
I Just Woke Up Invincible, and Already Picked Up a Baby
刚醒过来,无敌的我就捡了个娃娃
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 342k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Traditional Eastern Fantasy
- Updated
- 9mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
145Chapters
2Reads
20.2kReads · all time
Reader comments 7
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It's a great book to read when you're short of books. I haven't looked at it much so far, and I've found some flaws. For example, describe the protagonist. The protagonist, a strong man who has lived through countless eras, should have a calm mind. You should not use "If they knew my identity..." "In front of me..." Or compare yourself with others in your mind to highlight yourself. This kind of deliberately ostentatious writing style not only reduces the price like a grandma selling melons, but also shows the greasiness of relying on the old and selling off the old. It deviates from the calm character that "lived for a long time" should have, and makes the so-called "powerful" lose its strong character. I hope that I can write better and better in the future, and try to avoid this kind of "self-promotion" type of description, come on.
Hey, you can rate yourself
Non-toxic, but bland
I eat this book written by a poet
It's quite beautiful. It's suitable for leisure time, but there aren't many people 😂
OK, very nice
It's well written, but it's not suitable for me. I don't really like reading this type of novel.