Hp: Go Back to the Past and Reverse the Future with Your Old Enemy

Great author! Both lines are great. It seems that few people imagine the ending of Voldemort's victory, and where everyone will go after that. All the struggles, helplessness, and despair expressed in the text, as if the air are thick and sticky, are very suitable for the post-war world! Regarding another Sirius line, first of all, the Chain Heart Curse is a very interesting idea. One is forced to stay, one is forced to reveal, one is from the future, and the other is sour now. Oops, anyway, delicious ♡♡♡Confessions to the author♡

To be honest, this CP is quite surprising to me, but the author's writing is really good. So far, I don't feel that the characters are OOC. It really kicked me into the dog-bat pit. I look forward to reading the book as soon as possible.

It's a great group portrait, and the description of the dark side of the professor is spot-on. Xiaotian's crazy paranoia and self-destructive tendencies are also interesting. I like to watch the lion and snake protagonists because there are few common snake-snatching and lion-trampling content in this kind of fan fiction. It is very good for my blood pressure. However, after making the above remarks, I declare that I am a member of the Iron-Blooded Cellar + SS single push... I feel that I will be expelled from the Snake Academy overnight, haha Then again, sometimes I really don't know where the huge malice of fans who hate the positive characters of the original work and want to die comes from, but - encountering Shihei (Deng Zhanha's hardest-hit area) in the comment area of this article to break the defense is a must-have, hehe

It's really good-looking, the emotional line is well laid out, very logical, and there's nothing particularly OOC about it. It's a particularly good-looking book called Dog Bat \(//∇//)\, unlike the other books I've read before that I fell in love with for no apparent reason. The idea of ​​going back in time and influencing the future is also great. There is also the bond between the members of the Order of the Phoenix. In the face of darkness, there is always someone charging towards the light. It is really delicious. Come on teacher(ง•̀_•́)ง

It's so beautiful! ! It's just such a little book review! ! The author's characterization is quite vivid, and he can outline the characters in just a few strokes (not only the protagonist, but also the supporting characters who are very short in length are also three-dimensional). In the early stage, the past that Sirius traveled to and the future that Snape lived were intertwined. In the later stage, when the two lines were connected because of the double-sided mirror, the past changed the future in real time. It was really cool! ! Due to dynamic changes, Snape's future memories often change without him realizing it. Every time Sirius and Snape discuss memories, it's super nice and logical, and I can really feel the butterfly effect! I'm really looking forward to the follow-up, please give me a lot of support from the author~~[Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

The late-stage dim atmosphere of the original work is very sour and calm. I cried all the time during the experience of the two little ones. The pain that Sirius was carrying was really concrete. The uncertainty about the future, the love, hate, struggle, pain and doubt about Sirius, it felt like I had experienced it all over again (maybe I was too invested in watching it). It was simply my sbss enlightenment. But then the situation was still very strange, and it calmly turned for the better. That faint feeling was really amazing. Moreover, the whole idea about broken lenses is very good, and the cause and effect are all related. The inner struggles, conflicts and characters of the others are all well developed, and there is no suggestion that they should be written as NPCs.

Is it God? The images of the girls are particularly good, and boys are still boys~. It's so cute that Xiaotian fights everywhere without being able to grow up. I have always liked post-war novels. The trauma sticks to my face like snowflakes. It is very enjoyable to read while crying. The characters are very, very, very caring, and scary. There is nothing I find unacceptable. Apart from Xiaotian's orientation, it just serves the plot. HP fan fiction is of rare high quality in Western Persimmon and even on all platforms. The writing is fluent, the content is exciting, the small events are particularly beautiful, and there are no anecdotes or bad street scenes. I really like it!

The author writes really well! [Crying] At first, I just clicked on this book out of curiosity, but I didn't expect it to be so delicious. The whole book has profound and detailed descriptions of love, family, and friendship, and is not OOC at all. Please dog bat 99! Let's have a good time together! Then let's talk about other CPs (all official couples). I used to be indifferent to most official couples, but in this book I really impressed them all. The emotional foreshadowing of each young couple is very good. Finally, please everyone just stay happy forever [cry] [send heartfelt]. Love is the greatest magic! Love & peace!

It's very interesting, really very interesting. The characters in the book do not deviate from the plot of the original work. The struggles and pains of the characters made me empathize with them. This book has a consistent routine that is not part of Tomato fan fiction. It is not a cool novel. The protagonist does not start all the way just because he knows the future. Hang up, the future is not static, it will change because of the past. The description of the campus period of the parents in the article made up for the blank of my feelings for Zhan Li in the original work. I did not deliberately discredit other characters just because I wanted to sell CP. In short, it is very interesting! ! ! Dear author, I will always support you. Write when you are tired, write when sleepy, and write when hungry. Don't tire yourself or starve me [laughter]

As an omnivore, this is the first time I mustered up the courage to read a dog-bat novel (off topic, I have always felt that it is very difficult for authors who can write sbss, and they understand everything). The writing is very good, and all the characters are not OOC, and there is no praise for the academy. First of all, if you look at the introduction, you can tell that the concept is very interesting, and the connection between "past" and "future" is also very smooth. What I like most is the author's description of all the "little" characters in the oppressive environment of war, including the fringe characters of Draco Astoria DA. Everyone is struggling to win, and everything happens naturally.

Recommended reading, this is the first HP-related book that I have read in its entirety. The logic is clear, there is no obvious OOC, it is more of a group portrait, the main line > the emotional line, most of the characters are biased toward good, there are no negative remarks by the characters, and it is very comfortable to watch, not brainless. The motivations of the characters and the possible development of things are all handled well. Personally, I feel that it is more healing-oriented and has a happy ending. The depressing feeling after Voldemort's victory is well written. Regarding the cp direction: there is sufficient description of the character's motivations for liking it, and the emotional line serves the main line. The character's behavioral motivation is not just emotional, Qingshui (Qingshui lovers are ecstatic). I finished reading it in 8 hours and stayed up all night, just in time to watch it on the final day. It's really not OOC. Generally speaking, most non-original CP readers are OOC, but this one really isn't. At least I, a person who has no interest in CP, found it very reasonable. The group image is very good. If you see any discrepancies during the test, don't doubt it. There is something wrong with the package and not OOC.

The author's writing is excellent and the emotions of the characters are very delicate. 𖤣𖥧𖥣｡𖤣𖥧𖥣｡It is rare to see HP novels with this theme, and it is a rare novel that intersperses the future and past timelines. The time division is very appropriate. It's really high quality, but why isn't it popular ⍥ The relationship between Sirius and Snape is very carefully portrayed, and the characters have distinct characteristics. Worth a look [love] I hope the author will not stop updating ⍤ ᵕ̈ ⍨ ⍩

It looks so good💥! I didn't have any feelings for this pair of cps at first. When I first saw it, I thought it was a bit nonsensical, but! ! ! ! The author's writing style is so good that I directly hit this pair of CPs with a full 361° Thomas rotation! There is no sense of violation at all! So cool! I really like this kind of twisted emotional line, the author is so awesome! How come you are so good at writing! ! In less than two days, I tied it. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh going going going going going going going on, a what if there are not many people watching it. I don't know much about it, but I really don't look at Absolute Loss, it's so beautiful! It's so well written, I can't find any flaws at all!

To be honest, this CP is rare and I have never touched it. But the author's writing style is so good. There is not even any OOC in the whole text. The emotional portrayal is very delicate, and the daily chapters are also handled very well. Don't not click on this book because of this CP, you will regret it, it's so delicious

The author's writing is so good, with strong logic, closely linked plot structures, and two lines running at the same time. It is very creative, so that you can more clearly feel the impact of Sirius, the "little butterfly". It is particularly close to the original work, and the relationship between the two at the beginning is also depicted through the author's delicate and obscure writing style, with a faint youthfulness unique to young people. As the storyline continues to develop and deepen, the bond between the two also continues to deepen, step by step, and gradually deepen. In fact, I personally have no interest in lengthy articles, but the author's clear and delicate writing style is so attractive that I finished reading this article in two days. It is obviously an article that is as clear as water, but after reading it, I still felt that it was still unfinished, and I couldn't get back to my senses for a long time. This book, as my article on dog bats, opened the door to me about dog bats, which are simply god-like existences. Finally, I would like to say that it is really great that Dog Bat has such a large-scale article🥹. I hope the author can write more extras [shy] Pure Love BL is so beautiful. It makes men menstruate and women get crazy. It is the nemesis of depression and an alarm clock for vegetative people. It is so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River. It is so handsome. God is my rose. It illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful. , I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor, which made me realize that God does exist. I was so cute that I couldn't stop crying. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression, it's the vegetative alarm clock. It's so cute that tears flowed from the corners of my mouth and flooded into the Qiantang River. It's so beautiful. It's God, my rose, that illuminates my dark life.

At first, I was holding on to it—someone would actually write about the relationship between Padfoot and Snape? CP can be unpopular, but cannot be unpopular, which opens this book. But after reading the whole book, people's hearts feel sour and tender [almost crying] Especially when he wrote about Padfoot's indifference towards his own life and death, Snape prayed that he could see the love of the people around him, and prayed that he would stay for so much love from so many people... At that moment, I wanted to get into the story and tell him - yes! Padfoot, please stay for the people who love you! And please... Stay for Severus Snape! And the emotional description is also great. Compared with other stories with Snape as the CP, which always describe the intimacy between the two, the intimacy between Padfoot and Snape in this story is always highlighted, which makes people feel more.

Omega 2 is so cool and refreshing, I will never get tired of reading this book. My mother, Feng Feng, the writing and plot ideas are also very awesome. Klass, awesome and awesome, hat-trick, support for another wave of awesome, awesome, awesome, awesome, awesome! Why is the score so low? Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooottt... I'm honest onz, I can only read the teacher's writing😥. The dog bat is indeed konjac and it still needs to be processed before it can be eaten. The perception of the dog bat article is really polarizing. This is the most delicious book I have ever eaten. Teacher, you are so amazing. I will follow you forever. Loyalty🙇💍

I actually have very high standards for fan fiction because I think character characterization is actually very difficult. I have to follow the original work and have the characters in the article have different intersections with each other. I think this book has written the young Snape➕Sirius in my heart. The characters are very delicate. I have read the chapter of the Department of Mysteries many times. Despair spread in the original timeline, so Snape's shouting, hesitation, and Sirius' pain and struggle. Deafening. This article did not deliberately slander other characters, nor was there a boring plot. He discovered that he loved him. It was the same love. It was so logical. I won't talk about SBSS 99.

Women need to see this kind of happy reunion to have the strength to live a happy life! This article is simply divine. The plot is smooth and interlocking. Everyone in the group has a unique charm and shining point. The protagonists, villains, protagonists, supporting characters and cannon fodder are all distinctive. The emotional line was particularly smooth and comfortable, and the sense of fate was so strong that I was really blown away. It was indeed a novel that I stayed up for three nights to read at all costs! PS: Golden wedding of dog and bat! ! ! It's the end of the story and we don't even have a kiss. Disappointment jpg. ##Enemy#pure love# I finished the second episode, and the plot is really smooth. It really made me feel that time is a circle, and the foreshadowing was really great. And each character has his own highlight arc characteristics, whether it is the protagonist, villain or supporting role, such as Peter, Barty, Penny and Walburga, they all have a different side, which really makes me think that they really existed together. Even the old Voldemort in this book is smarter and more charming than others (who knows Voldemort's intelligence setting in most fan fiction) My three favorite scenes are: one is the support in the wind and snow at the beginning, which reminds me of the phrase "I will tremble with you when the sky is full of snow", which is so ambiguous; one is the fight in the reeds, fighting in an unknown place while listening to each other's heartbeats, like flirting; the other is the scene where the young lovers dance at Christmas, it is so warm, it is simply the epitome of the life of two people in the future as an old married couple. And my favorite happy ending, I cried😭 Damn it, why is my comment not considered a long comment? Angry, angry

This book changed my opinion of Sirius from negative to positive. I clicked in with the mentality of "I want to see how you can write it". As a result, the character was so scary that it looked like Rowling had possessed him. . Regarding dog bats, I only accept this one. . So well written. Damn it's so well written [crazy] I don't think I can find anything of the same type that I can stomach! ! The author takes full responsibility [angry] [sad]

This is a true fanfic, not the kind where you write your own story in the skin of the original characters. It is very well received. The relationship is somewhat fast and abrupt, but the mentality of both parties is not very OOC. Sirius is still very paranoid, and Snape is also awkward and dark (a compliment), so the plot of he, which is not really a happy ending, is quite logical, and it is okay to stumble into a good future. When I was watching it, I always thought that Sirius would travel through time a second time, have a real happy ending, and have some more entanglements and misunderstandings with Snape, haha. But it's okay without a second time travel. Be responsible for every step you take, and face up to every right or wrong choice you make. This theme is super awesome, and I have rarely seen it in the fans of he ending. It is really good.

Very nice. Originally, the only CP I was interested in was GGAD, but I did not exclude other CPs. At first, I read it for the plot setting, but there are many emotional lines of Dog Bat in the first 100 chapters, which makes me have to admit that the author not only clearly wrote the setting but also the delicate emotional changes of Dog Bat (no OOC, of ​​course). The last 100 or so chapters focus on improving the plot settings (that is, fighting against Lao Fu), and of course, there are also emotional lines (which are very fragrant). My only regret after reading it is... Not! Have! Fan! Outside! ! ! [Crying] Then some mine clearance (of course I don't have any mine points) 1. James and Lily are still dead (there is a very delicate and strong emotional turning point for Sirius here, the author wrote it very well!!). 2. Regulus is still alive (which is good!). 3. Sri Lanka is still a double agent (the author is too good [admiration]). 4. Peter died during Harry's battle. 5. In the early stage, the future and the present are divided into two lines, and in the later stage, the proportion of the future is smaller. Finally, for such a beautiful article, why is the rating so low? You can't eat tomatoes with fine bran. I originally wanted to see how long I watched it (after all, I watched it at 3 o'clock yesterday). Who knew that Tomato doesn't record when I don't turn on the data... I should have watched it for about 7 hours (after all, I finished it in 2 days).

I vaguely fell in love with this pair when I read another HP fanfic before. It is a perfect confrontation between the young couple. The author's writing style is really good, and I particularly like the emotions in this kind of story (unlike some stories that are all about the relationship between two people). Qing Shui is really innocent, but I think it is very good, and it fits the two characters very well. Then there is some information about this book. Except for the dog bat, the other CPs are all original CPs (it is a pity that there is no ggad). The final ending is not completely perfect (any more will be a spoiler, but I personally can accept the sacrifice for the plot), and then it seems like nothing. Finally, I really have to praise the author's emotional descriptions. There are a few strokes in many places but they are extremely profound! ! The logic lines are also very well connected. The young lovers must live a happy life!

This is the first time I know about the Dogbat CP. I have to say that because of this book, my impression of Sirius has directly changed from negative to positive. Maybe this is the magic of fandom. The character of the professor is well written, and I don't think it is OOC at all. The plot is sweet, sadistic, and sweet, and I personally like it very much. I don't often read books on Tomato, and I have never reviewed them, but the rating of this book makes me a little confused... I think it's a bit too low. The writing, plot, and style are all quite solid. The author's basic skills are very good, and all the foreshadowings he laid are recycled. Flaws are not hidden, I would like to comment a little and hope that I can get back to a score that I think is more normal.

Ahhhh this book is really amazing! Good-looking, good-looking, super good-looking! I swear, I just clicked on it out of boredom, and as soon as I saw it I fell in love with it and stayed up all night to finish it! The emotional line between Sirius and Snape, wow——! The writing is super delicate and touching! It's not the kind of mindless candy 🍬🍬🍬 that made me cover my heart the whole time! The plot design is really amazing! The whole time I was thinking about how the author has such a big brain! How can one write about time travel, tragedy and change in such a logical and logical way and yet touch people's hearts? Especially the part where James and Lily knew the outcome but still chose to sacrifice. It killed me, but it really sublimated the whole book [crying][crying][crying] The author writes very well! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration] The only "disadvantage" is that there are a lot of knives [Crying][Crying][Crying] Remember to prepare tissues.

The characters of Sirius and Snape are well portrayed. Everything that happens when Sirius goes back to the past will have an impact on the following time. I have the desire to continue reading and look forward to the development of the story between Sirius and Snape in the future.

It's good to watch. I didn't understand how Sirius and Severus got into each other before. But now I feel good about it. It turns out that I can watch it as long as there is SS and the plot is not outrageous. In short, the teacher's writing is good [Adoration]

This is the first time I know about this pair of cps, Sirius and Snape? You can really eat anything. But when I read it with suspicion, I was shocked by the author's ingenious conception and delicate writing style. The author writes about two worlds, the past and the future, allowing two people from different times to meet for victory, and allowing two people with flaws to redeem each other. They are each other's old enemies, they hate each other, but they are attracted to each other, and I am caught in this extreme pull, trapped in it, unable to extricate myself. Unfortunately, my writing skills are not good enough to explain my current excitement, but this is the best HP fanfic I have ever seen, bar none.

God among gods! God among gods! ! ! ! I came across such a perfect book! ! ! ! The author's foreshadowing and creativity are so genius, his writing style is also very good, and the whole story is very smooth, making people unable to put it down after reading it. We were both unhappy in the same year, we made the same wrong decisions that led to the departure of the most important person, and we were both willing to endure pain for the sake of protection. Sbss When you quarrel, do you see yourself in each other's eyes? In this story written by the teacher, the relationship between the dog and the bat is so passionate. Our sbss is such a little couple! ! ! It's so perfect, I could read this book a hundred times! ! ! !

So cool! ! ! [Crying] SBSS is like this. Differences in experience will make them go against each other, but the magic of love will eventually bring them together. The young lovers of We Confronted Road will continue to work together towards a happy future [Crying] Once again, I praise the great group portrait. Whether it is the trio or the supporting characters in the original book, they are all running for a peaceful and beautiful world and are even willing to sacrifice their lives. There is also the affection between Black mother and son, and the help between Deya and Deya are super touching! The description of the family generation is really good, whether it is the friendship of the predators, Peter's last trace of regret, and Zhan Li's unhesitating approach to death. (Forgive me for not being very good at boasting, anyway sbss99!!!)