Don’t Be Afraid, Princess. This Time, I’ll Be the Boss Myself

I would like to give the author some advice. Can the emotional portrayal of the protagonist not be so deliberate? It can be made clear by just saying it. If it is highlighted repeatedly, it will be too cumbersome and affect the perception. The subject matter and logic of this article are good, and overall it is good.

So pretty! The author's golden finger for the protagonist is not exaggerated but not trivial either. The plot is fast-paced but not superficial. The protagonist's IQ is not awkward and the character creation is not dull. Especially when the author describes a big scene like war, it really has an epic picture feel. The more I read, the more I get addicted. It's a lot of fun. I really can't understand the latest chapters 🙂 I said before that I was very curious about how the author would deal with the situation where the royal family and the princess unilaterally severed their relationship with the protagonist and then were completely unable to deal with the rebellious ministers in the north. At least so far, the plots described by the author are all what I like, but if the protagonist is to be described If it were written as a character who played a game and was attracted by the personality charm of a certain NPC, and became that NPC's camp after time travel, I would really feel disgusted [laughing] For example, I especially don't want to see the protagonist who has been working sincerely from the beginning, and ends up encountering this kind of situation. As soon as an outsider instigates or just relies on an unfounded prophecy, he does not care about all the previous performance and efforts, and there is immediate distrust and even betrayal. Later, the protagonist continues to pay without any complaints and the other party (referring to the princess and the royalist) can accept it with peace of mind. If this were the case, I would really give up the book directly. Surely the protagonist who the author himself put in so much effort ended up being kicked out by the princess because of an inexplicable prophecy. Now he came to save a stupid princess who decided to compromise because of two threats. After saving, he said he was sorry for being late 👍 👍 👍 I really can't stand this kind of dog-licking plot. Goodbye

It's a great salvation novel. The combat and planning are pretty good, but please don't mind if it has a bit of an old-fashioned passionate plot. And don't skip reading it with King Crimson or I'll be angry o(´^`)o. What mainly attracts me is the portrayal and shaping of the characters. I hope it doesn't have the tail cut off. And you can also add some death plot appropriately, which will make it dark and cruel (after all, this is reality, and it will not deviate from the main subject). Reading the book reviews, I can only say that some low stars are not like human beings. Every novel has clowns or low scores. Please don't affect the experience. Thank you Shen Nong for reading it. Overall, it is a good book. I evaluate it based on my years of experience as a bookworm. After all, it's not easy to get gold from tomatoes (˃ ⌑ ˂ഃ )

Classic Amber Flow reminds me of when I watched "Summoner of the Holy Sword" before, come on

It's a very good Amber Sword novel. It's a bit too similar to the previous one, but the flaws are not hidden. I hope that the later development can avoid the problem of quickly turning to the mythical direction like Fei Yan, which makes the early farming seem ineffective. In the later stage of Lao Fei's writing, it feels like I have forgotten what I wrote at the beginning.

It is a book that is very comfortable to read, a Western fantasy + game structure. The world view and plot are very suitable to my taste. I like the protagonist, a person with strong subjective initiative, who can control the situation. The writing rhythm is above the average level of Tomato. It's been a long time since I followed a book so much. It has saved the book shortage. I hope the author will update it fiercely [laughter]

The bloody king, swords and magic, the protagonist really perfectly fits the image of a savior in my heart, crushing a bunch of gangsters who are nothing without the protagonist's aura. The female protagonists are not stereotyped, they all have their own shining points, and they are not just dodder flowers that only revolve around the male protagonist. The world view is grand and the writing is very good. I hope it doesn't end badly, and I also hope they can get a happy ending 💕

It's very beautiful, with clear logic, thoughtful thinking, fluent language and sentences, and ups and downs of the story... Well, actually the best thing is that I like to read this kind of book that gathers momentum. The protagonist has a correct outlook on life and makes the reader feel comfortable.

I think it's very interesting. Why are so few people watching it? The protagonist has a good outlook on life, knows a lot, is strong, and will accept the girls who should be accepted. The part where he said to the elves "only be allies, not rulers" made me even more excited [blowing kisses]. I like this kind of protagonist who is friendly to good people and treats them equally. His great personal charm makes the admiration of his teammates and the heroine reasonable. If you like the protagonist who is a savior, I highly recommend watching it!

Overall it's unremarkable. The characters are really well drawn, with flesh and blood, not a complete plane. But the characters' appearances (I've read 100 chapters so far) and the plots are a bit too classic, which is annoying. It is recommended that you give an independent plot of 2-5 hundred words before the character appears. Then there is the setting of the plot. How should I put it? It is very "classic", at least it will not make me (I should be considered an old bookworm) feel repetitive. It's more suitable for people who haven't read too many cool articles. There is also the punctuation mark. Your use of punctuation marks often makes me think that the protagonist has spoken out the future (the supporting character has obviously given a reasonable explanation for why the protagonist knows so much, and I don't understand it if the protagonist does not accept it. [Because this feels like the supporting character is very unintelligent sometimes]), and then other characters speak immediately, which makes me understand that it is inner activity. It is recommended that you use words such as '' to express mental activities. Finally, there is a sense of separation between the plots, which is not something you can only write each plot well. There is almost no coherence between plots (this is almost a common problem in rebirth novels). I have read so many rebirth articles, and I feel that some good books dig their holes in the first few chapters, and some have more than ten chapters. I wish you better and better, there are fewer and fewer people you can watch. Five-star praise, support [send heartfelt]