The Loan-Born Prodigy

Xiaowan's product must be a high-quality product, not a cool novel, but with profound meaning and novel setting. The world view is very interesting (has the protagonist traveled through time or not?) The details are in place, the characterization is very successful, each character has his own personality, and the interactions are very natural. It's just that the updates are a bit slow.

The high-tech cyberpunk world of cultivating immortals is particularly brilliant, integrating settings such as cultivating immortals, spiritual root transplantation, AI computing power, consciousness transfer, black walls, and immortal cultivating simulators. There are a lot of foreshadowings in the early stage, the writing is solid, and the ideas are quite innovative. After the foreshadowing was recovered one after another, explosive points emerged one after another, and the plot gradually got better. (The update has been stable recently. I think it has no routine and involves a bit of science fiction content. The previous part feels more like foreshadowing. In other words, as the story progresses, the author completely lets go of his imagination and writes more freely. The good writing also stabilizes the direction of the plot. It can be seen that there is a complete outline. Overall good.)

The writing is very detailed, the writing style is very solid, and the plot is very high-level. It is less like fantasy and more like early science fiction novels. But there are also problems. It is too detailed and too dense. There are too many expanded contents written in one scene, which makes the pace very slow and the plot difficult to advance. In short, it is not enjoyable. In this fast-paced environment of online writing, it may be difficult for readers to follow the updates (it takes too much reading from readers, and it is not for beginners at all). But the writing is definitely okay, and I am afraid the market response will not be so good. I feel a bit sorry for the author's many intentions and little ingenuity. He deserves more.

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Xiaowan's level is as good as ever, and it's a very interesting cybernetic cultivation. I hope the plot pace of this book can be a little faster. I believe that quickly advancing the worldview can retain more readers.

As expected of Sister Wan, the writing is really good. There is not a wordy word. After dozens of chapters, the plot is quickly advanced, all the characters are established, and the world view is quickly described. It is very interesting and fascinating, and the writing is strong.

It's quite interesting, with contrasts and humor, and the plot is a bit slow. I just came out of the hospital after catching up in one breath.

I have finished reading more than 100 chapters. So far, the plot is good and the logic is okay. There is not much game content but it can switch with real scenes naturally. If the whole book is of this level, it will be considered a high-quality novel in this category. It means that all the foreshadowings in the early stage have been collected. Digging holes is fun, but if you only dig holes and don't bury them, readers will vote with their feet.

The setting is novel, the writing is solid, the thoughts are deep, the characterization is acceptable, the plot is reasonable, the Riddler level is a bit high, and I haven't felt satisfied after reading many chapters, and it tends to be highbrow and low-key, but overall it is a novel that I like very much, and I recommend it to book lovers who have read enough of Shuangbai.

Among them, the most famous one is that if you don't have money, you can become an immortal at a certain point. Tomato also has several books of this nature that borrow money from the exploiting class to cultivate immortality. This kind of literary style stories are quite attractive. This book can also be considered as a topic. One loan is a genius and a millionaire is a loser.