Tianbuqi

The writing is very good, more plot would be better. The heroine's character is a bit like Nan Xian, which is to my liking. I hope that the heroine will always be like this, high above Bai Yueguang, without cp, just in the clouds all the time.

Um, it seems that the author's writing style is quite good, and he seems to want to write a big-picture novel, but 🍅 in fact, it is too young, and the vocabulary is too gorgeous, and most people can't understand it. I hope the author can improve it. Seeing that the author likes ancient style, I would like to send a message to the author: "Quality wins over literature, which leads to wildness, and writing over quality leads to history." Good luck, author.

Come on, work hard to update! It looks good, and the heroine's character appeals to my heart. Remember to keep it free! ! ! Come on!

Not much plot can be seen in the flowery words. . I have read Chapter 37. It is actually quite long [currently in the process of being drafted], but the plot line is about joining the sect, getting to know my senior brother, entering the secret realm, inheriting the book, and laying down some foreshadowing. From the introduction, there is no cp, but I personally feel that I am a bit ambiguous with my senior brother (personal opinion [sending my heart]) When we first meet each other and interact with each other, the corners of our mouths will curve, the heartbeat will rise and fall, and then we will be indifferent to other people [what] Each person's appearance and actions are described in particularly detailed ways. It may be that the main character is cold and cold, and it is difficult to describe it in language, making it inconvenient for abstract jokes and causing a lack of traffic. Maybe in the later stage we can create a lively treasure or something to create a lively atmosphere (?) This kind of writing looks very comfortable at first glance, like a gorgeous massage and bath. After reading it for a long time, the plot is a bit delayed and I feel very irritated. It may be due to the fast pace of the fast era [Thinking] But overall, the biggest advantage of the article is that it is very gorgeous (eh? This review is a bit like the sentence "Life is a gorgeous robe, covered with lice". I can't remember the original sentence, and it has nothing to do with this book [Blow a kiss])

I spent one night reading more than 70 chapters of the current update. This writing is really the best I have ever read in foreign persimmons. The characters, plots, psychological scenes are interspersed smoothly and naturally. I think the plot is also full of climaxes and ups and downs. The character of the protagonist is very interesting. If it is not the Virgin Against Heaven, the charming design of thousands of people will not collapse. It is really well written, and the description technique can be used as a model article. However, the protagonist is only 1.6 Meters tall... Although there is a reason, can we make her longer later? The height of the heroine cannot be inferior. As for the emotional line of this book, I actually very much prefer the main heroine to have no cp because based on my current reading experience, I feel that such a layer-by-layer analysis and solution of problems will benefit me, and the fight will be merciless. The protagonist's intelligence is really very refreshing, not brainless, very comfortable and appropriate, and I fell in love with the protagonist. Support the author greatly, come on, come on [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart]

It's very beautiful, but there are so many gorgeous modifiers that it makes people's eyes dazzled.

It's good, but there are many destiny protagonists who like the heroine, but the heroine always ignores them🌚

I think an author with good writing style can really bring resonance to the readers and express deeply in the words. The poems in the article are very artistic, and the description of the appearance of the heroine will make us subconsciously fantasize in our minds! Come on, author, keep up the good work

Can you use less fancy words [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

It's good-looking and good-looking. This article in Yang Persimmon is considered good. The exaggerated writing style actually fits the artistic conception of the fairy tale. I just like the protagonist to be beautiful, heartthrob and ruthless. It pokes me too much. TT is too short. It doesn't matter whether you have a CP or not. Everyone loves the protagonist. The protagonist is a clone of Tiandao Qingqing. No matter how hard you think, you can't understand love. No CP to compete! ! I just feel like the protagonist picks up children a little too much, but it's still acceptable.

The plot and characters are pretty good, but there is too much detail about the appearance of the characters. Especially the appearance of the heroine. Almost everyone will describe the appearance of the heroine when they see the heroine. The portrayal of the heroine is a test of writing skills. It is only a superficial impression now. I hope the author can portray the heroine more deeply in future updates.

Every character's name is chosen with great care. I really recommend everyone to read it. Please write better.

Fei Fei Fei is very good. Hurry up and rate it so that everyone can enjoy this blessing book. The plot written by my wife is very [like] [like] [like]. The story is very smooth and the writing is very good. It's just wow. Both the names of people and places are very good, thoughtful and nice [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart]

I really like the writing and the other fate-line stories of the children of luck are all very well written. . . . Like it very much! ! ! Some of the character descriptions are too long-winded. I hope the plot can advance a little faster. It's still very interesting. I look forward to the following plots.

The more I write, the better. The heroine is very cool.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

The author writes so well.

Super pretty, that's what I want in a heroine The heroine is really in line with my taste. I am very enthusiastic about my career. I like this kind of heroine! ! !

The writing is super good. Rich imagination [like] [like] fairy product

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

It looks good, I hope it has no cp, the heroine should be admired by thousands of people.

The plot is very exciting, the writing is very good, and the descriptions are very delicate. It would be great if the plot could be described more, for example, passers-by can look forward to the follow-up plot.

The author's writing is very good

The writing style is really good, but it is still too difficult for poor students. Fortunately, I have a high score in Chinese, and it has the artistic conception and scene of the ancients cultivating immortals. 😑😑, It's really annoying after watching it for a long time, too many embellishments

The introduction to the world is too complicated, and there are too many reasonings and too many reasons. It can be discussed and combined, but not every article. The other characters are very good, and the plot is also remarkable.

. It's really good. The writing is really good. I need to write more and make the story more novel.

The writing style is very good and the writing is very good. I really love it. 🍅I am so lucky to have such a masterpiece.

The writing is very good and well written. I like the character of the heroine, she is a very decisive and rational person