My Cheat Is My Eternal Deskmate Wife!

It's quite interesting to write, and it's fun to read it when you have time to read it. It's just that the logic is a little illogical, and the fact that you don't care much about the ability to penetrate flesh at any time is a big problem. I can't blame the author. The main reason is that time travel is too difficult to write. I want to make a complete closed loop interesting to read, and I have read more than 5,000 books on various platforms that ensure smooth logic. In my mind, there seems to be no more than 10 Although I know it's difficult to write, you don't have to be so unfinished, right? You can just keep trying. Maybe one day inspiration will come and you'll be able to write again.

It's pretty interesting among tomatoes. The alliance is about people and I eat them, and I even thought that the male and female protagonists would be able to vote.

Come on, author, as your first book, with 200,000 words, you can get more than 500 updates, which is already more than half of the authors of Tomato. Although the subject matter is similar to that of God of Wealth, there are many differences after all. As a new author, the first book is always full of ups and downs. I will be happy because of the good reviews and praises, and I will be sad because of the insults and belittling of the negative reviews, but I hope you can keep writing. Although there are not many people reading this book, they are not too few. Compared with the guidance of great gods, only the experience gained from your own works is the most precious and valuable.

It's okay, except for the main protagonist, who is basically the heroine and the wife who has her younger sister, it's more reliable. The rest of the characters are just like that, oh, and there's a younger brother, which is okay. The alliance is as transparent as a sieve, and the villains are the most powerful. As long as they are not intruders, it can only be said that the villains have the consciousness and ability to win no matter what they do. The protagonist can't bring the human race with him.

A pretty good book, very suspenseful. I found a few points that need to be paid attention to at the moment, relying on the anchor point problem of the person who has the ability to travel through time and space but is not the protagonist. If it is the same anchor point, then in most cases it will most likely land in a box. If it weren't for the heroine's anchor point, it would be completely terrifying to be able to travel freely, but if not, take the slave protagonist as an example. Traveling to his future, the future of the world controlled by the demons is okay. But if you go to the past, according to the situation of the human race, there is a high probability that it will fall into a box. Compared with your own situation, reaching the future in the past is too cool, so you will not have this ability on that line. According to the perspective of the demonized protagonist, it should be a non-shared anchor point, otherwise it would have been sent long ago. But how did the slave protagonist arrive at the heroine's side by such a coincidence? If it were not an anchor point, the chance would be too small. If it were an anchor point, if he had worn it once and no longer loved him, he would have sent it long ago. The protagonist of Seizing the Body has died in the past and will be beheaded by the heroine in the future. There are not many places to show off.

It started well, but the follow-up plot is really not going to be continued. I suggest the author be bolder in the follow-up. The plot can be more imaginative based on time travel that I can't express in words. The villain should not be too strong, as it will easily get stuck later.

It's quite interesting, there are a few minor issues, but it doesn't matter, just have fun watching it.

The male protagonist should only exist in different timelines, and the female protagonist is the anchor.

After reading it in one go, I personally think it's a good subject. The only pity is that the author didn't control it well, which resulted in the writing crashing and forcing the finale. If he could have controlled it well, it feels like it would have been a masterpiece, but it's a pity that it didn't. If so, of course I recommend you to read it.

A very interesting novel with a very novel subject matter. I have been a bookworm for more than ten years. It looks quite exciting. Although the pig's feet are worn here and there, the main line is very clear and there is no delay in doing things. Worth a look. 5 Star review

1. The main plot of this book is almost entirely driven by the protagonist's constant travels. 2. The protagonist is unique because the protagonist is essentially a time traveler and is not the original owner of this body. 3. Because the protagonist is unique, the protagonist can escape from the predetermined destiny, which is why the protagonist can already travel through the past and the future, and can also change the past and the future (not create a new timeline). 4. The biggest problem at the moment is that the protagonist is holding back many things to the heroine, including the most important thing, that he is a time traveler. This information is very, very important, more important than the protagonist knowing that the heroine is an immortal. 5. There are certain problems with the protagonist's policy and strategy. There is very little time left for the human race. No matter how time travels, it is unrealistic for the human race to have multiple supremes in a short period of time. We should go all out to recruit heroines. The heroines themselves have the attribute of immortality in a conceptual sense and are extremely talented. They only need to provide skills or related ideas to grow at an extremely fast speed.

The storyline is very good, but there are some logical contradictions in the time plot. For example, the time-travel plot in Chapter 29 is quite contradictory. It is recommended that the time-travel mechanism be improved. For example, the protagonist himself has characteristics that can affect the logical contradictions.

The material selection is good, but the writing skills are still lacking, but it deserves encouragement.

It looks good. If you like to read it, read more. Everyone is welcome to come and see it. Trust me.

Except for the suspected voice input, it looks like a book that was only available in Qidian. The logic is smooth and the plot is well controlled.

Is this still a tomato? Depressed, very depressing

In the words of us young people, because of time and space travel, God appeared. God brought eternal life to himself and felt bored (the end of the world). However, the time traveler protagonist appeared, so God re-read his past, but it was unfinished. So we can only understand it this way. The husband who fell from the sky was because of time travel. If it was not unfinished, it might be the past that replaced him.

Author teacher, I want to see the protagonist of the future incarnation of the Great Emperor swim against the river of time to suppress all current enemies [shy]

Good-looking, few words, no one

The villain can be written well, the righteousness is a little bit poisonous, and the typos will not be corrected at all.

I can only say that I am just curious, what should I write next [exploration]

I've never seen such a stable villain in my life. The Alliance is really hard to evaluate, but overall it's pretty good.

The way the timeline is written is very interesting and beautiful. I recommend reading more. [Eat melon]

Ye An repeatedly traveled through time and space in an attempt to change his destiny, but the revolution has not yet succeeded. The heroine Ling Qian is an immortal. After a long time, her relationship has been relatively indifferent. At present, the relationship between the two is relatively familiar, and the characters are still very consistent. I just don't know how the author will write it later. I hope it won't break down.

Not enough beautiful things Good subject matter, poor writing style, early stage was okay

The subject matter is very novel, come on

Good books, good books, come on, come on

Well written, support me

In addition to the appendix, there are other

Very interesting book