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The story line is indeed compared with the original work, and is even better. It can be said that it combines memories with the characteristics of modern online literature. There is no sense of inconsistency in reading, and the material selection is also very good. It uses ancient Chinese secret history and folklore as the material, which makes the reading threshold of this book a bit higher. But it is indeed like this. The author is entertaining young people, but they are just young people who have grown up. The only flaw is that it is updated! ! ! The characteristics and disadvantages of modern online articles are extremely clear. The characteristics are that their plots and viewing pleasure are very good, and readers will be very interested in reading. However, the disadvantages are also obvious. Internet articles will inevitably fall into the routines followed by their predecessors. The author is indeed making some innovations, switching from the multi-protagonist group portrait perspective of the original work to a narrative perspective with Mo Duoduo as the protagonist. This kind of perception makes me wonder whether some of the articles I have read before will deviate from the core narrative framework of the original work and become a folklore and cultural novel with only a different name? Of course, these are just some of my suggestions. Maybe the author will have better ideas later. I still want to talk to the author about my thoughts sincerely. The early stage of the work is still a group portrait. It is understandable that we highlight Mo Duoduo's position as the leader of the team. However, in the later stage, it will be completely based on Mo Duoduo's life experience. Wouldn't it be inappropriate? Although the author's articles and thoughts are very good, maybe you can stop coding at high speed for a while and think about your starting point. Is it really the adventure team that you are familiar with and everyone is familiar with?

Good looking, suspected to be a genuine new book from Chajiu

The author is great, the writing is very good, I love watching [Flying Kiss][Flying Kiss][Flying Kiss]

The writing is very good, very deep, very novel, and the content is very high-level. After reading it, I felt a strong sense of shock and felt very satisfied. However, some of the content is abbreviated and seems to have been interrupted. It can be improved and it will be better if each part is well integrated. Then, I really love the Charlie IX fanfic and I love it too. God knows how excited I was when I discovered Charlie IX on Foreign Persimmon. I collected it without even thinking about it. It's really worth reading [Blowing Kisses][Flowing Kisses][Flowing Kisses]

It's good-looking and exciting. Tang Xiaoyi has become the messenger who knows the setting. The freshness has decreased and he is cold, so it's a bit strange. But the character has not become weak, and the writing is not so difficult to accept. Although there are many main characters, there are also many other people's descriptions, so it is still very good. But using so many is not... But or not... Yes, I have to remember this.

It feels quite similar to the original book, but I feel like Xiaoyi is not as vicious.

Super super pretty

The writing is very good, like Leo's Vision. Let me see the former King Charles 9.

This is very beautiful, I watched it from 9:00 to 10:00

It's really beautiful! ! ! Simply a fairy product

Very good and scary

[Thinking] It looks good, recommended! [Like][Like][Like]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking. It has a sense of fate (?

I haven't finished it yet, but it's really good! 😍

It's really good. I started watching it in the third grade. I'm still watching it now in the third grade. It's really good.

The storylines are all very interesting

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It looks good, the content is very good, highly recommended.

Good book, good book! Great book! !

Good-looking, the plot is quite new

Good looking good looking good looking

Very nice looking

Delicate structure, very beautiful

It's really a childhood classic. The first time I took the initiative to buy a book was Charles IX

I loved seeing it when I was a kid, and I still love reading it now. It's very well written.

The plot is very attractive and gripping

It's so immersive that I can't stop. I have a strong sense of adventure, so I highly recommend it!

The plot is thrilling and exciting, and it's really good to watch (I'm not good at writing, so I can only praise it this way)