Too Bad**********

The writing is very good, and it completely brings out the original flavor [Blowing a Kiss]. The only thing I think is lacking is that the protagonist is too miserable [crying] compared to He Zhen. Although the plot with Mahara is also hell, Aqua is the one who brought it on himself, Megumin and Dakonis will also have benefits, and his usual ghosts are enough for him to vent. Most importantly, the only way to express wealth is to talk to parents in dreams [almost crying]

The protagonist has the flavor of a hot-blooded comic, is affectionate and righteous, and is tolerant and considerate of his teammates. If something happens to his teammates, he will be the first one to come on board and be able to deal with it. Don't bring it in in the early stage, it will be very frustrating. It means that the protagonist's weapons were almost sold to pay off the debt, and the protagonist did not know how to repay the debt for his teammates. Fortunately, Kazuma stopped Aqua - the original Kazuma did not abandon these three divine teammates, which is already Asashi (gentle). (｀ω´) Come on, author, five stars encourage you. ദ്ദി(˵ •̀ ᴗ - ˵ ) ✧

It's very pretty and has a very plain flavor. The author is a genius and has good painting skills. The meme is even better. The update speed is pretty good. Three updates a day, I hope the author can evolve to five updates a day.

At the first watch, the flaws are revealed, and the ridicule is like a tide; At the second watch, the expression of anger faded slightly, and the spectators began to turn their ears; At the third watch, a slight reputation sprouts, and an alliance is formed in the future; At the fifth watch, righteous men and women gather together and argue; At the tenth watch, the great Confucian scholars and the nobles are revitalized, and the sound of praise fills the thoroughfare; At the twenty-first watch, the name of the green slip will remain fragrant for thousands of years. Sigh! Nine times out of a hundred, the disadvantage lies in the delay; only by waving the keys like rain can the crowd's beaks be stopped. May your ink be as long as a long river, so that the starry night will be flawless and readers will forget to eat. So Wadasi, write quickly, there is a food shortage.

Very good Su Qing fan fiction The characters' personalities, dialogues, and relationships between each other are very restored and not OOC at all. To be honest, I just enjoy it. It feels so comfortable to be able to expand the story without being OOC at all. The follow-up to Chapter 45 has obviously improved the perception. The relationship between the protagonist group and the protagonist is closer. There are more dialogues. There is a sense of sight that the protagonist has completely integrated into the Shenjing Ice God Team [sneaky laugh]. Laughing to death —————————————— Next, let's talk about the few shortcomings: The protagonist and the early stage will be locked together with Kazuma for a period of time, which is not too long. The good days will begin around Chapter 40. (In the original work, I had a lot of debts with this person and that person [face covering]. The protagonist came, so although he was a little jailed, at least he was living a good life, but the protagonist was a little hard.) I won't spoil too much about the protagonist's card function. There will be a harsh point in about 30+ chapters, but the problem is not big. Hmm, not big (eye movement). It will not affect the protagonist and Kazuma who finally start to live a happy life in the near future. —————————————— What follows is spoilers, watch as appropriate: The positioning of the protagonist—— From the perspective of professional positioning, the protagonist is to make up for the lack of physical big C in Kazuma's team (note that it is really big C) In terms of status in the team, the protagonist is also recognized as the eldest father of all members of Kazuma's team (not only is he in charge of food [laughing], but the protagonist has improved the living conditions of the entire team by himself) In terms of mental state, the protagonist is the only normal person in the team at the beginning (the other one is Kazuma who has not yet shown his evil nature [laughing evilly]). In the later stage, "it is normal to be gentle and virtuous", but "a slashing, slashing, killing and fighting maniac in battle" has perfectly integrated into Kazuma's team (of course, compared to other divine protagonists, he is still too normal) In terms of combat capability, the protagonist is a giant sword user who can barely hold back two giant frogs in the early stage, but later grows into a giant sword user who rushes into the battlefield alone and annihilates the entire enemy family tree. A full sense of security and strong strength (I trained it all by myself day after day, because the protagonist's "reincarnation" and "death" are not completely incapable of selecting skills. Just read this article for yourself. It's not a big problem) In addition, in the mid-term, I have a powerful sword given to the protagonist by the Headless Horseman (a very nb sword. The weapon will not break no matter how you use it, and it has many functions [smile]) Although I really wanted to write more, such as what happened to the protagonist at the beginning, but I ran out of time, so I slipped away and went to dance fat-burning exercises with my mother [laughing evilly] Come on, author, looking forward to updates.

I wrote it myself and gave it a five-star review. What's wrong? [Laughing evilly] I'm very thick-skinned [laughing evilly]

It is a book with a strong sense of simplicity, and of course it is also a polarizing book. It is a very good book when it is on the radio, but it is a very poisonous book when it is not. Mainly Wangcai's divine teammates are really abstract, and Wangcai's image in my mind is getting closer and closer to the human body of King Daxi. All in all, this is a good book worth trying (prerequisite is that it is on the radio). When can I see Wangcai Niang?

Everything about this book is good, but the word "boy mother" often appears in the comment area, which is very scary. I hope that the protagonist's body will not change in any way. It can be transformed into a beast [laughing evilly], but it cannot be changed. . .

I created ***Stinky Tomatoes, and such a promising new book is Baby Mouth!

🍅, Every time I want to give you more respect, you start not knowing what to do [angry]

Friendly reminder, as long as you treat the protagonist as a fully automatic two-legged animal (the plot in the front, I don't know how the treatment will be in the back), the look and feel of this book will be on a higher level [laughing] [like]

You must win the Easter match! !

Although I didn't watch it for long, it was still pretty good. But the protagonist is really aggrieved. It would be much more comfortable if he could take revenge on Aqua anytime and anywhere. For example: when waking up Aqua from sleeping in, just scream, and as soon as she opens her eyes, she will slash her with a knife. He yelled because he was a comrade, but he cut him down because Aqua was indeed not a human being. If you kill it, you'll have great luck; if you don't, you'll just take the risk. Anyway, with Su Qing's style, nothing serious will happen, and she can be resurrected, right? Aqua should give her a lesson every day to let her know that she should have a proper form (although she is unlikely to realize it). And the style of painting also suits Suqing very well: "Good morning" waved knife "I'll sleep for a while... Ugh!" He hurriedly avoided "Tsk" "What are you disappointed about?" "Tsk"

It's a very good book, but it's a pity that it has been removed from the shelves.

I read the latest chapter because I wanted to scold you after reading the comments. The writing is okay, but it's frustrating. It's better than Dunyong.

No, why are you dead? [Shocked] I said why not update.

Here we commemorate the happy time we had together with Wangcai

You must come back to life. Without you, where can I find novels with such a sense of photography and comics? Come on, you must win the resurrection match, boss [crying][crying]

It's the most restorative novel I've seen so far. It's a success, Kazuma's pain and suffering are restored, as well as other gods. It's just that the updates are a bit slow, only three updates a day, and the best is 30 updates a day.

No, the wealth is gone😭Check the password I made👊😡🖕

Why was I blocked when I woke up? [Crying] Does the boss have a fan base or something? [Crying] Grave sweeping🧹🧹🧹

Several good-looking books have been downloaded. I heard that some of the good tomatoes written by some people will disappear. I find the same routine for popular writers.

It's an undoubted good book. It's a pity, it's a pity. It has brought me so much joy and so many expectations, so why has it been removed from the shelves... Alas...

I woke up at 1 o'clock in the morning due to a leak in the charging cable. I couldn't sleep. I found this book and read it in one breath. I felt so crazy when I read it. I saw many people saying that the protagonist was too frustrated, but I actually felt okay after reading it. So, the author, let me ask you, when will the Wangcai Nianghua extravaganza be released? [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

It's good-looking, very good-looking, and the original Suqing, but don't take on the role of the protagonist. It's best to watch it just like watching anime. You can laugh when you watch something that is really unlucky. Just watch the protagonist. After all, they are all in prison, but the protagonist is too normal. So reliable. I also hope that my somewhat abstract side can fight back against Aqua like Kazuma, and hurt each other. After all, he loves Aqua too much.

It is a very good fanfic. It does not have the collapse of combat power of other fanfics, and it is also very complex with character settings and emotions. It is not like some Ultras that are not written with Ultra spirit, and Pirates is not written with any passion at all, but at the same time, the combat power is very high in an instant.

The writing is very abstract and funny, but it is not only abstract but also full of friendship (gay). The original characters are well integrated and the writing conveys the feeling of being simple and clear. But I don't want to join the Akushi Cult, even if there is edible soap.

Oi, kid😡, you are really good. I just watched a few pictures and I was already dying😭. I couldn't stop watching Suqing just like I did when I watched Suqing. You must keep on talking, otherwise I will beat you to your knees and take you back and lock you up as a member of the production team🫏. Just write a chapter and eat a meal😡😋

How come there are so, so, so good books! Suqing? Forget about ordinary people who were born in an era when there was no wealth! It's really, really good-looking. The character's personality perfectly fits Su Qing's. She's very gentle and normal, but she's not pretentious at all, and she doesn't even break the CP! How could there be such a good author! ! I would like to call it the best-looking Su Qing on the Internet. I really feel like I am watching a new episode of Su Qing. It is so beautiful and joyful! Compared to Su Qing, which is only updated every three to five years, reading this book at once is like reading three seasons of Su Qing in one go! Super super super comfortable! But speaking of it, I feel that Wangcai's combat power is a bit too high, and I'm afraid I won't have anything to write about later. By the way, has the author considered adding a plot involving a quartet from another world? Kazuma and the others are also very happy in it, and there is also a theatrical version. The content can be written for a long time. Will he survive? After Shangxiang, you left, I have never read another Su Qing that is so good. . .

To be honest, I think the author has written it well. Personally, I feel that the character of the protagonist can only be a little poisonous, which is also one of the characteristics. If you change it to a dark or ordinary protagonist, think about whether he can fit in this world, and people with that kind of personality will not team up with Kazuma and the others (´_ゝ｀), so the protagonist written in big letters by the author is good. Some people may feel uncomfortable reading it, so you should either withdraw the book or endure it. It won't take long, and you can really see the improvement of the plot (//∇//)