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A Sour Story About Two Male Protagonists
Sour and sweet, thank you
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Please Read a Sour Article About Two Men's Secret Love! HE! !
Sisters, please read the secret love story, I really like to read the sourness of secret love! But I can't stand BE, so I want the ending to be HE! ! As long as it's sour, don't abuse it! ! Just slightly sour! ! Don't be cruel! ! Don't be cruel! ! Don't abuse 😭
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The plot in the early stage is quite attractive, and I also like the characters. But in the later stage, it is too sloppy, many problems are still unresolved, and the ending is very sudden. I feel that the emotions are not transitioned well at all, giving people a feeling of being rushed. Xu You is still unaware of Jiang Yu's family problems and ears, and there are many pitfalls. Didn't fill it in. The separation was not just due to external reasons, but more because the two people couldn't understand each other. The separation was so decisive that I always feel that we should have a little more control in the later stages. I can only say that the writing skills are insufficient. If you like the character design, you can still check out the early stage. It is really good and I highly recommend it. The above is purely a personal opinion
The emotional line is very smooth, the story of two little bitter gourds redeeming each other. The writing style is lighthearted and funny, but the background is so bitter that it has a touch of sadness The relationship between Xiao Jiang and Xiao Xu develops naturally, and there is nothing particularly shocking about it. They seem to be together in Chapter 40 or 50. They are a sweet couple. Xiao Jiang's inner drama is more interesting, and Xiao Xu's nonsense words of comfort when Xiao Jiang is crying are also very cute. They are always just two cute creatures🥺🥺Let's stay happy. A very young couple, this is so right, teacher! ! ! After a kiss, one of them squatted on the ground and covered their faces, while the other stood and covered their faces, both of them blushing in embarrassment. The teacher is so good at writing. Oh my God, that awkward and ambiguous feeling when we first got together was so cute! ! ! It's so sweet to hold hands quietly in the elevator and then blush and let go after getting out of the elevator😭😭😭❤️❤️❤️🤲🤲🤲
It still looks great so far, and both babies are very cute. Fu Ye and Du Yuan, can you sleep? [Laugh][smile]
Very, very indifferent, I am really stupid, please give our author a lot of wisdom ੭ ᐕ)੭
It's so good. I watched it in school. I cried to death [almost cried] [sending my heart] Second swipe, still looks good [blowing kiss]
It's super nice, but when will they be reconciled? [Cry]
It's great to watch, but I feel like they haven't understood each other yet and why they separated. It was really hard to cry when they separated [almost crying], but the extras were a bit too little [grieved]
Both babies are very cute, you know how sweet the little interactions are❗️❗️❗️