Dawu Yunhua

The author's writing is very good, I think it's very interesting, and the heroine doesn't have a virgin. I read in the comments section that the heroine, a virgin, etc. Were mentioned before. I suggest you go back and read it again. The plot may have been mixed up. The author will update it well. Don't be fooled. Write well. As long as you don't stretch your legs, you will definitely follow it to the end and try to write a longer one. The subject matter is very good.

The plot of the novel is novel and refined. After reading novels such as time travel and rebirth for a long time, they are all similar. But this article by the author made me feel very special. The heroine is decisive in her work and not sloppy. I like this kind of novel very much. When I read it at the end, I found out that it was still being updated, and I became a fan of updates again! Alas, the meaning is still not over

This book struck a chord with me, that is, the women in it all seem to be abnormal, Qu Huan, she is trying to save herself even though the method is not right, Qu Mu, she does not believe that her daughter trusts her son-in-law, Tang Xiaoyan, a surgical backbone, but she is in love, Chunxiao, the love brain is PUA and then wants to be rescued by the heroine, Sister Zhou, she is snobbish at first and then backs off and wants to choose the heroine, including the people she meets in the family home, the heroine can help them [laughing and crying], the essence of interpersonal communication is the exchange of interests, right?

The ups and downs, especially the life experience of the third child, the characters of the supporting characters are well portrayed. It is not a universal "big picture". Everyone has their own "private desires", which has nothing to do with family, friendship, or love. The most amazing thing is that the heroine's strength can be described with specific examples instead of simply "the heroine is very beautiful and very strong." Keep up the good work. I don't understand what the author's purpose is in sending them to another world... I'm following the update again and the content is boring. I can't stand it any longer... Is there some fairy factor? I didn't look carefully. Isn't it that you teleport to each different world to "adventure" and then finally return to the wizarding world?

It's very beautiful. I really like the heroine's setting. I'm a bit speechless when I reach 70, but she gathers her souls to open up a new world [like] It's better if the heroine is a witch without cp, although the relationship between the male protagonist and her is very beautiful! I feel good about donating medicine and seeing a doctor. I was a little impatient to watch the sideline criminal investigation.

It's so beautiful, it's my type, the heroine is strong

The rating is low, and the writing style of some lame and cliché plots is also very average. It's only 9 points. It's just over 7 points. It seems that I will look for books with a 7 points or more rating in the future. I look forward to the update. The heroine's ability is simply a dimensionality reduction blow in this ordinary world. It's cool and that's it! Moreover, the relationship between characters and causes and effects written so far are handled very well. Please update it as soon as possible! ! !

Can there be less character descriptions? Every time a man or woman appears, they should be described in large lengths. The first appearance should be described solemnly. There is no need to repeat the description every time. The other content is still good.

The story line is clear and compact. Very beautiful, worth pursuing

It's pretty cool. Why is it rated so low? So far, the writing is fluent, the plot is not sluggish, and it is not over the top.

It's beautiful. I like the heroine 😜 Please update soon. I want to see the male protagonist's second sister remarry. When I got pregnant and had a baby, I was so angry with my ex-husband that he couldn't give birth🤣

Well! ! I just want to know what happened to Qu Huanhuan in the end. . . . People watching are waiting for heaven and earth, and they can't see it... (I feel that Huai'an can buy so many gifts that even soldiers can't buy. He must be doing illegal things. The Qu family was deceived by lard... And then? I want to know what happened to everyone in the ending...)

Hey, period is good, fantasy is better, but more is not enough.

The content is very good and the writing is good, very good.

A time-travel drama that travels back to the modern era, the writing is mature and delicate, and ordinary fireworks life has spiritual power and the ability to transcend reality. . . Everyone has their own preferences for radishes and vegetables, so you can read this book. [Like][Like][Like]

I have read Chapter 50 so far, and I think it's very good. I don't comment on Qu Huan's cowardice, which is very selfish. He should be his own backer, not expect others. Author✍️Come on!

Not bad! Compared to other novels, this one is worth reading!

It's good to read. It's very novel for those who read books without thinking and are accustomed to reading literature from other eras. I like it.

It's too mysterious! I love metaphysics! The plot is compact and exciting, so beautiful!

It looks good, it looks good, the article is good, and the writing is smooth.

Better than what I've seen

[Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Flying kiss][Flying kiss][Flying kiss][Flying kiss] Super super beautiful

It looks good, but it has some ink stains.

It was okay after watching a little bit, but could the plot develop a little faster?

It's very exciting, but there are too few updated chapters. Can there be more?

It looks good. I hope the author will work harder and finish it as soon as possible. I'm afraid that if I finish all the chapters in one go, I'll abandon the article again if I haven't finished it for too long. Come on💪

There are very few good ones, so I finished them in a while. Not enough!

It's so beautiful. Why is the score so low? I cried several times. It's so well written.

It's very interesting, I hope the author will stick with it✊I really want to continue reading Yunhua's story

The storyline is novel and interesting. The story is logically logical and the writing is fluent. Good luck to the author! [Love]