Being First************

From now on, this is a novel that has great potential and can be invested in for a long time. The subject matter is relatively common, but the content is very novel. There are mistakes in the writing, the writing style is a little rusty, and there is a lot of room for suggestions. The author's efforts in creation and interesting character can also be seen in the article, and the readers' opinions will also be taken into consideration. I hope that the author will not collapse in three aspects, the plot will not collapse, the combat power will not collapse, and the emotional character will not collapse. I will give you praise. By the way, be careful with Shen He, Tomato has been strict with Bai Hou recently. (ง •̀_•́)งCome on (I'm exhausted from typing like this)

It looks good so far, but there is one more thing to say, because there are many books of this type. However, there are very few stories where the inner drama of the protagonist is particularly delicate. At present, it seems that this is one of those rare genres. But there is a suggestion. The protagonist was a boy in his previous life. Moreover, he is now an adult and has entered the society, and he still grew up in an orphanage, but his heart should be stronger. The article keeps talking about how the protagonist wants to cry, how he wants to cry, this place is very fragmented, and there is a feeling of left brain and right brain fighting. It feels that the protagonist's previous life was in vain, so I hope to deal with this part better. (No malicious intent, just suggestions)

I have seen a lot of similar Blood Rider imitations on blb and many other platforms. In contrast, the author has written his own characteristics and did not apply the usual routines. The characters' personalities are very distinct, and there is almost no overlapping of characters like other (most Blood Riding style) characters. It's a pity that Tomato doesn't promote this kind of article. If the one next door is at least an A-listed article, you must stick to it. Really good! ! !

Personally, I think the plot is okay, but the mentality changes at the beginning is a bit fast. Is the main palace the sister? I hope the author will spend more time writing about relationships and not be too quick. Let the protagonist make his own choice instead of everyone else competing for it. The protagonist should not casually promise things like relationships. He should respect and understand everyone's thoughts and concerns before making a choice.

The subject matter and concept are good, the emotional description is very delicate, the overall framework is quite complete, and it is very friendly to those who like to make white stickers. However, the combat power and some racial settings have not been clearly introduced at present. Some details are a bit uncomfortable to watch logically, and the settings may be a bit incomplete. Also, the protagonist is very kind so far. I think it is a bit silly. Some people may not be able to accept it. In short, the book is not bad. Maybe I am a bit picky, but I still support the author's [blowing kiss]. I hope to introduce the combat power and setting. It's more comfortable to watch without thinking. Anyway, I feel a little uncomfortable watching it. Try it for yourself [smile]

So far, there are no major negative points. Although there are some small details that are still not handled well, considering that the author has updated the content and it does not affect the viewing experience, I still give it a five-star review. There are many plots and it is very enjoyable to watch.

If you want to read Blood Tribe after Chapter 10, the book will be slow-paced and daily, with no patience for lightning protection. Linn was a bit weird at the beginning, but I can't tell. Blood Tribe has a psychological transition period, which is not too long. If you mind, you can not read it, but you will miss the post. On Tomato's Blood Tribe, it is an okay book (personal opinion above)

It's quite good-looking, similar to the Blood Princess book, but very different from that one. That book is pure fighting blood, and there is no daily experience. Bai Ji is interesting for the first time. This book has more daily posts, but she accepts her identity too quickly.

Generally speaking, vampire novels that are relatively good-looking, although the writing style is a bit green, but as long as it is updated continuously, five or six chapters a day, readers will automatically ignore this small flaw. I hope the author will continue to write this novel, after all, it is really good-looking. [Send heart][Send heart]

After reading the first few chapters, as a new author, Da Da's writing style is relatively good. However, the past few chapters have repeatedly mentioned the protagonist's past of growing up in an orphanage, which made me a little confused: is this a foreshadowing, or does it mean that characters from the orphanage will appear later. In addition, although there is a lot of psychological description in the book, I feel that it does not reflect the reaction and growth that the protagonist should have when he travels to a different world. Finally, I feel that the author's way of advancing the plot is a bit rigid and there are some logical problems. However, this book still has great potential. Come on [like][like][like] I have been reading the book for a while, but I didn't expect it to be updated so much. [Like][Like][Like] It's very worthy of recognition, but when I watched the main character's arena match, I felt that the opponents were a little bit intimidated, and it felt a bit fake. Normally, you should be wary when encountering opponents with a winning streak, and even investigate the background of your opponents in advance, but the protagonist's opponents felt that they were purely based on the word count, so it looked a bit strange. Finally, I hope you will post more welfare posts and enjoy watching the protagonist's shy scenes. [Laughing][laughing][laughing]

It's beautiful, highly recommended. This is my best Lily harem story. Good luck to the author [love] [laughs]

Maybe I am a wild boar who can't eat fine chaff [rolls eyes] I obviously like the subject matter, but I just find it awkward to read [facepalm] I haven't understood it since Chapter 5, but I can't read it. But I think the writing is pretty good, but I don't like it [grievance] Leave a 5-star review to support the author [love] [love] [love]

Good luck to the author, the writing is very good. I really like this kind of daily novel. That's why there are so many commas in the later chapters. The reading feels intermittent and it affects the perception [I'm about to cry]

It's similar to " and ", but different from Naduo's personality, so you can eat it with confidence.

OK OK! It's a good thing [sending heartfelt wishes]

The noble horse allows you to stay away from pain, the kind dog allows you to refuse death, the galloping rabbit allows you to transcend time, the sacred dragon allows you to fear nothing, the strong cow allows you to climb mountains, the free chicken allows you to fly into the sky and embrace the moon, and the naive pig lets you Your electric eyes are powerful, the cunning rat allows you to make falsehoods come true, the shadowy snake allows you to be everywhere, the majestic tiger allows you to distinguish between good and evil, the mysterious sheep allows you to see through illusions, and the sensitive monkey allows you to be ever-changing. I don't lack anything now!

Now I have re-read it and completed the details, but it still has a great impact on me. On the one hand, the change in the protagonist's personality actually quite pricked me, from fear at the beginning, to weakness, to paranoia, and finally to the tenderness that protects everyone's love. These are the transformation of the protagonist from "protected" to "guardian" On the other hand, it is their mutual affection. Their unilateral protection of the protagonist gradually turns into the protagonist and their mutual dependence. This should be the most shocking to me. Finally, I still want to ask for some details: 1. Did Serena finally come out of that dimension? 2. Did the protagonist's key mark and the power it contained disappear the moment he defeated the ancient god? I am still re-reading and adding details, and of course, I am also secretly planning something... (Hehehehe)

It looks good. Please remember to write something subtle about the plot of the post [laughing] I still need to practice my writing. There will be situations where the left and right brains are fighting each other.

Tribute to the legendary Wang Tianhui(●'◡'●)ﾉ♥

I still like the scene with Sister Lao. I will give 5 stars again when Sister Lao wins one day🤓

It's very interesting to watch. I suggest you read it again from Chapter 10. Gotta eat good books😋😋😋

I want to see more good things, but I'm afraid of being locked up in a dark room

It's so beautiful. I highly recommend everyone to take a look.

Take a look first, if it looks good then change the review [grievance]

There are a lot of posts, and the psychological changes of the protagonist are described very delicately, and the updates are very fast, but no one TT

I guarantee with my time that the author's writing style and enthusiasm for coding are worthy of five stars. The author is very active and eager to interact.

Come on! [Learned] Beautifully written

The writing style is not mature enough, but it is my favorite subject matter, straightforward🖐🏻

Good-looking, good-looking [laughing] Tie Tie Meow

Come on, author, believe in yourself