Transformed into a Frigid Girl: Sorry, No Use Spending Money

It's really not a change of marriage [crying] It's really not a change of marriage [crying] It's really not a change of marriage [crying] It has been changed, everything has been changed, there are no brothers anymore, the brothers are gone, there are no brothers anymore, the brothers are gone, there are no brothers anymore, the brothers are gone! The author seems to be a bit similar, hahahahahahahaha It's really not a purely seizing body flow, it's a return flow!

I'm relatively lucky. Although I added it to the bookshelf last month, I let this book sit in the dust because I'm lazy. I just clicked it today. If I had read it last month, I would definitely remove it from the bookshelf + 2 stars. However, I read this book today, maybe this is fate (do you believe in gravity?)? , Although at present, as a book, this book can be said to be "unknown", but it can be seen that the author's attitude is very serious. In summary, I like the author's attitude very much, although I lack experience in writing for the first time, and the AI ​​polishing taste is a bit strange. The revised plot still has some problems in terms of rhythm and space allocation. But the author, these failures are definitely not meaningless. They are the cornerstone of the author's subsequent plot and even the next book. I accidentally talked too much [cover face] [cover face] [cover face]. In short, don't stop! I have seen too many favorite authors disappear. As a sensitive and nostalgic person, I really can't bear the cyber funeral. [Cry][Cry][Cry]

The book is a good book, and the author listened to his advice and changed everything. However, the pace of the story is a bit slow and could be sped up a bit! Come on.

It's true that there are no more poisonous points in a normal whitening article. It's already a normal whitening article. You can read it, but I still have to leave. Because I don't like the body seizing genre. When I saw the protagonist found out that he was a body seizing man and faced various problems and Ziwei was in an awkward mood, I felt that there were a lot of things to think about during this period and he was not in the mood to do such a thing. In the end, the protagonist also fell in love with Ziwei, and looking at the plot, it seemed that he had the idea of ​​playing the original Gu Qingyao. This is not the case. Necessary. You said you are worried about various issues such as being admitted to a mental hospital. In fact, you are not. Being admitted to a mental hospital (involuntary hospitalization) is determined by two aspects. One is the potential threat you pose to society and people around you, and the other is your ability to take care of yourself. As long as you are not okay, you will be fine if you stab yourself with a knife or harm yourself. I think that instead of acting like a stranger (which actually means that the original owner has quietly passed away from the world), it is better to openly prove to the original owner's parents, using the knowledge in his mind, his abilities, and various things as evidence, and then tell them about the accident. Their daughter has probably disappeared from this world, so that they at least know that their daughter may have died, and at least have the opportunity to pay homage to their daughter. Although it will be very tiring and troublesome to do what I said, it will have a certain meaning for the protagonist himself and the people close to the original owner. The protagonist can even return to his original position reasonably quickly or do something new (since I don't need to be secretive, time can be accelerated) In short, this is a qualified book about whitening. I have seen people write it like this and it became popular. Maybe this book also has a chance to become popular, but I have to give up because of personal concepts and tastes.

The author feels that the writing style is quite delicate and beautiful. I love reading it! !

At present, it seems that this book is most likely to be slow-paced (?) I still don't quite understand what the main plot is. It may also be that the number of chapters is too few and the amount of information is too little. I can only say that the author needs to increase the pace, making the readers too confused. I quite like this kind of Lily with a little brain-burning style. I can only say that the author should work hard.

Good, bookworm appreciates it.

It's so beautiful [sending my heart], cheers for the author!

You must finish it well [crying][crying][crying]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, like it

Well written, a bit interesting

Support the author, come on!

It's okay. I'd rather eat a little bit of it if I mix it with pigs and eat tigers.

Suddenly encounter the knight of the apocalypse, mysterious power intervenes, transform into a pity girl

Wow wow wow, the world view is a bit like science fiction. Now that I have seen this, I still feel that there are still big pitfalls. Continue to catch up.

I watched it after I changed it, and I think it looks pretty good. Come on.

It's pretty. Come on.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh

It's okay, the author's writing is good, and he listens to advice

The author is the king of adjectives [Thinking]

I really think it's very beautiful, but the updates are too slow. I would like to see more posts [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

How many words are you going to write?

I really don't want to poke. I really don't want to poke. I really don't want to poke.