I’m a new writer, and I’ve started a new book to practice. I’d love it if everyone could share plenty of feedback 😘😘
Ice-cold swimming star x sweet, softhearted heiress and painter
Wearing a pretty little dress and clutching her sketchbook, she stood in the corner like a little white rabbit that had wandered into the arena. She didn’t notice the swimmer in the pool suddenly losing his rhythm.
Jiang Yi had remembered her ever since a charity gala three years ago. Beneath the crystal chandeliers, she held a slice of cake and smiled with crescent-shaped eyes, completely unaware of the cream on the tip of her nose. In that moment, no matter how fast he swam, nothing could catch up with his runaway heartbeat.
Now she was a regular at the center. The energy bars she brought were imported, and the towels she handed him were embroidered with delicate patterns, yet whenever he came near, she would blush and shrink away. He deliberately closed her in his arms, water still glistening all over him, and watched her clutch her expensive skirt and mutter, “Don’t get it wet.” His chest rumbled with a low laugh, the vibration reaching her palm. “What are you worried about? If it gets wet, I’ll buy you an entire walk-in closet.”
No one knew how many gaps in this ice-cold swimming star’s training schedule were reserved for “waiting for Su Wan to come.” From that dazzling first glance to his deliberate pursuit, his possessiveness had long since overflowed the pool. He was determined to draw this sweet, softhearted heiress completely into his world.
