Gou Was in the Palace and Picked up the Supreme Immortal Magic at the Beginning

The most amazing thing is that it breaks away from the martial arts stereotype of "fighting for the sake of fighting" and uses delicate brushwork to imbue the light and shadow of the sword with human warmth. The protagonist's growth path from a common man to a famous figure in the world does not rely on the exhilarating feeling of a secret book dropped from the sky. Instead, he uses the plot of "admitting defeat" three times to express the true meaning of "a hero is not invincible, but one who continues to advance despite difficulties." This anti-routine setting makes the character solid. The description of martial arts in the book is even more original. The author does not pile up the names of the moves, but uses the environment to illustrate the kung fu. During the duel in the bamboo forest, "the bamboo leaves condensed into blades with the sword energy, but left no trace when they fell to the ground." What's even more rare is that it gently connects the grievances of the world with the righteousness of the family and the country, without shouting empty slogans. It only uses the protagonist's daily life of guarding a border town, allowing the core of the "chivalrous man" to be naturally revealed. When I close the book, I remember not only the wonderful fights, but also the passion and tenderness hidden behind the moves. This is what martial arts should be like.

The writing is very good, very good, very good, but it is a bit too tiring. It sounds too tiring and tiring. It is the foreshadowing in the early stage. It is very good. The author should work hard on writing.

I can hear the whispers of immortal items. By working hard and seizing opportunities, I have become an immortal by practicing martial arts from a slave who can be killed at will. When we meet on a narrow road, the brave one wins. I reach the top of the snow.

Yes, the overall direction of this book is still very good. As long as the author is willing to persevere, there is still a good chance that this book will become popular. But some details are still not rigorous enough. This needs to be changed, otherwise many readers will think it is too poisonous. Then there is this setting, I don't recommend a harem, a single heroine is fine @PipiXiaJushi

Very eye-catching, not boring writing, five stars!

Oh my god, it's so good. The logic of the plot is very reasonable. It doesn't feel awkward like those written by newbies. It's very comfortable to read. Why is the score so low? It's unreasonable. This book is definitely underestimated. Maybe it's just a new book. The ratings will definitely increase in the future. I'll give it a try.

Not procrastinating, not sloppy, fast-paced, with a clear plot, satisfying grudges, both chivalry and fantasy.

The protagonist climbs up from the weak, tough, bold, careful and cautious. This is the normal life of ordinary people. The life of ordinary people is walking on thin ice, with choices everywhere. One mistake may lead to an abyss. Because it is ordinary, it will not be earth-shattering when it blooms, but it is also the splendor of one's life. I have been here, I have bloomed, and I have no regrets.

Slowly drawing, it's wonderful, it can only be said to be a slight change

Every word is golden, not a single one is redundant, and it has a strong sense of substitution.

Nice! Fascinating! Ha ha! Come on!

It's a very novel subject matter that suits my taste very much. I hope you can continue to work hard and not stop updating.

Chapter 25, Where does the fire spiritual power come from? ? No air has been introduced into the body yet

Looks good, pretty good

So far, there is nothing sinister about it. I just feel that the people who deal with the male protagonist are not particularly greedy. Isn't the world of immortality very cruel? I think we can give the male protagonist a little frustration, of course the author wrote it very well! !

It's nice to watch, and it's different from the brainless upgrade-style cultivating immortals. I recommend [shy]

The writing is indeed good. Although some plots are not handled satisfactorily, the flaws do not hide the good points [Like]

The plot is ups and downs, the description is detailed, and you can watch it at a glance

Fellow Taoist, you have written about the loneliness of the Immortal Lord, the confusion of the Divine Lord, the loneliness of the Demon Emperor, the wandering of the casual cultivator, the unwillingness and hesitation of the Lord Crossing the Tribulation. At the same time, you have also written about the sorrow that cannot be cured by the Marrow Cleansing Pill. My heart was filled with emotions when I first read it, and my heart was shaken when I read it again! It not only describes Qingqiu Jiuwei's obsession and madness for mortal love, but also describes the Kunlun Sword Immortal's unforgettable feelings for his deceased Taoist companion, and also writes the Netherworld Ghost Lord's distant gaze and deep sorrow for the goddess of heaven.

You can write a book, your IQ is online It's okay in the early stage, but I still cry in the later stage. It's very uncomfortable to risk your life to do the task. Just practice a few pots of elixirs and it will cost you hundreds or thousands of spiritual stones. Each spiritual stone has a contribution point, and a task has more than a dozen spiritual stones. Why bother? Why bother? If I don't cry, I still have nothing to write about [face covering]

Good book, good reading. I love the author. The characters are very delicate.

Reading quietly until dawn [laughing][laughing][laughing]

Good book. Worth a look.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Fortunately I didn't go to see it! ! Otherwise it will be a waste of my time! ! !

Beautiful, indescribably beautiful, chocolatey

Les Misérables + Immortal World [Working on draft][Learned][Eating Melon][Attention]

It's still watchable, the plot is tight

The score for such a beautiful article is too low. Give it a try!

Su Ming, fate. This is also the key to your becoming a fifth-step monk, freeing yourself from the mercy of the author. [Laugh]