A Curse for This Awful World

The writing is very good, and it completely brings out the original flavor [Blowing a Kiss]. The only thing I think is lacking is that the protagonist is too miserable 😢 compared to He Zhen. Although the plot with Mahara is also hell, Aqua is the one who brought it on himself, Megumin and Dakonis will also have benefits, and his usual ghosts are enough for him to vent. Most importantly, the only way to express wealth is to talk to parents in dreams 🥺

The protagonist has the flavor of a hot-blooded comic, is affectionate and righteous, and is tolerant and considerate of his teammates. If something happens to his teammates, he will be the first one to come on board and be able to deal with it. Don't bring it in in the early stage, it will be very frustrating. It means that the protagonist's weapons were almost sold to pay off the debt, and the protagonist did not know how to repay the debt for his teammates. Fortunately, Kazuma stopped Aqua - the original Kazuma did not abandon these three divine teammates, which is already Asashi (gentle). (`ω´) Come on, author, five stars encourage you. ദ്ദി(˵ •̀ ᴗ - ˵ ) ✧

The writing is okay. The main character's name makes me think of dogs and mobile phone stereotypes when I see it. The main character is a bad guy and I don't know who the main character is. The treatment of Kazuma is completely different. Even if you want to keep the original work, you don't have to make the main character look like a clown. ╮(╯_╰)╭ Putting aside these things, the writing is still good-looking.

It's very pretty and has a very plain flavor. The author is a genius and has good painting skills. The meme is even better. The update speed is pretty good. Three updates a day, I hope the author can evolve to five updates a day.

At the first watch, the flaws are revealed, and the ridicule is like a tide; At the second watch, the expression of anger faded slightly, and the spectators began to turn their ears; At the third watch, a slight reputation sprouts, and an alliance is formed in the future; At the fifth watch, righteous men and women gather together and argue; At the tenth watch, the great Confucian scholars and the nobles are revitalized, and the sound of praise fills the thoroughfare; At the twenty-first watch, the name of the green slip will remain fragrant for thousands of years. Sigh! Nine times out of a hundred, the disadvantage lies in the delay; only by waving the keys like rain can the crowd's beaks be stopped. May your ink be as long as a long river, so that the starry night will be flawless and readers will forget to eat. So Wadasi, write quickly, there is a food shortage.

Very good Su Qing fan fiction The characters' personalities, dialogues, and relationships between each other are very restored and not OOC at all. To be honest, I just enjoy it. It feels so comfortable to be able to expand the story without being OOC at all. The follow-up to Chapter 45 has obviously improved the perception. The relationship between the protagonist group and the protagonist is closer. There are more dialogues. There is a sense of sight that the protagonist has completely integrated into the Shenjing Ice God Team [sneaky laugh]. Laughing to death Next, let's talk about the few shortcomings: The protagonist and the early stage will be locked together with Kazuma for a period of time, which is not too long. The good days will begin around Chapter 40. (In the original work, I had a lot of debts with this person and that person 🤦. The protagonist came, so although he was a little jailed, at least he was living a good life, but the protagonist was a little hard.) I won't spoil too much about the protagonist's card function. There will be a harsh point in about 30+ chapters, but the problem is not big. Hmm, not big (eye movement). It will not affect the protagonist and Kazuma who finally start to live a happy life in the near future. What follows is spoilers, watch as appropriate: The positioning of the protagonist—— From the perspective of professional positioning, the protagonist is to make up for the lack of physical big C in Kazuma's team (note that it is really big C) In terms of status in the team, the protagonist is also recognized as the eldest father of all members of Kazuma's team (not only is he in charge of food [laughing], but the protagonist has improved the living conditions of the entire team by himself) In terms of mental state, the protagonist is the only normal person in the team at the beginning (the other one is Kazuma who has not yet shown his evil nature 😏). In the later stage, "it is normal to be gentle and virtuous", but "a slashing, slashing, killing and fighting maniac in battle" has perfectly integrated into Kazuma's team (of course, compared to other divine protagonists, he is still too normal) In terms of combat capability, the protagonist is a giant sword user who can barely hold back two giant frogs in the early stage, but later grows into a giant sword user who rushes into the battlefield alone and annihilates the entire enemy family tree. A full sense of security and strong strength (I trained it all by myself day after day, because the protagonist's "reincarnation" and "death" are not completely incapable of selecting skills. Just read this article for yourself. It's not a big problem) In addition, in the mid-term, I have a powerful sword given to the protagonist by the Headless Horseman (a very nb sword. The weapon will not break no matter how you use it, and it has many functions [smile]) Although I really wanted to write more, such as what happened to the protagonist at the beginning, but I ran out of time, so I slipped away and went to dance fat-burning exercises with my mother 😏 Come on, author, looking forward to updates.

I wrote it myself and gave it a five-star review. What's wrong? 😏 I'm very thick-skinned 😏

It is a book with a strong sense of simplicity, and of course it is also a polarizing book. It is a very good book when it is on the radio, but it is a very poisonous book when it is not. Mainly Wangcai's divine teammates are really abstract, and Wangcai's image in my mind is getting closer and closer to the human body of King Daxi. All in all, this is a good book worth trying (prerequisite is that it is on the radio). When can I see Wangcai Niang?

I created ***Stinky Tomatoes, and such a promising new book is Baby Mouth!

If my brother doesn't want to update, just say so. Why bother bothering readers. It seems that the readers are being sentimental. My brother is weak and he just needs to rest more. The readers are urging him so much, but it is the readers who are wrong. Injuring his body also makes people feel sorry for him. It is a pity that he pities his brother. Whether he is injured or not, what does it have to do with the readers? Readers are eager for my brother to update 10 chapters a day, but I am different from readers. My brother can send the manuscript and outline to others, and let others help him check the quality and find typos. 😳