Taming Ghosts Can Make You Lose Control? What Does That Have to Do with My Shadow!

It's hard to resist. There is no normal person. Is it really okay for the protagonist to take such a different route from normal people when setting up the character? The most serious thing is the protagonist. If there is a problem with the shadow, it is understandable to be indifferent to human nature, but it is not completely indifferent. Before, he was not indifferent to the people in the protagonist's group, but he was particularly indifferent and isolated to other cannon fodder. In addition, if the main perspective follows the protagonist, then don't make the protagonist the smartest person. If you follow the protagonist's perspective but there are still things that the protagonist knows but the readers don't know, it will become very Riddler. But if you follow the protagonist and are frustrated in the unknown, then it will be difficult to establish a smart character for the protagonist. First, there will always be someone better than you. Smarter readers. Secondly, when readers read that the protagonist needs to make a choice, they will make their own choices. At this time, if the protagonist is the smartest character, then the reader must be convinced as to why he has to make this choice. Otherwise, not only will the reader feel like the Riddler, but they will also wonder why this is so and why not that? Gradually the reader's sense of immersion is lost. Of course, it doesn't mean that the protagonist is the smartest person and cannot be established, but even a novice can't establish a supporting character well. So if you give the protagonist this level of strength, I can only wish you a happy writing experience.

Poisonous Best Friend, originally the male protagonist entered the ghost realm, and the ghost realm came again the next day. The male protagonist was afraid that his girlfriend would be scared, so he pulled his girlfriend's best friend in, and her girlfriend agreed.

Don't post comments and don't read. Poison is poison. I don't know whether to join or not. The official came at the end. Then the kid didn't want to live anymore and asked him to join the official. He almost got into a fight but couldn't beat it. Then everything was given to the official🤭🤭🤭

Too much bullshit. Chapter 10 didn't even get to the point. They were still flirting.

I can accept having a female protagonist, multiple female protagonists, or no female protagonist. If you have a female protagonist, you will write it off. Even if it will be resurrected later, I'm sorry to see it. It's an old and broken routine for many years. And you still write it out. I'll give it a low score.

The abilities of Sequencers and Ghost Controllers all rely on independent awakening. Unlike the traditional way of controlling a ghost, which requires a huge price. In the first campus incident written by the author, nearly ten Sequencers and Ghost Controllers appeared. I thought it was too trivial. It is not that easy to gain power, let alone other poisonous points.

666, Since the author has two substitution links, each one is worth 1 point

It's really annoying to see you

The first copy killed the heroine. You are this👍 After doing all this, Lu Zhou turned around with the sickle in hand and said expressionlessly: "Let's go, it's time to end this." He must end all this as soon as possible and then find the god that the doctor said. Since the gods can resurrect the doctor, they can also resurrect Su Qianqian. There is still hope for everything. This hole is very big. The main character fights monsters and upgrades. It may take a million words to fill it. However, I think based on the temperament of Tomato readers, there is a high probability that they will abandon the book without seeing the resurrection.

It looks good, but can Su Qianqian be resurrected?