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The writing is really good, the plot is tight and the pace is fast. Although I don't actually like Nobita Bear very much, the relationship between Nobita Bear and Doraemon is worthy of recognition. After all, they have been accompanying me throughout my childhood.

Doraemon in Tomato is a breath of fresh air. Compared with other Doraemon fandoms that randomly change characters, engage in time travel, travel through souls, and seize bodies, I can only say that it is as good as it can be. At the same time, I would like to mention another book that is equally good, "Future Choice, Lisa Returns", although it has fewer words than this book, but it is still a good choice. 6666 Actually doesn't have 7 points yet.

*"The day you met must be very special, so it will be played in your mind every day and every night." "Just because that day, you met it, and it met you. From then on, you had it, and it had a home."

As of writing this review, the book already has 113 chapters. The style of this work is fan fiction on an online platform, and its audience is biased towards novel readers who have read the original "Doraemon". This work achieves the purpose of enriching the plot and attracting readers in terms of details and narrative techniques. In terms of details, this book is a fan work of "Doraemon". The author introduced new props to solve the difficulties in the story while retaining many details in the original work, such as multiple props "golden bat", "suffering vessel" or the return of Lisa, which all enhance the senses and intimacy of readers who have watched the original work. In different stories, the protagonist Nobita's personality is similar, but his growth path is different. This change in the character arc makes the multiple stories not tend to be unified, but focus on diversity. These details make the original work more than just a backdrop, but a real universe, and the characters are not dolls but beings with real personalities. As a unit drama, the characteristic of "Doraemon" - the independence of the stories - would have been a shortcoming that its fan adaptations had to face, that is, it was difficult to connect the episodes. However, this book does the opposite and transforms this dilemma into a liberalized narrative similar to prose. , Through the 11 short stories so far, connected them with a main line with redemption as the core, enriching the plot of the short stories while retaining the advantages of the original work. The audience will not be unable to understand the follow-up due to missing the previous situation, and achieve a smooth two-level logic within the story and between the stories. However, the length and weight of the story in this work are slightly insufficient. In the first half of the book, the narrative rhythm of the story is short and fast, focusing on the advancement of the plot. However, in the second half of the book, the length is obviously lengthened, and the rhythm changes to long and thin, focusing on the description and growth of the characters. It is undeniable that this is a concession to the inspiration of the plot, and it also solves the sense of fragmentation of the plot of a too fast narrative. However, if the length is too long, it will inevitably cause the rhythm to drag and the plot to become dependent, weakening the advantage of the second argument of "liberalization". From this point of view, the two advantages should be balanced, otherwise it will become a fish and a bear, gaining one and losing the other.

A rare Doraemon fan who gave the heroes in the dark ending a good ending. Five stars.

I just started reading and read four chapters. The author's writing is really good and the details are outstanding. I still think there are several points that can be explored in depth, such as the real reason why Nobita's father jumped from the building, mental parasitism, zombies, soul control, and the influence between dimensions and time and space.

The writing is very good, and the characters are quite consistent with the image, but the story feels a bit repetitive, and many of them are about the big bear getting sick. I wonder if the author has seen the 18-year-old Nobi Nobita? I hope the author writes this story I remember that the original work had two endings, one with regret, and one with no regrets and the world was destroyed together. Why don't you think about the author's regretful one and the unrepentant one?

I have to mention "Nobita's Counterattack on the Magic Road". I would like to call this chapter "Teng". With its rigorous setting, profound characterization, full emotional tension, sharp metaphor of social reality, and magnificent epic structure, it has far exceeded the scope of ordinary fan works. It is a masterpiece with a high degree of completion, both ideological and artistic qualities, and can be regarded as one of the models in the field of fan creation.

Some time ago, I saw a second creation about Nobita on Station B. What would happen if Nobita lived in war years? Then I was a senior soldier of the Kwantung Army, but he resisted when faced with the massacre. I can only say that he is worthy of being a Nobita, such a gentle person. I feel that this can also be written, but it will be more sensitive.

It's already one million words long, so let's rate it and comment! I really like this book. It has a variety of themes and each chapter is like watching a theater version. First of all, Breaking Point rewrites the endings of dark fan fiction, allowing the persecuted heroes in these dark fan fiction to regain happiness. The vegetative Nobita grows limbs and wakes up again. Nobita regains hope after jumping off a building and regains Shizuka's love. The mentally ill Nobita returned to normal, returned to a loving family, and had his own job. In the infamous "Fujimoto Hiroshi Interview", the ending of Nobita's euthanasia has also been changed. This poor Nobita, who only imagined everything in his dreams, finally ushered in his own light. There is also the famous Funeral Nobita, whose destiny was also changed by Doraemon. Even Shizuka, whose personality collapsed, was saved and became a person who no longer relied on the power of others. It was deeply touching. There are also those imaginative singularity stories, among which my favorite is the magical world. Nobita in the magical world suffered from low self-esteem due to talent issues and almost missed Shizuka's love. The arrival of Doraemon changed his destiny and helped him become the legendary great magician! The most commendable thing is that the author discusses the philosophy of human nature and strength in the article, and finally connects it to the theatrical version of "Nobita's Adventure in the Demon World", which is simply a stroke of genius! Secondly, my favorite is the Kamen Rider chapter. Before Doraemon arrived, Nobita was already a true hero. Faced with the betrayal of his friends and the accusations of those he protected, he stood firm in his heart, refused to be influenced by the outside world, and stayed true to the right path. This is simply the embodiment of chivalry! In the Resident Evil chapter, the process of Nobita and Seina going from strangers and dislike to gradually falling in love also touched my heart... Finally, the author is writing the Ultraman chapter. The author has a really deep understanding of Ultraman, and his interpretation of Ultraman's spirit is also profound! Thank you author for bringing me so many wonderful stories... It's a pity that so few people are watching... I really don't want such a good book to be buried... It would be nice if more people came to see it...

Hope the author. It can change the outcome of another Nobita's world. The hero of that novel had his kidney removed. Doraemon was turned into a toilet by the time traveler. The husband's parents were also killed by him, and the ending was very dark. It was very painful for me to watch.

The writing is really good, with all kinds of possibilities and all kinds of heroes heading towards happiness one by one. I wish every little hero Nobita happiness [like][like][like]

Personally, I think it looks really good, but I should give little Dora a break when appropriate. I feel like it would be nice to occasionally intersperse the main universe.

Can you write about Nobita's Blue Bird? It's great to watch, but the episode of Nobita's Blue Bird was too much. Can you make up for the regrets and round out the plot? That robot girl is so pathetic. Shizuka Fat Tiger Kofuku. It was all over the top in that episode. I hope the author can make up for his regrets

The elements of this book are composed of passion, apocalypse, special photography, daily life and love! The main theme is a story that transcends despair and grievance and welcomes hope and warmth! This book has characters such as Xiong Jing, Xiong Nong, and Duo Xiong! You can even hit Xiongshan in certain chapters! If you want, you can still knock off two Doraemon CPs! But this is not a harem story! It is 100% pure love writing! ! !

This book is really healing! After finishing it some time ago, I was deeply impressed. Many chapters cleverly adapted the ending of Doraemon's conspiracy theory, and used warm writing to resolve the original heaviness. It is easy and reassuring to read. It is a heart-warming work worth recommending (free platform, what else do you want)

Could this Doraemon be the Doraemon created by Nobita Kami? Because Nobita Kami's original purpose of creating Doraemon was to change the world line, this Doraemon has qualities that ordinary Doraemon does not have and can save other world lines.

I think I can write about the Resident Evil version of Nobita. Some versions of Nobita really need the help of Doraemon, the original second generation, G version, etc.

Looking at the ratings, I thought it was very bad, but because this is Doraemon, I watched it and found that it is indeed very good👌🏻[Cool][Cool][Cool][Cool] In a sense, it is a real irony of reality that it has such a low rating but still looks so good [rolls eyes][rolls eyes][rolls eyes][rolls eyes][rolls eyes]

A great Doraemon fan, I personally think Doraemon is a rare masterpiece. Compared with the original Doraemon fanfic, this novel breaks through the imagination even more. It is touching and passionate about Doraemon and Nobita Nobita, allowing us to see multiple different Nobitas. Based on the multi-temporalization of each Nobita and different era backgrounds, it is very fresh and makes people never tire of it.

I have seen the latest one so far. The characters are basically in line with the original work, and the plot is really attractive. I was immersed in it all at once. You can watch it [Adoration] Has the author ever thought about bringing in the characters from the theatrical version to help? [Thinking] For example, if there is a more outrageous and serious crisis, it would be very interesting to bring in various forces from the theatrical version, such as the Kingdom of Clouds, the Hulk, Hajime's Kingdom where billions of young people have time machines to make cats and dogs travel in time and space, the Kingdom of the Great Magic Mirror, the Dragon Knights, and the Iron Man Corps. [Thinking] [Thinking] [Thinking]

It's good to read, but it has a lot of jargon, like AI, but it's definitely watchable. I've finished reading more than 130 chapters, so I believe you can watch it.

The stories are well written [like]

To be honest, this book is really good. If you don't like conspiracy theories, it's definitely worth putting on your bookshelf.

How can I put it, it feels very warm, as if I have watched a few more episodes of anime, and the burning parts are quite burning.

This novel is very good, I don't know how many times better than those essays that casually smear Nobita and destroy the character design of Doraemon if you don't like it [Like]

It's time for Doraemon to appear in the world of Resident Evil, author Author, has Shizuka been infected by the virus a long time ago? It's just that the virus has been sleeping. The main task of those mourning tide attack shelters is to take away Shizuka, and then use the queen virus to awaken the virus in Shizuka's body, thereby killing Nobita or infecting Nobita.

I wonder if I can include the plots of Nobita Nobi's Resident Evil or Dead Space games.

The writing is quite good, and it is a very innovative article. This is the first time I have seen the correction of the false ending/dark fanfic. I would like to ask who wrote the prototype of the young man enslaving Doraemon.

↗Speechless, I really shed tears