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Reader comments
On the whole, the characters are well described. After reading a few chapters, I found that the plot jumps a bit and there is not much connection. I was still doing this one second, and suddenly changed to another scene the next second. In addition, I always took out a lot of equipment without explaining how to obtain it. The background explanation was also very confusing. It would be much better if these things could be solved.
On the whole, the characters are well described. After reading a few chapters, I found that the plot jumps a bit and there is not much connection. I was still doing this one second, and suddenly changed to another scene the next second. In addition, I always took out a lot of equipment without explaining how to obtain it. The background explanation was also very confusing. It would be much better if these things could be solved.
Lots of logical flaws