How Come My Children Have Traveled Through Time?

I think it's beautiful, but very cold. Everyone has their own pain but they open up their hearts in the relationship between them. The protagonist actually did nothing wrong and who would care about the feelings of a false thing? The protagonist did not intentionally torture them before writing their story, it was just a way to release stress and complete work. This is normal for him as a human being. Their sudden appearance in the real world is also at a loss, but it also deeply suppresses the protagonist. He attributes their suffering to his own problems and feels guilty. The heartache shows that his sense of responsibility has grown over time and they have begun to understand the world and each other. In the front, facing the oppression and incomprehension of life makes the article full of depression, but the little actions later prove that each of them is kind. The teacher's writing is very good, the emotional expression, the language and the narrative content are smooth and there are no mistakes, so keep it up [sending my heart]

Super pretty! ! Really good! Especially that kind of tiny light in despair, that kind of mutual rescue, I especially like it. The emotional descriptions are very delicate, and each character is well created! ! Curious about the story lines of the six characters in the book written by the protagonist [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

Great needless to say. I really, really like this book. . The author's writing style is very good (I really like the style of adapting the teacher's Bible), the plot is smooth, everyone in it has a distinct personality, and everyone is a good baby. I like Lu Lin's stock more. No matter what, we are all very cute. It is more important for the seven of you to live a good life than anything else [Sending my heart]

Pretty good-looking, right? The front part is not very good, after all, the paragraphs are too big, but the back part is much better. This book pays more attention to the description of personal emotions and prefers group portraits. At present, the overall style feels a bit depressing. Also, this is what I'm most curious about. Since internet celebrities are mentioned in the article, why not let Xiao Su (whose personality is not suitable for the others) use live streaming to make money? After all, he should be pretty good-looking. Overall, it's a pretty good book. It's a taste modifier for me? I hope the author will work hard and update, come on!

The subject matter is very good, the concept is very novel, and it is very imaginative, but the language expression is too stiff. I feel that the author has not broken away from the writing method. He likes to use a lot of rhetoric to depict and describe the characters and plots. Personally, I feel it is a bit like showing off skills in the composition, so I find it difficult to keep reading. I feel that the character design is still very good. These four stars are for this imagination. The type is really good. I hope that the writing style can be better optimized in the future.

It's tied. Now I feel that this novel is quite good. The characters' personalities are also very distinct. Apart from being a bit sadistic, it's really good to read.

It's beautiful, and the emotional descriptions are delicate [Chigua] Teacher, you can definitely write three chapters a day

It's very interesting and the description is very detailed. I found this article so good that I was so moved that I cried.

It's very beautiful, but I feel it's a little sad. Everyone's character is very distinct. Thank you very much [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

Looks good! I really like the character design, but it's a bit sadistic (it should be mutual redemption, right?) I hope it can be sweet later ₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑