. It can be seen throughout the article that the author has written carefully and polished it. The plot is not like the traditional short story where you can know the later development after reading one paragraph. The protagonist is a shark for convenience, which is quite consistent with the mentality of the apocalypse. He has absolute power over others, and he talks nonsense with ants [laughter]
It's normal to see the author's comments at the end of the chapter saying that the data is not good. It's not that easy for new writers to push streams and data. All I can say is to hold on and wait for the flowers to bloom.
Now let's talk about the content of the novel. Generally speaking, it's okay, but some things are described too much, including narration, some evolutionary routes, and the protagonist's thinking. This results in the content not being very compact, and it also feels like a hammer in one place and a stick in the other. However, the theme and direction are still good, and it can be seen that the author has ideas.
It is not easy to write a book, it is not easy to think about it, and it is even more difficult to write it. I hope more readers can support you.
The protagonist is absolutely self-interested, which is very enjoyable to watch. The plot development is also quite novel. It is an idea that I did not expect. At present, it seems that the mastermind behind the scenes is beyond the standard, but it is also challenging.
Good-looking, good-looking, so good-looking
For a newcomer, the writing is already very good. Keep up the good work, author.
It's very level and logical. There are no cheats in it, only smart layout and confrontation.
Well written, good luck to the author
Five-star support.
Is it okay for Yun Fuyu to be the male lead?
It's very interesting, good luck to the author
Very nice, not brainless
But the prophecy was too long. I thought it was true but it turned out to be a prophecy.
Great group portrait novel
I support you, just don't be a eunuch
Ink stains but still reasonable
I believe you can do it
. It's good to see the author keep at it
Surpasses 99% of apocalyptic texts on all platforms
Reminds me of Black Flame Zhou Xing, and the two doomsday novels about card chain powers. It's not bad. I will continue to read it.
It looks good. Come on. It's better not to make the development section too long in the future. Otherwise, the progress of the plot will be a bit delayed.
Not bad, the descriptions in the first few chapters are okay, which is rare here
A very good doomsday theme, and the description of superpowers is very touching.
Good book, very good. Come on, author. Why is the rating so low?
Very pretty! The fighting and power development are really well written.
The protagonist is a pure Japanese devil who kills everyone on sight. Very good👌🏻, if you encounter passers-by, you will kill them because they are hindering their survival [face covering].
I suggest the author use less detailed descriptions and more broad strokes. Otherwise, it will be tiring and a bit embarrassing to read. Too many words like indifference, fanaticism, etc. Are used. Try to be more detailed and appropriate. The writing is quite good. Come on, author. It's too embarrassing, I'm still in the second grade, and I'm a little sluggish in the later stage. Come on
I think it's good, although there are some minor flaws Advantages 1. The protagonist group kills decisively, which is very good. There is no Virgin, the IQ is online, and there is no vase. 2. Not linked to the country, very good, not licking the official 3. Combat description and pretty good, for novices 4 The setting is very good. It rains in the city, not the whole world. 5. The superpowers are also developed by oneself. They are not some kind of crystal core. The writing is interesting. Disadvantages 1. The first killing was a bit abrupt. I understand it was for food or something, but it is okay to practice killing, but it was too fast. They should have killed them directly with insults, so it would not be so abrupt. 2. Exercise your own abilities. The core ideas are also written down, but some abilities are not exercised. It may be because they are omitted or because I read them too quickly. 3. The fight with that woman is too long. This is not a mini-boss. I encountered such a powerful one in the novice village just after it was released. It exploded in a radius of hundreds of miles. It is a bit exaggerated. Will the combat power become more and more exaggerated in the future, resulting in a faster pace, less words, and a quick ending?
It's very good, like the transition from the end of the world to the world of superpowers. There is no such stupid justice. One force rises up one by one, everyone has a common enemy, and the protagonist group has its own positioning and the characters are very vivid.
It's a good apocalyptic novel. It can be seen throughout the article that the author has written carefully and polished it. The plot is not like the traditional short story where you can know the later development after reading one paragraph. The protagonist is a shark for convenience, which is quite consistent with the mentality of the apocalypse. He has absolute power over others, and he talks nonsense with ants [laughter]
It's normal to see the author's comments at the end of the chapter saying that the data is not good. It's not that easy for new writers to push streams and data. All I can say is to hold on and wait for the flowers to bloom. Now let's talk about the content of the novel. Generally speaking, it's okay, but some things are described too much, including narration, some evolutionary routes, and the protagonist's thinking. This results in the content not being very compact, and it also feels like a hammer in one place and a stick in the other. However, the theme and direction are still good, and it can be seen that the author has ideas. It is not easy to write a book, it is not easy to think about it, and it is even more difficult to write it. I hope more readers can support you.
The protagonist is absolutely self-interested, which is very enjoyable to watch. The plot development is also quite novel. It is an idea that I did not expect. At present, it seems that the mastermind behind the scenes is beyond the standard, but it is also challenging.
Good-looking, good-looking, so good-looking
For a newcomer, the writing is already very good. Keep up the good work, author.
It's very level and logical. There are no cheats in it, only smart layout and confrontation.
Well written, good luck to the author
Five-star support.
Is it okay for Yun Fuyu to be the male lead?
It's very interesting, good luck to the author
Very nice, not brainless But the prophecy was too long. I thought it was true but it turned out to be a prophecy.
Great group portrait novel
I support you, just don't be a eunuch
Ink stains but still reasonable
I believe you can do it
. It's good to see the author keep at it
Surpasses 99% of apocalyptic texts on all platforms
Reminds me of Black Flame Zhou Xing, and the two doomsday novels about card chain powers. It's not bad. I will continue to read it.
It looks good. Come on. It's better not to make the development section too long in the future. Otherwise, the progress of the plot will be a bit delayed.
Not bad, the descriptions in the first few chapters are okay, which is rare here
A very good doomsday theme, and the description of superpowers is very touching.
Good book, very good. Come on, author. Why is the rating so low?
Very pretty! The fighting and power development are really well written.