In the World of Immortality, I Have MC Characteristics

Haoting is a little bit jealous, thinking that there is another plot where the male and female protagonists are forced to separate for dozens or hundreds of chapters for some reason, but fortunately it is only separated for a few chapters. Lin Fan is the protagonist of a dual Taoist couple, but he is a single heroine. He is not my cup of tea.

(Eighteenth revision) Purple++++, 41.75(32.75) It's a pretty good MC article. This chapter is well written. It doesn't overwhelm the combat power and doesn't overwhelm me. I look forward to the follow-up plot. Sense of immersion: 4, very good Follow-up reading: 3, currently pretty good, follow-up to be determined Writing style: 3, the plot is a bit empty Brainstorm: 4, set your mind Plug-ins: 4, plug-ins are opened step by step without compromising combat effectiveness Background: 3, the background is relatively simple Rhythm: 3, the plot is smooth Plot: 3, the plot is relatively fast Characters: 2, no impression Logic: 3, reasonable setting Extra: Purple Four 1.5×3=4.5, Purple Three 0.75×6=4.5 Only personal subjective evaluation

It's a pretty good mc story, with just the right amount of drama, and the emotional scenes treat the heroine as half a tool. Don't write too much about Lin Fan. It's best to treat him as a flatterer and a tool. It's best not to write in depth about the plot of Lin Fan's female counterpart, just brush it off in one stroke.

It's not bad. Among many novel worlds, the world of cultivating immortals in this one is already peaceful enough, without so much darkness. The main reason is that the male and female protagonists have a good relationship with each other, and there is no bloody plot. [Making faces] Although the pace is a bit fast.

MC is just the protagonist's help, cultivating immortality is the theme, so it's not a big problem. The environment of the world of immortality in this book is relatively friendly, the ceiling of combat power takes care of the world, and the way of heaven takes care of all things. There is not so much darkness about cultivating immortals, but more about helping each other. I think it's great.

Finished with flowers 🎉 Congratulations on I want to play mods for completing my first novel. This book is not unfinished and does not fall into the trap of nesting dolls. The MC plug-in is as reliable as ever. As the first work, it has completed its mission. It cannot be said to be outstanding, but it is indeed a very good MC novel. There are no over-the-top modules (the number of added modules is well controlled and there is no conflict), and the MC goal of cultivating immortality is throughout the text. , Some people may say that this book inserts a small amount of MC elements into the text about cultivating immortals, but this is not the case. The MC in the text is always there. At some stages, it does feel that only cultivating immortals is left, and MCs are gone. However, we who play MC all know that without adding too many modules, after playing a save file for a long time, there is basically nothing to do (except for construction bosses and technology bosses), so we only occasionally go in and walk around, return to Recall that in this article, when new modules have not been activated for the time being, for decades, MC has no chance to appear except for collecting resources and using existing modules. It is reasonable that most of this time is spent cultivating immortals. Of course, you may not agree with me, but as the first work of a new author, there are some things that are not done well, and we should also give a certain understanding. On Tomato , if you can finish a book from beginning to end, without any contradictions in the context or the collapse of the combat power system, you have done a good job. Moreover, as a MC novel, the author has no pressure on combat power. In the text, the MC is always invincible. Those creative mode MC novels are indeed very exciting, but the survival mode MC novels are the norm. After all, everyone will get tired of reading all the exciting novels of the same type. It is a little difficult, which can be regarded as adding interest. Personally, I don't like novels where the family is involved. In some parts of this book, the protagonist and the Taoist monk are always tired of being together all day long. I can't stand it. Also, I can't stand that the author spends a lot of chapters on his daughter. He can write supporting characters, but the length really doesn't need to be too big. I almost couldn't stand it. I just stocked up on some chapters. When I saw the end, I read the rest. Fortunately, I didn't get stuck on my daughter. I wish the author can write better and better, be happy and healthy [Love] Minecraft is a fun game, and various fun, interesting and practical modules add endless fun to Minecraft. Long live Minecraft! Long live sandbox gaming!

A new theme. Although the background of the heroine is a few years later, no specific description is given. It seems that it was given away too quickly. It is obvious that the author does not know how to write and omitted it. The rest can be After mc passed through the novice stage, the feeling disappeared

Like? Is it love? ! Rice... Rice? (Testing) Rice? (Hesitating) Rice... (Trembling) Immortal food? ! (Surprised) (walking and shouting) Rice! ! (Crying) (holding up with both hands) (wolfing down) Wu... Wu... (Choking) Good... Good... Delicious rice! (Excited) (Roaring to the sky) (Take a big bite) (Smell the aroma of rice) (Breaking out of the ground) (Running around on all fours looking for food) (Seeing the state banquet) (Stupefied) (Crawling back into the earth) (Changing into a suit) (Elegantly breaking out of the ground) (Elegantly crawling) (Elegantly picking up the knife and fork) (Elegantly dining) Ahhhhhhh! ! ! ! ! ! ! I eat eat eat eat eat eat eat! ! ! Look at me eating so much! ! ! ! I ate a lot! ! ! ! (Excited mutation) (Snatch the roses from the hands of the zombies next to you) (Crawling over) (Offering the flowers in a strange posture) (Falling) (Getting up again in a strange posture) (Finished eating) (Elegantly wiping mouth) (Elegantly on all fours) (Elegantly crawling back into the earth)

It's very beautiful. I'll keep following it as long as I keep following it. Will there be any mods added in the future? Stuck in Chapter 73, emm is a little unconfident to read on, something happened after Lin Fan came out, I can't figure out who is the protagonist.

It's very comfortable, there is no cruel suppression or weakening, and all the protagonists encounter are NPCs with normal brains.

A very good-looking farming style. I like this setting where people live in harmony with the world, and the avatar and the world complement each other and advance together. The writing is very good, and the writing style is also good. The rating can be at least 2 higher. I really like this kind of resource-based plug-in. If there are any novels about cultivating immortals that don't have this kind of resource-based plug-in, please recommend them!

I hope the author writes more about MC Such as the joy of survival and exploration Creation and freedom of content There are also module diversity and expanded functions I don't want the author to just write an ordinary article about cultivating immortality and enjoying "Minecraft" [Sending my heart]

There's nothing about MC in the back

It's not Steve, it's actually the transformed little green bottle.

By the way, if the protagonist dies, will it not drop? If there are, you can exchange your life for some rare skills resources. After you die, you can be reborn and return to the base you built to practice. You can also go to the secret realm where you have a near-death life to get resources for free🤔. If you can't pass it once, you can try your life again and again, and you can get a lot of precious resources.

The protagonist's way of getting along with each other in this world is amiable, not too bad, but those who like MC may be a little uncomfortable with it. I can understand it if it is not a cool article, but I don't dare to open it too much. I can read it, it is a recreational article.

Normal MC hacking strength. It's not shabby, the plot isn't cliche, it's pretty good.

The writing is pretty good, keep it up👍🏻

MC doesn't have much content and looks very comfortable.

It's a pretty good novel. I read it very smoothly, and the love affairs are also very natural.

Good grass and books can be read in the wilderness.

Good, good, good, good, good, good

It's pretty cool, but I feel like MC.'S presence is much weaker towards the end.

There are many good people and few bad people, and there are not many routines. The auction attack is quickly dealt with by a single person. We meet again in the fourth chapter of the bitter separation (you can jump directly). The passers-by know how to avoid suspicion and continue to wait and see.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Mouth melon! It's Caolu Fairy's mouth teeth! [Sinister smile]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking [get it] [admiration] Look good, look good, look good

Duration doesn't lie

After reading the comments, I thought it wasn't good, but it turned out to be okay.

It's a pretty good novel. It combines MC characteristics with cultivating immortals very well. The characters generally have good personalities. While cultivating immortals is idealized, it's also realistic. Overall, it's pretty good.