Luo Xiaohei: From the Start, I Have the Twelve Talismans and Am an Immortal

The fat intestines are good-looking and very appetizing. Here I would like to quote Mr. Jiang Fei Chang's words: "It's hit! It's so hit!"

It's okay. Although I haven't read many fan novels about Luo Xiaohei, maybe about three, this one is the one I've read the most. The disadvantage may be that the use of these 12 spells is a bit rough, and they feel useless. They are all auxiliary functions. I take back what I said before. Although the subject matter of this book is very good, the use of abilities is too rough. What else can I say? It is not scary to like your own apprentice, but it is quite scary to like the apprentice you raised since childhood. To be honest, I was really angry after watching it. The subject matter is obviously very good.

The first part is quite consistent with the original work, but when Xiao Hei appears, it feels more and more biased. The little details accumulate, and in the end, the readers will feel a lot of strangeness. For example, if your name, race and some familiar plots have changed, you will feel a strange feeling. I hope the author will work hard Changed. It doesn't fit in with the previous plot at all.

I admit that the first 70 chapters of this book are well written 😄, but they are a bit poisonous but not too much. But later on, they are poisonous and hateful. The protagonist changes his tone and talks in a way that smells of Eastern Buddhism mixed with Western Buddhism 😄.

If you raise your daughter well, she won't really become a wife, right? I hope there won't be a female protagonist 😅😅😅 I can't help it. I really like this subject matter, but it turns out that she is really a child bride. I don't have to guess, I know which paragraph I will write later. Is the protagonist making Qing Ning immortal? Anyway, the heroine will definitely not die 🙂🙂🙂

Four stars is the highest rating I can give him, and he has been a disciple since he was a child. I thought you were raising me as your daughter, but my wife couldn't accept it!

If I had known that I would only update these two chapters today, I would not have come. After reading these two chapters, I was immersed in it, but I didn't expect that there was a cliff ahead of me. I didn't have time to look back and fell to the bottom of the cliff. After all, it was the younger brother who overstepped his bounds. If the older brother didn't change his behavior, the younger brother would have nothing to say. My brother's out of context behavior really broke my brother's heart. Even your knees are bleeding, but you are still as indifferent as a glacier. It was an unlucky time for the younger brother to come. He should have been fattened and then slaughtered, but unfortunately the book written by his older brother was so captivating that the younger brother couldn't put it down. He could only be obsessed with it as if he was bewitched and couldn't extricate himself. Also, it is rare for my brother to update twice a day. How can my younger brother expect his brother to update one more chapter? That's all...

It looks okay to me! The main reason is that the author's setting of the 12 zodiac animals is very suitable to my liking. What do you say? Ever since the male protagonist became a god, it has become less interesting and the plot has become increasingly boring.

Isn't fan fiction meant to change the tragedies that should not have happened in the original work, add plots that are not in the original work, and add plots and characters to make the novel more exciting? Why do some people always say that the author created a private plot and gave negative reviews if it does not conform to the original work? If so, you can just read the original work instead of reading fan fiction. 🤔 Some people also say that the author raised a child bride and gave negative reviews in the end. She is an immortal, and she is a modern person, with unlimited life span. What happened to the child bride? Reading novels about cultivating immortals can make a disciple love the master, but Luo Xiaohei's fan fiction can't 🤦 🤦 🤦 Come on, author! There are always some plots in novels that make people dislike them and give them negative reviews. Don't care about these. No one is perfect. Just treat the fans who like this novel sincerely and listen with an open mind.

The jujube tree in the courtyard somehow produced a few fruits this year. When I picked them and tasted them, they were a bit bitter and not good. But when I think of you in my dream, the sourness in my mouth becomes a little sweeter. In my spare time, I turned to look out the window. There is summer, but it is not just summer. There is chaos, there is idleness, and there is splendor and splendor that cannot be concealed by spring flowers and autumn moon. There are green locust trees and tall willows swallowing new cicadas, and the wind blows into the strings. There is gauze kitchen rattan mat. The room was quite stuffy, and suddenly I felt inspired, so I picked up the pen that had not been wet for a long time. I felt that I should write something, but I didn't know where to start. Maybe it was because I was feeling depressed that day, so I wrote down the next "front row" and then gave it up.