The White-Haired Haki Who Was Reincarnated as a Ghoul

I generally don't give low scores, mainly because low scores may have an impact on the author. Then let's talk about this book. It seems that there are a lot of problems. First of all, the basic logic of the time-travel novel is quite confusing, that is, whether you are familiar with the plot (of course, Tomato fan fiction is a big problem, and most of it is inconsistent). You can feel this after reading dozens of chapters. Second, the timeline and logic line of this book are quite different from the original work. Of course, there will be differences due to the butterfly effect brought by the protagonist, but the author does not control this balance very well. Therefore, it seems that there is a sense of distortion that often relies on the original work to supplement the settings, but there is an obvious conflict with the original work. Third, this book is extremely original, but this originality often cannot be well integrated into the original worldview, which creates a situation where the book is stuck in an awkward position between "borrowing the worldview to write a good story that I want to write" and "following the original main line and developing a fanfic with a slightly different if line (following the trend)". Of course, this book also has its advantages. The quality of ghoul fanfiction on Tomato is generally not good. In comparison, this book is relatively good. The author is very thoughtful and the writing style is not that outrageous (but having said that, the average quality of the book has dropped significantly after dozens of chapters. Is it because the author is usually busy?). If you want to read ghoul fanfiction on Tomato, this book is a good choice. I hope the author will work hard and write better and better.

The author is very good at writing. Every step the protagonist makes in the Qingtong tree, the plot is a bit like a matryoshka doll. However, the author's own description, portrayal of the protagonist, and plot characterization do not disgust me. Instead, it is this kind of writing that looks like a matryoshka doll that left a great impression on me [Chigua][Chigua]

It still feels very good, except that it is a little bit small, and the senses are OK

It's good to watch, the only drawback is that I haven't watched Tokyo Ghoul [Blowing Kisses]

It looks good, but it's a bit lacking. Come on!

It's a good book with good grammar

As soon as I saw it, I fell in love with you [Adoration]

I'm currently at Chapter 20. It would be great if it can stay like this in the future [Like]

The thinking logic is very strong, and the character plot lines are well written. I admire you for being able to write such a good book!

Not bad, not as good as others, but still good

This novel is well written, the emotions are well controlled, and it touches the readers' hearts very much.

A pretty good Tokyo foodie novel

The content is pretty good, quite interesting and lively, really good!

It's a well-written novel, especially the protagonist's psychological journey as he grows up. It's just that at the end, it felt like the pace was a little faster and a little rushed. But you can still watch it.

It's a very good novel, with a strong visual sense, and I was drawn into it unconsciously.

The details are described very carefully, and the foreshadowing is also very good and very logical.

This book is one of the few with clear logical thinking, vivid characters, and rigorous storyline.

It is really rare that I finally met my "ideal type". It is not the subject matter, but the writing method, the emotion, but the theme.

Good book, the overall text is smooth and the plot is not draggy

The content is interesting, the characters are full of personality, it doesn't drag out, and the pace is just right. It's a very good book.

To be honest, I really like this book, and I find it very interesting. I just found this book yesterday, and I finished reading it today, and I still feel a little unfinished.

It's very interesting. I really like this book.

It's super interesting. I didn't skip every chapter. I read it carefully. It's really exciting.

The sense of immersion is very strong. Big thumbs up. A rare good book.

The author's portrayal is meticulous and has a strong ability to control the environment and story.

Very good, just a little bit lacking