After I Was Reborn, All the School Belles Fell for the Male Supporting Character

This book succeeds on the emotional line and fails on the emotional line. Ding Minglang's character portrayal is excellent, flesh and blood, and very charming as the protagonist, but the problem is that he is a "single soul" trapped in a young body. He behaves like an adult, but his attitude towards relationships is too hesitant and confusing, and some scenes have even turned into a teenager's mentality. Yu Roushu is another evolution of Xiaoban's character design. This character is story-telling, controversial and changeable. Once again, however, this character may be more suitable in a female-channeled novel. Putting it in a male-channeled novel may easily offend readers. There is also a problem with the weight of the description of daily life - love - entrepreneurship. The current plot design is only mediocre. The score as low as seven points basically shows that "The Male Supporting Man" has a huge possibility of being a hit. I think the only remedy is to change the genre to a beast genre, learn from Chen Hansheng, recruit more female protagonists, redesign the narrative rhythm, and maybe get better reader feedback. Four stars to three stars, Xiaoban, what are you writing...

This book has been followed up to the latest chapter, and overall it is still very good, especially after the beginning of college life. The writing in the previous high school summer vacation was not very good. The foreshadowing in the first chapter destined Shen Yueya to be a very controversial character (it would even lower the rating, which is a very common plot of a goddess chasing after her). The good brother who confessed his love in the early stage gradually fell in love with the protagonist. I feel that the main function is to set off the protagonist's personal charm. This is not a flattering way of writing. If we want to make a breakthrough later, we can use the plot to enrich Shen Yueya's specific image. The college plot is still very good so far, and the pace is suitable. Come on, author!

Objectively speaking, the content is not very good-looking, but the character creation is really good, and the character background description is quite realistic. Although some novels are dramatic, the small characters in it exactly reflect the difficulties of ordinary people. The most important thing that gives me five stars is that I see my own shadow, which is mediocre. I try hard to achieve something but it all comes to nothing. The protagonist's success is the idealization of what I want, whether it's emotionally or career-wise. I admire it but can't make much change. The social teacher stepped on me mercilessly.

People with good character deserve better people...

It looks good. I hope the author can make the male protagonist not have so many emotional lines. If it doesn't work, it won't work. Don't engage in ambiguity. I read one before and it was okay. But the author always said it was a single female protagonist, and then he had an affair with another woman and it turned into a harem story.

It's been five years since 83. The first time I saw 83, I was reading comics at Station B. It was in the middle of 22 years, and now it's the middle of 25 years. It's really sad. . . . . .

The style has changed a lot. The previous books had basically the same style. At first I thought this one was written by a different person. A low score is normal. It feels a bit suffocating in the early stage, but it's not painful or itchy. But the biggest change is that the male protagonist is finally starting a harem [laughter]

I've been reading it since the first one, and I still like half of the writing very much. I don't know why I stopped updating, which is quite a pity. I just read the latest dozen chapters, and I haven't been so emotionally aroused for a long time. It's like watching an idol drama. When I reacted, I realized that I had been clenching my fists. Hahahahaha, I was so fascinated. I hope half of it can be adjusted and updated. [Sending Hearts]

People long for redemption, thus shaping suffering. Conflict is the background of the article. Personally, I think the low score is related to Xiaoyu's suffering character. Redemption is beautiful, but suffering is ultimately pessimistic. I read novels to relax and hope that Up will get better and better.

I don't quite understand why the score is so low. I think the plot so far is running smoothly and there is nothing embarrassing or slap-in-the-face plot. The writing is delicate, each person has his or her own characteristics, the characters have distinct personalities, and the emotions and plot are advanced in each text. The five-star praise is well deserved. Come on, the author, and write well.